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The Dance of Hope
Khandujapurvi
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Submitted to Contest #1 in response to the prompt: 'Write a story about an underdog chasing an impossible dream. '

The scar on Roshni’s face had faded from angry red to a pale line, but for her, it still burned every single day.
It started near her left eye and curved down her cheek like a reminder of everything she had lost.
She tried to hide it with her scarf or hair, but she always felt the weight of eyes staring, whispers trailing behind her like shadows.

Now, she sat on the dusty pavement of a crowded city street, her small, trembling hands holding out a rusted tin bowl.
Coins clinked lazily into it, falling from hands that didn’t dare meet her eyes. They gave out of discomfort, out of guilt — never kindness.
The other children around her shouted, pulled at strangers’ sleeves, whined and begged. Roshni never needed to.
Her scar did the work. Her silence spoke louder than any request.

But when night fell and the cruel men who controlled them stopped shouting, when the city’s noise melted into silence,
Roshni sat alone in a corner of their cramped, filthy shelter. There, in the pale glow of the moon, she would dance.

Her bare feet slid lightly on the cold, cracked floor. Her arms moved slowly through the air, graceful and free.
She closed her eyes, and for those few moments, she was not a prisoner, not a beggar. She was the girl from the village,
dancing under open skies, with soft mud beneath her feet and wind in her hair.

She would see it all so clearly in her mind; her mother smiling as she cooked on the clay stove, calling her to taste the sweet jaggery.
The village fields stretching wide with golden crops swaying gently. The mango tree where she’d sit with Sheru, her stray dog, who followed her everywhere, always wagging his tail.

She loved dancing even then. During festivals, she’d stand at the edge of the gathering,
watching the older girls twirl and clap in rhythm, secretly copying their steps when no one was looking.
Her mother would laugh softly, "One day, Roshni, you will dance on big stages. Maybe even on television."
Roshni would blush and shake her head, but her heart would flutter with hope.

But that hope shattered the day he came.

They called him Chacha. A family friend. Someone her mother trusted.
He’d often visit, bringing sweets and kind words.
That day, he came with an exciting promise. "Roshni, come with me. I’ll take you to the fair. There are lights, dolls, and dancers!
You love dancing, don’t you?"

Her heart skipped. She had never been to a real fair. She looked at her mother.
Her mother nodded gently. "Go, beta. But stay close."

Roshni never returned.

She remembered the cart ride, the excitement in her chest, the colours of the fair in the distance —
and then darkness. The sharp smell of something strange, a cloth pressed to her mouth.
When she woke up, the world was cold, dirty, unfamiliar. Strange men barked orders. Other children sat in corners, their faces hollow.
One man struck her for crying. The slap left more than bruises. It left the scar.

For two years, that became her life.

She was forced to beg on streets, moved from city to city like an object.
Food was scarce. Warmth was a memory. Hope felt foolish. But still, she danced in the shadows.
It was her rebellion. Her secret. Her dream refusing to die.

Then came the night everything changed.

They were sleeping in a cramped room when loud banging woke them. Shouts, sirens, running footsteps.
Children screamed in fear. The gang leaders tried to flee.
Strong arms grabbed Roshni. She fought, terrified.

A kind voice spoke. "You’re safe. You’re safe now."

She was taken to a shelter home.

There, she had a bed. Clean sheets. Warm food. But also emptiness.
She often sat by the window, staring at the rain. She wondered if her mother ever searched for her.
Did she call out her name in the flooded streets? Did Sheru wait at the door, tail wagging, ears alert?

One day, a counselor sat with her gently.

"Roshni... we tried to find your family. Your village... was destroyed in the flood. There were very few survivors."

The words fell like stones. She nodded, but her heart crumbled.

That night, she didn’t dance. She cried into her pillow, muffling her sobs. She felt alone in a world that had forgotten her.

Days turned into weeks. Slowly, she began to adjust. The shelter home was kind.
There were other girls — some broken, some healing. They played, studied, laughed. Roshni stayed quiet.
But in the privacy of her room, she began to dance again.

She didn’t have music. But she had memory.
She danced softly, gracefully. The movements reminded her of who she used to be.
It hurt, but it also healed.

One afternoon, during a small celebration at the shelter, they encouraged the girls to showcase talents.
Roshni shrank back. But a younger girl tugged at her hand, whispering, "I’ve seen you dance at night. You’re beautiful."

With trembling steps, she stood on the little stage. She kept her scarf draped over her face, hiding the scar.
The music began, soft and slow. Her feet moved on instinct, arms flowing like water. For a few minutes,
the room disappeared. She was once again that girl dancing in the village field, her mother clapping along.

When the music stopped, there was silence. Then, gentle applause.

In the back of the room, a woman sat watching with tears in her eyes. She was a visitor from the city’s cultural society.
She approached Roshni afterward.

"Who taught you to dance?"

Roshni looked down. "No one. I just... remember."

The woman smiled. "You have a gift. Would you like to learn more? To train?"

Roshni hesitated. Her heart ached with fear and excitement. "I... I can’t. I’m not good enough. And my face..."

The woman gently lifted Roshni’s chin. "Your face tells a story. Your dance tells hope. If you’re willing, I’ll sponsor your classes."

For the first time in years, Roshni allowed herself to dream again.

She joined the academy. It wasn’t easy.
The other girls came from good homes, wore bright costumes, and spoke with confidence.
Roshni stayed quiet. She often danced with her scarf, hiding her scar. She felt small, out of place.
But the teachers noticed her grace, her expression, her dedication.

She practiced for hours. Her feet ached. Her body grew stronger.
Slowly, her movements became sharper, more refined.

One day, the academy announced a competition.

Roshni wanted to hide. But her mentor took her aside.
"You dance beautifully, Roshni. But you can’t keep hiding. Your story is powerful. Show them your strength."

The night of the competition arrived. Backstage, her hands trembled as she adjusted her costume.
She reached for her scarf — then paused.

She looked in the mirror. The scar was still there.
But so was she.

She took a deep breath and stepped onto the stage without the scarf.

The spotlight warmed her face. For a moment, she wanted to run. But then the music began.
Her body moved with grace and power. She twirled, arms flowing, feet tapping to rhythms older than pain.
Her face lifted proudly. The scar caught the light — and shone.

When the music ended, the hall was silent. Then applause erupted.

Tears streamed down her face as she bowed. She had danced not to hide, but to heal.
And the world had seen her — all of her.

After that night, doors opened.
Performances, scholarships, interviews.

Years later, standing on a grand stage, she looked out at the sea of faces.
The bright lights made her scar shimmer.

She smiled.

After the show, she travelled back to the village. Or what was left of it.
The flood had taken everything, but in a quiet corner, she placed flowers for her mother.
She whispered, "Ma, Your Roshni made it. You were right. I danced."

Near the ruins, a small stray puppy wagged its tail. Roshni knelt, petting it gently.
"I think you’re coming with me," she said softly, tears in her eyes.

That night, with the little dog curled beside her, she dreamed of dancing — not for survival, not for escape, but for joy.

Her scar remained. But it no longer hurt.

It told her story.

And she danced forward, proud, unafraid, unstoppable.


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