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A WORLD WITHOUT COLOR
Samudralaroopamba
MYSTERY
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Submitted to Contest #2 in response to the prompt: 'Write a story about your character finding a mysterious message hidden in an old book.'

Ava, a determined 11-year-old high school student with silky hair and bright blue eyes, stood tall. She loved sports, especially athletics.

She also loved doing art and crafts with her grandmother. Rohan, Ava's younger brother, was a bright and energetic boy with a heart of gold.

He loved helping others, whether it was assisting their neighbors or surprising their family with small gestures. However, his constant meddling and teasing often drove Ava crazy, testing the limits of their sibling bond.

Ava walked into her art and craft class, eager to unleash her creativity. Her teacher, Mrs. Jenkins, approached her with a smile. "Ava, I think you have tremendous potential. Would you like to participate in the upcoming art competition?" Ava's heart skipped a beat. She nodded enthusiastically. "Yes, I'd love to!"

The next day, Ava stood confidently beside her artwork, titled "A World of Color." The competition hall buzzed with talented students, each showcasing their masterpieces. Ava's nerves began to settle as she saw Rohan and her grandmother in the audience, smiling with support.
The day of the results finally arrived, and the school assembly hall murmured with excitement.

Ava's heart skipped a beat as the principal announced the winner of the art competition. "And the first prize goes to... Ava!" Overjoyed, Ava made her way to the stage, where she proudly accepted her award. Her eyes scanned the crowd, locking onto Rohan's glowing smile.
After school, Ava rushed to her grandmother's home, prize in hand. "Grandma, I did it!" she exclaimed, handing her the trophy. "I couldn't have done it without you. Thank you!" Her grandmother's face lit up with a warm smile. "You deserve it, sweetie. I'm so proud of you!" She wrapped Ava in a tight hug, holding her close. Rohan, who had tagged along, chimed in, "I knew you'd win, sis! You're the best artist ever!" Ava grinned, feeling grateful for her supportive family.

Ava woke up to a dull, gray world. Her room, once vibrant and full of life, was now drained of color. She rushed to the mirror, and her reflection stared back, equally colorless. Panicked, Ava hurried downstairs, only to find the rest of her family and the world around her had also lost their vibrancy. The dull streets, now monochrome, seemed to stretch on endlessly as Ava walked to school. The usually lively classrooms felt dull and lifeless.

After school, Ava rushed to the library, determined to find answers. She searched the internet, pored over books, and consulted with experts, desperate to understand why the world had lost colour.

After many months, her grandmother passed away. When Ava heard the news, she rushed to her grandmother's home, overcome with grief. She went to the art room, where loved memories of her grandmother flooded her senses. Ava would often visit her grandmother's home after her passing, and tears would flow daily as she struggled to deal with the loss.

One day, while browsing through the shelves, Ava stumbled upon an unusual book tucked away on the top. Curious, she fetched a ladder and carefully retrieved the book. But as she did, the surrounding books suddenly shifted, causing Ava to lose her balance and tumble to the floor. Rohan rushed to Ava's side. "Ava, are you okay?" he exclaimed, concern etched on his face. He quickly sprinkled water on her face, trying to revive her. Ava slowly opened her eyes, confused but grateful for Rohan's timely assistance.

Rohan's curiosity got the better of him, and he turned to Ava with a question. "Ava, why is there a room behind the cupboard?" he asked, his eyes sparkling with wonder. Ava's gaze followed Rohan's, and she sat up straight, her interest piqued. Together, they made their way to the hidden room. As they stepped inside, they were surprised to find it spotlessly clean, as if someone had been maintaining it daily. Ava stumbled upon a mysterious large box and, curious, she opened it to find a paint box inside.
Shocked by what she saw, she quickly called Rohan, her voice trembling. Upon arrival, Rohan's anxious expression turned to awe as Ava revealed the paint box, saying "The colors are alive with color." His eyes wide with wonder, Rohan whispered, "How is this possible?" Ava shook her head, equally furious, replying "I have no idea."

Ava and Rohan delved deeper into the mysterious box, discovering a worn leather book. Its cover was plain, with no title or markings.Curiosity got the better of them, and they opened it together. The first page read: "If the world is colorless..." Ava's eyes met Rohan's, filled with fascination. They turned the pages, revealing mysterious messages and artworks.The book spoke of a world drained of color, and the consequences that followed. Determined to understand, Ava and Rohan poured over the book. Hours passed, and the sun dipped below the horizon. As they turned the pages, the mysteries revealed, and the secrets began to reveal themselves. Ava and Rohan devoured chapter after chapter, their minds racing with wonder. A sense of clarity and purpose settled over Ava and Rohan as they closed the mysterious book. They exchanged a determination look, their minds aligned. "We have a mission," Ava declared, her voice filled with determination. "To restore color to the world," Rohan added, his eyes burning with confidence. Together, they stood up, ready to embark on their risky adventure.
In that box, they found a map revealing another map. Ava and Rohan exchanged surprised glances. "How can we get there?" Rohan asked, concern marked on his face. "Our parents won't let us go to our friends' house, not to mention
this mysterious place." Ava's eyes sparkled with determination.

"First, we need to figure out where this location is." Ava pulled out her laptop and began typing away, searching for any clues about the mysterious map. Rohan leaned over her shoulder, watching as she navigated through ancient geography websites and mysterious symbol files. Rohan's eyebrow furrowed, his concern deepening. "Ava, what if this is trouble? What if we're putting ourselves in danger?" Ava's eyes locked onto his, her determination responding. Suddenly, Ava's laptop beeped, a search result popping up. "Rohan, look!" she exclaimed. The screen revealed an image of the same map, dated centuries ago. "Alright, we have the location," Ava said, her eyes shining with excitement. "Now, how do we get there?" Rohan rubbed his chín thoughtfully. "Ava, however, Mom and Dad won't let us go." Rohan said, "Then what should we do?" Ava said, "I have a friend in my class named Sophie. She's my best friend. She travels to so many weird and beautiful places. Why don't we ask her for help?"

Rohan's eyes lit up. "That's genius, Aval Sophie sounds like just the person we need. Does she have experience with, you know, ancient forests?" Ava grinned. "Sophie's been to some pretty weird places, trust me. She'll know what to do. Let's go talk to her." Ava pulled out her phone and texted Sophie: "Hey, need your help! Rohan and I found something big. Can we meet up?" Sophie responded quickly: "OMG, what's going on? Meet me at the park at 3 pm. Come prepared for an adventure!" Rohan raised an eyebrow. "Sounds like Sophie's already on board. What do you think she'll suggest?" Ava shrugged. "No idea, but with Sophie, it's always an adventure." Rohan raised an eyebrow. "Sounds like Sophie's already on board. What do you think she'll suggest?" Ava shrugged. "No idea, but with Sophie, it's always an adventure."
Sophie hesitated. "Sorry, guys, I can't." Rohan's face fell. "Why?" "ו can't do this alone," Sophie admitted. "I want you both by my side." Rohan explained, "That's why we asked you. We can't do it ourselves." Ava and Rohan pleaded with Sophie until finally, she agreed to go. Sophie hesitated. "Sorry, guys, I can't." Rohan's face fell. "Why?" "ו can't do this alone," Sophie admitted. "I want you both by my side." Rohan explained, "That's why we asked you. We can't do it ourselves." Ava and Rohan pleaded with Sophie until finally, she agreed to go. Rohan offered Ava a reassuring hug. "We'll be okay, Ava. Sophie's strong." To distract Ava from her concerns, Rohan suggested, "Hey, want to play some video games with me?"

Ava called Sophie after a few hours. Sophie answered the call. "Where are you?" Ava asked. "I'm on my way, in an airplane," Sophie replied happily. Ava then requested, "Can you send me your live location?" Sophie, curious, asked "Why?" Ava calmed her, "No reason, just want to see where you are." Sophie agreed and, noticing something unusual, asked, "Ava, is this map leading to an island?" Ava confirmed, "Yes." With that, Sophie said "Okay, then. Bye" and Ava replied, "Bye." After a few days, Sophie reached the island, but she didn't know its name. She followed the map Ava had given her. She stayed in a hotel near the beach overlooking the sea. Sophie wished Ava and Rohan were by her side.

After a few days, Sophie reached the island, but she didn't know its name. She followed the map Ava had given her. She stayed in a hotel near the beach overlooking the sea. Sophie wished Ava and Rohan were by her side.

As Sophie navigated the mysterious forest, the darkness made it impossible to find the X marked on her map. Exhaustion drained her down, and the late hour - 12 am -only made her sleepier. With no place to rest, she leaned against a large tree, closing her eyes. Suddenly, footsteps resounded through the forest, and Sophie's eyes opened. Two figures clad in black coats, their faces blocked, stood before her. Sophie stood up, her heart racing, and demanded, "Who are you?" A girl replied, "Hi, we're looking for a hotel." Sophie's confusion deepened. "A hotel? Really? Is it near here?" The old man nodded.

"Yes, didn't you know? There's one nearby." Sophie's gratitude was genuine. "Thanks for telling me." The girl extended an invitation. "Want to join us?" Sophie hesitated briefly before responding, "Sure, I'd like to." They reached the hotel, its warm lights a welcoming relief from the darkness. Sophie's exhaustion dissipated as she stepped into the cozy lobby. The girl smiled. "Glad we found it." The old man nodded. "You're safe now." Sophie checked in, her eyes drooping. She fell onto the plush bed, finally at peace, and drifted off to sleep, surrounded by the hotel's comforting silence. The next morning, Sophie slept in, but a knock on the door woke her. She hastily opened it to find the black-coated girl from the previous night, now wearing a black mask, holding a tray. "Are you the girl I met last night?" Sophie asked. The girl nodded, "Yes." Sophie's curiosity fascinated. "What's this?" she asked, gesturing to the tray. "Breakfast for you, Sophie," the girl replied. Sophie's eyes widened, startled. "How do you know my name?" The girl hesitated before answering, "You told the admit department yesterday. That's how." Sophie's mind raced, but she simply said, "Oh, okay." As she listened to the girl's voice, Sophie detected a faint familiarity. After finishing breakfast, Sophie freshened up and set out to search for the X mark. As she walked, she couldn't shake off the feeling that someone was following her. She turned back, but there was no one in sight. Her mind began to wander, fixating on the mysterious girl who had brought her breakfast. Why had she done it? Why did her voice seem weirdly familiar? The questions spun in Sophie's brain, refusing to let up. With a surge of excitement, Sophie found the X mark. She dug furiously, and her shovel struck something solid. A small box appeared, containing a mysterious key and a map that called her to continue the adventure. The map hinted at a mysterious door, locked and waiting for the key. Sophie tucked the key and map into her bag, her curiosity now burning brighter than ever.

Sophie left the forest and returned to the hotel where she had previously stayed. She spent two days there, resting and making preparations. During this time, she booked flights to a tiny nation, determined to regain the mysterious color and restore it to the world. Stepping off the plane, Sophie was greeted by the crisp, cool air. She enjoyed a quick snack before exploring towards the mysterious location. This time, empowered by her previous experiences, Sophie bravely entered the world's most feared forest, its creepy reputation no longer threatening her. Sophie finally arrived at her destination. Before her stood a closed door. As she opened it a tiger suddenly pounced. Sophie screamed for help. Just in time two members an elderly man and a young girl, both masked rushed to her rescue. Curious, Sophie removed the girl's mask, revealing Ava, who had masterfully disguised herself as a child. The "old man" was none other than Rohan.

Overjoyed, Sophie hugged Ava and whispered Thank you for saving me. With hands griped together, Sophie, Ava, and the Rohan entered deeper into the room. Colors began to bleed back into the space, like watercolors on wet paper. Sophie slid the key into the box, and as the lid creaked open, a glorious light exploded forth, bathing the room in its previous glory. After returning to their country, Ava, Rohan, and Sophie were prised as heroes. The world took notice of their remarkable achievement in restoring color to the previously dull land. In recognition of their incredible achievement, they received extensive acclaim and were honored with prestigious awards.

THE END......

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