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THE UNBREAKABLE RULE!!

NAINA HALDKAR
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Submitted to Contest #4 in response to the prompt: 'You break the one unbreakable rule. What happens next? '

There was only one rule in the town of Duskvale:
NEVER OPEN THE BLACK DOOR!!

No one knew who made the rule, or why. There was no legend, no written curse, no myth in any book. Just the rule. It was spoken in hushed tones, passed down from generation to generation like a fragile relic made of fear. The black door stood deep within the forest, untouched by time. It didn’t belong to any building. It had no hinges, no frame. It stood upright in the earth, taller than a man and impossibly old.

No one ever dared to open it.
No one ever tried.

Except her.

ELIRA, 17, with storm-colored eyes and a mind too wild to stay caged, had always felt it — like the door was watching her. Like it wasn’t just a door. It was something alive. And it was calling her name.

She first found it when she was eight, running away after a bitter argument with her mother. That day, the forest had gone silent around her. The wind stilled. The air thickened. Then there it was: a black door in the middle of the woods, standing without support, casting no shadow.

She remembered staring at it for hours.
She remembered how it made her heart beat like a war drum.

She never told anyone. Not because she was afraid they wouldn’t believe her—because she was afraid they would.

Years passed. The town remained the same. So did the rule. But Elira… she changed.

Restless nights. Dreams where the door whispered. Visions. Signs. Angel numbers began to follow her—11:11, 04:44, 16:16, and most recently: 12:06. The exact moment of the blood moon.

On the night of the eclipse, her reflection in the mirror fogged over without explanation. And then, in the mist, three letters formed:

O P E N

Her heart knew before her mind did. It was time.

She left her home barefoot, drawn into the night by something more ancient than logic. The forest greeted her like a memory. The door stood exactly where she remembered it—but this time, closer. Taller. Throbbing with energy.

She touched the handle.
It was warm, like breath.
And then—
She turned it.

SHE BROKE THE ONE UNBREAKABLE RULE!!

The world exploded.

Not with sound, but silence so deep it clawed at her mind. She wasn’t falling—she was unraveling. Her memories peeled away, her body turning into threads of light. Then darkness. Then color. Then something entirely beyond understanding.

When she opened her eyes, she stood in a mirror of Duskvale—twisted, dreamlike, wrong. The trees had veins. The sky blinked. People moved in reverse, their faces blank. The sun and moon hung side by side, bleeding light.

And in the center stood HER:
A tall woman dressed in shadows, her face hidden behind fluttering moths. Her presence bent the air. Her voice echoed inside Elira’s thoughts, not her ears.

“You broke the rule.”

Elira, stunned but unafraid, answered, “I needed to know what was behind it.”

“Curiosity has a cost,” the woman said. “You opened what should never be opened. Now you must pay the balance.”

She was given three tasks.

She wasn’t told their meaning. Only that if she refused, she would be trapped in this realm of forgotten truths forever.

First Task: The Choice

A boy appeared—her first love, who once shattered her heart. Beside him, the girl who helped Elira heal afterward. Both tied to stakes. The fire was already lit.

“Choose one,” the woman said. “One will burn. One will live.”

Elira refused.

She walked into the fire herself.

It swallowed her.

But she didn’t burn.

Second Task: The Mirror

A silver mirror rose from the ground. It reflected not Elira’s face—but a monstrous version of her: cruel, selfish, broken, filled with hate and shame. Every lie, every mistake, every moment she doubted herself flickered across the glass like a cursed slideshow.

The reflection sneered. “You’re nothing.”

Elira leaned in. Whispered, “I know. And I still choose to try.”

She kissed the mirror.

It cracked. And bled.

Third Task: Silence

She stood in a stone room with no exit, surrounded by voices screaming every secret she’d ever buried: her jealousy, her failures, the pain of being misunderstood, the fear of not being enough.

She had to remain completely still and silent for one thousand heartbeats.

Tears streamed down her face. Blood from her ears.

But she endured.

On the 1000th heartbeat, the world shattered.

She stood again before the black door, now glowing with golden cracks, as if it had been holding back not darkness—but light too powerful for the world to hold.

Behind her, the woman’s voice echoed:

“You did not break the rule. You fulfilled the prophecy. The door wasn’t cursed. It was a test. For the one who would change everything.”

Elira looked down at her hands.
They were glowing.

When she stepped through the door again, the forest was gone.
Duskvale was gone.
Everything was new.

She woke in her bed at 12:07 AM, heart racing. Her hands were normal. But something had shifted.

Her mother called her down for breakfast like always. The streets looked the same. But no one recognized her name anymore. Her reflection blinked out of sync. Her eyes flickered gold when she wasn’t looking.

And the black door was no longer in the forest.

Because it was inside her now.

A gateway. A gift. A warning.

No one in Duskvale speaks of the door anymore.
No one remembers the rule.

But sometimes, on the night of a blood moon, a girl with storm-colored eyes can be seen walking alone under the sky, followed by flickering lights—angel numbers, dancing in her wake.

The rule is broken.
The balance has shifted.

And somewhere far away…
a new black door is waiting.

For you.

The End.





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Hey Naina, I was completely drawn into \'The Unbreakable Rule\'! The way you explore the consequences of the rule is both intense and thought-provoking— I gave it a full 50 points. If you get a moment, I’d be grateful if you could read my story, “The Room Without Windows.” I’d love to hear what you think: https://notionpress.com/write_contest/details/5371/the-room-without-windows

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