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The Message That Lit the Sky

Havish
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Submitted to Contest #4 in response to the prompt: 'An unexpected message changes everything. What will you do next?'

The evening began like any other. I had just finished a pile of homework, scrolled pointlessly through social media, and collapsed on my bed. Outside, the sky was dipped in fading orange and steel grey, the last rays of sunlight flickering through the curtain.

I wasn’t expecting anything—especially not a message that would flip my world upside down.

My phone buzzed.

Unknown Number: "Meet me at the old observatory. 8:30 PM. Come alone. – M"

I blinked at the screen. No name. No explanation. No reason to trust it. Just a place I hadn’t visited since I was ten years old, when Dad used to take me there on Friday nights to look at stars through a broken telescope and tell me stories about the cosmos.

It had been years since Dad left. One day, he was there, laughing at my questions about black holes. The next, gone—no goodbye, no letter. Not a single word.

For a long time, I believed he had died. But that belief was built on silence, not proof.

Was this message connected to him? The thought clung to me like static electricity. Against every bit of common sense, I grabbed my hoodie, slipped out of the house, and biked through the chill of early nightfall.

The observatory sat on a hill just outside town, now fenced off, forgotten. Rust had painted its dome brown, and tall grass choked the path. But the gate was open tonight.

I wheeled my bike behind a bush and climbed the creaky steps to the dome.

Inside, the air was thick with dust and silence. The familiar scent of metal and moss hit me like memory.

Then I saw her.

A girl, about my age. Short black hair, oversized denim jacket. She stood beside the old telescope, holding something in her hands.

"You came," she said.

"I got your message," I replied. "Who are you?"

She looked down, then back at me. "My name is Mira. I’m your sister."

The world spun.

“No,” I whispered. “I don’t have a sister.”

“You do,” she said, voice gentle. “Our father… he left to protect us. He’s alive. But he’s in danger.”

My thoughts clashed like crashing cars. “Why didn’t anyone tell me?”

“Because it wasn’t safe,” she said. “And it still isn’t. But now... now we need your help.”

I stared at her, trying to process the avalanche of emotion—shock, fear, hope.

She handed me the object she was holding.

A flash drive.

“What’s this?”

“It’s what he left behind for you. It has everything—why he disappeared, who’s after him, and what you’re supposed to do.”

“Do?”

“You’re not just some kid, Leo. You’re part of something big. Something real. Our dad was working on a project... something powerful. People are trying to erase it. And us.”

I looked down at the drive. It felt warm in my hand, like it had a pulse of its own.

“I don’t know anything about this,” I said. “I’m just... normal.”

She gave me a sad smile. “None of us are normal. Not when the sky is listening.”

That night, I didn’t sleep. I waited until my house was dark and silent before plugging the drive into my laptop.

It required a password.

Then, to my shock, the screen lit up with a familiar sound—Dad’s voice.

> “If you’re seeing this, it means you’re ready. Leo, I’m sorry I had to leave. I never stopped watching over you. I left pieces of the truth all around. You just didn’t know they were clues.”



> “You’ve already seen one—your birthmark. It’s not just a scar. It’s a code.”



I paused the video and stared at my hand. The tiny pattern near my thumb... could it be?

> “You need to go to the town library. Second floor. Third bookshelf from the left. Push in the red book. It’ll lead you to the next step.”



The video ended.

I sat there, stunned. The message wasn’t just unexpected—it was a map.

And I had just stepped onto the path.


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The next morning, I faked a headache and skipped school. At 9 AM sharp, I slipped into the town library, heart thudding.

The second floor was empty. I found the shelf, counted to the third from the left, and spotted a worn-out red book titled “The Sky Belongs to No One.”

With shaking fingers, I pushed it in.

Click.

The entire shelf creaked and shifted slightly, revealing a narrow slit with a small box hidden behind it.

Inside: a folded map, a compass, and a torn photo of Dad holding two toddlers—me and a baby I never remembered. Mira.

The map led to an abandoned radio tower on the outskirts of town.

That night, I met Mira there again.

“I didn’t think you’d come,” she said.

“I couldn’t not come,” I said, holding up the photo. “Is this real?”

She nodded. “And it’s only the beginning.”

We climbed the tower, step by step, until we reached the top. Inside a rusted metal cabinet was a transmitter, glowing faintly. Mira pulled out a small battery from her backpack and connected it.

The screen flickered to life.

> SIGNAL FOUND.



Static buzzed, then Dad’s voice came through again.

> “Leo. Mira. If you're hearing this, then you’ve both found your way. You have to keep going. Everything I’ve left behind will lead you to the Nova Key. It’s not just data—it’s a choice. And it’s yours now.”



We looked at each other, a mix of fear and resolve in our eyes.

“Nova Key?” I asked.

She shrugged. “Whatever it is... it’s what they want. And it’s what we have to protect.”

As we climbed back down, I realized that everything had changed.

The quiet days. The predictable routines. The belief that my life was small and ordinary.

All shattered by a single message.


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CONCLUSION

Weeks passed. We uncovered hidden messages in school textbooks, encrypted notes in old photographs, even a Morse code signal from an old lighthouse.

The deeper we went, the more dangerous it got. We weren’t just chasing clues. We were being watched.

But I had Mira. And we had Dad’s voice, guiding us like a distant star.

Sometimes, I wonder what would’ve happened if I had ignored that first message. If I had laughed it off as a prank.

But I didn’t.

I answered it.

And it changed everything.

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Havish, your story \"The Message That Lit the Sky\" is an exhilarating mystery that kept me hooked from start to finish! — I gave it a full 50 points. If you get a moment, I’d be grateful if you could read my story, “The Room Without Windows.” I’d love to hear what you think: https://notionpress.com/write_contest/details/5371/the-room-without-windows

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