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The Ones Left Behind
Riya
MYTHOLOGY

In the ancient forests of Kishkindha, where the emerald canopy stretched toward the heavens and the rivers sang hymns of old, two brothers were born to the mighty monkey king Riksharaja. Vali, the elder, was a warrior of unmatched strength, his limbs forged from the fury of the storm, his spirit indomitable as the mountain peaks. Sugriva, the younger, was nimble of mind and swift of foot, his wisdom like the coursing river—patient, deep, and knowing.

Side by side, they grew, as inseparable as the twin stars that light the heavens. Together, they learned the art of war, the ways of the hunt, and the sacred duties of kingship. Yet, even as the sun and the moon share the same sky but follow different paths, so too did their destinies diverge.

One day, the demon Mayavi, a creature of shadows and malice, came to the gates of Kishkindha. His voice, like the hiss of a serpent, echoed through the halls, calling out Vali’s name. “Come, mighty king! Face me if you dare, and let us see if the legends speak true of your strength!”

Vali, ever the fearless warrior, rose to the challenge. Sugriva followed, his loyalty unshaken. The brothers pursued the demon deep into the heart of the forest, where trees gnarled with age stood like silent sentinels. Mayavi fled into a dark cavern, his laughter a whisper in the wind. Without hesitation, Vali rushed inside, his heart pounding with the thrill of battle.

“Wait, my brother!” Sugriva called. “The darkness is treacherous. We must not be reckless!”

But Vali did not heed his words. The cave swallowed him whole, and for days, only the echoes of battle rang from its depths. Sugriva waited, his breath shallow with fear. Then, silence fell. Not a whisper, not a cry—nothing but an abyssal quiet. And then, from the cavern’s mouth, a torrent of crimson flowed, staining the earth in a river of death.

His heart quaking, Sugriva knew only one truth: Vali had fallen. With a heavy heart, he rolled a mighty boulder across the entrance, sealing the cave so that the demon would never emerge. He returned to Kishkindha, crowned as king by the elders, though sorrow weighed upon him like an iron chain.

But fate, ever a fickle weaver of tales, had not yet turned its final thread.

From the depths of the cave, where death had seemed certain, Vali emerged, his body drenched in the blood of his fallen foe. His heart burned with rage, for he had found no brother waiting at the mouth of the cave—only a wall of stone, a betrayal forged by the hands of the one he had trusted most.

Like the tempest before the storm, Vali descended upon Kishkindha, his wrath like the fury of Indra himself. “Sugriva!” he roared, his voice shaking the very foundations of the earth. “You have betrayed me!”

Sugriva, stunned and terrified, tried to explain, but Vali would hear none of it. With the might of a thousand thunders, he struck Sugriva down and cast him from the kingdom, exiling him to the wilderness beyond the hills. Now king once more, Vali ruled Kishkindha with an iron hand, while Sugriva wandered the desolate lands, a prince without a home.

But the wheel of fate turns for all, and destiny had yet another ally to summon.

In the forests of exile, Sugriva encountered a warrior unlike any other—a prince exiled from his own kingdom, yet possessing a radiance that outshone the stars. It was Rama, the son of Dasharatha, the prince of Ayodhya, and his brother Lakshmana, noble and steadfast. Sugriva, seeing in them a power greater than any mortal, approached with reverence.

“My lord,” he said, bowing deeply, “I, too, have been wronged. My brother, once my dearest kin, has turned against me, driven by anger and mistrust. My heart longs not for vengeance, but for justice.”

Rama, whose heart knew the pain of exile, whose soul understood the weight of betrayal, listened with compassion. He saw in Sugriva not just a vanquished king, but a friend, an ally. And so, he made a vow.

“I shall aid you,” Rama declared. “As your friend, as your brother in suffering, I shall rid you of this tyranny.”

With renewed hope, Sugriva led Rama to the walls of Kishkindha, where Vali, drunk with power, ruled with unchallenged might. A challenge was issued, and the brothers met in battle once more. The earth trembled as they clashed, their roars shaking the sky. But as they fought, Rama watched from the shadows, his bow drawn, his eyes seeking justice.

In the midst of the duel, when the moment was right, Rama let loose an arrow, swift as lightning, sure as fate. It struck Vali through the heart. The mighty warrior staggered, his eyes wide with shock. He turned to see his slayer, not his brother, but a prince from a distant land.

Gasping for breath, Vali spoke, his voice no longer thunderous, but soft as the wind before a storm. “Why, prince of Ayodhya? This was our battle, mine and Sugriva’s. Why do you strike from the shadows?”

Rama knelt beside him, his gaze steady, his heart solemn. “I do not act for vengeance, nor for hatred. I act for dharma. A brother who betrays, a king who rules through fear, a warrior who has lost the path of righteousness—these are the burdens you carried, and the burdens I could not let endure.”

Vali’s breath grew shallow, and he smiled, not in anger, but in the bittersweet knowledge of truth. “Perhaps,” he whispered, “I have been blind, seeing only betrayal where there was love. But tell me, Rama—will my son, Angada, know honor in your eyes?”

Rama placed a hand on Vali’s brow. “He shall know honor, and he shall know the love his father bore, though the world may not have seen it.”

With that, Vali’s eyes closed, and his spirit soared to the heavens.

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