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The Clockmaker's Secret

Anand Kumar
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Submitted to Contest #2 in response to the prompt: 'Write about the moment your character decided to write their own story.'



In the quiet town of Eldenbrook, nestled between rolling hills and foggy woods, lived an old clockmaker named Elias Wren. His shop, Wren’s Timepieces, stood at the corner of Main and Maple, its windows fogged with age and dust, the golden letters on the sign faded but still proud. The townsfolk called him eccentric, but always with a note of affection. After all, no one else could fix a broken pocket watch with such delicate precision or coax a grandfather clock back to life with a whisper and a twist of the gears.

But Elias was more than just a clockmaker.

He lived alone above the shop, his apartment filled with ticking clocks of every size and style. Some whispered, others chimed in songs long forgotten, and one—kept under a glass dome—tick-tocked backward. He called it "The Echo." No one was allowed to touch it.

One rainy Thursday morning, as clouds smeared the sky and the streets glistened like mirrors, a young woman entered the shop. Her name was Clara Merrin, a journalist from the city, chasing an old family story. She had read about Elias in one of her grandmother’s letters—“Find the man who makes time dance,” it had said.

Clara had spent months following faint trails and dead ends. Now, standing in the dim, gear-lined shop, she felt like she'd finally found something real.

Elias looked up from a disassembled cuckoo clock, peering through his thick lenses. "You’re not from here."

"No," Clara smiled, brushing water from her coat. "I'm looking for something. Or maybe someone."

"We’re all looking for something," he replied. “Time, mostly. Sometimes lost, sometimes stolen.”

She hesitated. “My grandmother used to talk about you. Lillian Merrin?”

Elias’s hand froze above his tools. The room seemed to fall silent, even though the clocks still ticked.

“I knew Lillian,” he said quietly. “A long time ago.”

“She said you kept a secret. Something about a clock that could… change things.”

Elias slowly removed his glasses and rubbed his eyes. "She told you that, did she?"

“She believed you built a clock that could turn time backward.”

He chuckled, low and sad. "Belief is a dangerous thing."

Clara stepped closer. “Is it true?”

He studied her for a long moment, then turned and motioned for her to follow. Up the narrow staircase they went, into the apartment filled with clocks. Clara’s eyes widened at the symphony of movement—hands spinning, pendulums swaying, gears turning in intricate dance.

Elias walked to the glass dome and removed the cover. Inside sat a small, brass clock, no larger than a cantaloupe, with strange inscriptions etched into its base. Its hands moved counter-clockwise, steady and sure.

"This," he said, "is The Echo."

Clara leaned closer. “It really runs backward.”

“Yes. And if you listen closely, it doesn’t tick. It whispers.”

Clara strained her ears, and indeed, the sound was odd—not a tick but a soft, rhythmic murmur, like breath in reverse.

Elias continued. “It doesn’t just tell time. It holds memory. And if wound just right, it can... return you to a moment you’ve lost. A chance to undo. But only once.”

Clara stared at the device. “Why only once?”

“Because tampering with time comes with a cost. You don’t get to choose the outcome. Only the moment. And sometimes, the moment you choose isn’t the one that needs changing.”

She sat in the nearest chair, heart racing. “Why did you make it?”

“Because I made a mistake,” Elias whispered. “And I thought I could fix it.”

He looked at Clara, pain etched deep in the lines of his face. “Lillian came here fifty years ago. We were... close. She wanted to use The Echo. I warned her. But she insisted. She went back to stop her sister from drowning.”

Clara blinked. “My great-aunt Ellen?”

He nodded. “She saved her. But in doing so, she was never at the river that day. Her sister lived... and Lillian vanished from her own timeline. She returned to me for a moment, and then... she faded. Like smoke.”

Clara’s breath caught. “So, she gave up her life to save someone else?”

Elias nodded. “She said it was worth it.”

Clara looked at the clock, her thoughts spinning. “Can it still be used?”

“Yes,” Elias said slowly. “But it’s risky. And irreversible.”

Clara pulled a photograph from her coat pocket. A boy of six, smiling wide—her brother, Jamie. He’d drowned last summer. A moment of distraction, a turned back, and he was gone.

“I’ve lived every day since trying to breathe through grief,” she whispered. “If there’s even a chance…”

Elias studied her. “You carry her same fire.”

“I have to try.”

He handed her a small silver key. “Set your intent. Wind it once. The moment will come. Just be sure it’s the one you need.”

Clara nodded, tears on her lashes.

She turned the key.

The world shuddered.

Clara found herself in her childhood backyard, sun streaming through the trees, Jamie’s laughter in the air. She knew this day. The last time they played together before the accident.

She moved fast, calling him away from the edge of the pond. He whined but obeyed, pulled by her urgency.

She spent the day with him—playing, laughing, memorizing his face, his voice. As the sun dipped low, she felt the tug of time, the echo pulling her back.

And then, she was in the clockmaker’s shop again.

But something was different.

Elias wasn’t there.

The shop looked newer. Cleaner.

A woman stepped out from behind the counter.

“Can I help you?” she asked.

Clara blinked. “Where’s Elias?”

The woman smiled gently. “I’m sorry. My grandfather passed years ago. I’m Leah Wren. I run the shop now.”

Clara’s heart dropped. “Do you know Clara Merrin?”

Leah tilted her head. “Of course. That’s my mother.”

Clara gasped. “What…?”

A small boy ran into the shop, clutching a toy clock. “Mom! Look!”

Leah laughed. “Be careful, Jamie!”

Clara turned, eyes wide.

The boy looked up at her. “Hi!”

Time held its breath.

And then Clara knelt, pulling him into a hug, tears falling freely.

She didn’t remember this version of her life—but she didn’t need to.

She had found what she was looking for.

And time… had given her a second chance.


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