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The Margin Whisper

Pragati Mishra
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Submitted to Contest #2 in response to the prompt: 'Write a story about your character finding a mysterious message hidden in an old book.'

Title: The Margin Whisper

Rhea was not the type to believe in signs. Or fate. Or any of that romantic nonsense people used to escape their nine-to-whatever lives. She believed in productivity apps, loyalty points, and ordering groceries at 2 a.m. from her phone. If life was a spreadsheet, she liked hers color-coded, scheduled, and backed up to three different clouds.

She lived in Bangalore, where life moved fast enough to distract you from yourself. A city that never quite settled. Like her. She had constructed her life like a well-oiled machine: career-driven, socially competent, emotionally... neutral. She had friends. She went out. She was functional. But not quite alive.

That Tuesday started like every other. Flat white in hand, earbuds pumping in a podcast about optimizing performance. Deadlines. Meetings. A minor client disaster. But somewhere between a calendar reminder and the fourth notification ping, her Wi-Fi died. Her phone followed. Her laptop froze. For the first time in months, the noise went quiet.

Annoyed but curious, she left her apartment, walking aimlessly. Maybe a coffee shop, she thought. But her feet moved differently. They pulled her away from Koramangala’s crowds, into a quieter street she did not remember walking down before.

That is how she found Kalpana’s Corner. A sliver of a bookshop nestled between a shut tailoring shop and a dusty, disinterested Gul mohar tree. The painted sign hung unevenly: Books That Remember You.

She tilted her head. “What does that even mean?”

It looked closed. But the door creaked open like it had been waiting. Inside, it smelled like sandalwood, old paper, and monsoon mornings. It was dimly lit, dust dancing in sunbeams. Bookshelves leaned into each other like conspirators.

She was not looking for anything. Yet her hand stopped on a worn spine: The Soul’s Alchemy. No author. No blurb. Just a faint golden infinity symbol embossed on the cover.

She flipped it open.

On the margin of Chapter 7, in soft fading ink, was her name.

"Rhea, your path won’t be clear until you sit with your shadow."

She blinked.

No one called her by name like that. Not in cursive that felt both elegant and... familiar.

She turned the page. More scribbles.

"You’re not here to succeed. You’re here to remember."
"Stop running from the life that’s calling you back."

Something unfurled inside her. Like memory. Or déjà vu with teeth.

She bought the book. Or rather, she left a few notes on the counter. The old woman inside had not said a word. Just watched her with eyes that glimmered like night skies.

That week, Rhea unraveled.

The book was not a book. It was a mirror. Each chapter was a story that tugged at something she could not name. A healer in ancient Egypt. A cartographer in a forgotten Himalayan village. A woman who left love behind in 1642 to serve a greater purpose, and regretted it across lifetimes.

She dreamt vividly. Olive trees. Laughter in a language she did not know she knew. Salt on the breeze. A man with kind eyes. A red scarf floating downstream.

In her waking life, she became quieter. She paused more. Listened.

She journaled. Long, messy, feverish entries. Not about her job. Or her friends. But about lives she never lived and heartbreaks she had no memory of. Her therapist gently asked if she had been sleeping enough.

She had. For the first time in years.

The last page of the book held one final riddle:
To find the next door, return what was borrowed. But leave behind what you never dared say aloud."


So, she returned to Kalpana’s Corner.

The old woman was there. Drinking tea from a cracked cup.

Rhea hesitated. Then placed the book back where she found it.

Before she left, she opened to Chapter 3 and wrote in the margin:

"If you’re reading this, you’re not lost. You are remembering. Trust the pauses. They know the way."

She turned to the woman. "Did I write this before? In some other life?"

The woman only smiled. "Maybe. Maybe you're writing it now."

That night, Rhea did not open her laptop.

She sat in the dark, breathing in silence. Then she booked a one-way ticket to Uttarakhand. No plan. Just a calling. Maybe it was madness. Maybe it was memory.

She started writing poems again. Not the neat kind. The wild, unfiltered ones that knew too much.

Somewhere on a train between Rishikesh and Joshi math, she met a man who looked at her like they had been interrupted. Like he was mid-sentence from another lifetime.

He asked what she did.

She thought for a moment and said, “I remember stories that haven’t been told yet.”

He smiled. “Me too.”

They ended up sharing oranges, silence, and theories about soul contracts. He showed her a drawing in his sketchbook a temple on a hill she had seen in her dream just two nights ago.

The wind shifted. The moment paused.

“You believe in past lives?” she asked.

“I believe in unfinished conversations,” he replied.

In Joshi math, she wandered off the trail and found a monastery that was not on any map. An old monk handed her a prayer bead with a missing bead in the middle.

“Imperfect things hold the most meaning,” he said.

She stayed for days. Learned to wake with the sun. To eat in silence. To listen without needing answers. The mountains whispered things she had forgotten how to hear.

At night, she wrote letters to people she would never send. To her younger self. To the boy who left. To the woman she had once wanted to become. To the woman she now was.

One morning, she found a note slipped into her journal.

You found the door. Now build one for someone else."

She did not know who wrote it. Maybe the monk. Maybe the wind.

And just like that, her real life began. Not louder. But deeper. Not newer. But familiar. A life that was not rushed or explained. Just felt. Fully.
Because sometimes, the books remember you before you remember yourself.
And sometimes, that is where it all begins.


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Must say, AMAZING book. It really feels nice to just take some time out of your schedule and you get to read such a book filled with curiosity. Would definitely like to read more.

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Well knit. Waiting to read more of your work ????

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It was an amazing experience to go through

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Nicely written. l like the Rawness, I am definitely going to take this line “ To find the next door, return what was borrowed. But leave behind what you never dared say aloud.” Just made me feel good after reading this.

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