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The Quiet Between Pages
Lenora Raven
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Submitted to Contest #2 in response to the prompt: 'The lines between fiction and reality get blurred when your character starts writing a new book.'

Marla Winters arrived in the town of Larkhollow just as the fog began to settle in for the season.

The town clung to the coast like a forgotten bookmark wedged between cliffs and sea. Its streets curled like the edges of old parchment. Houses leaned into the wind as though whispering secrets to one another. The air always carried salt and something more elusive—like memory.

Marla rented a weathered cottage perched on the cliffs’ edge, its windows tangled in ivy and its porch creaking beneath her cautious steps. The locals said the house had "good bones," but they didn’t say much else. That was fine by her. She came here to disappear.

She hadn’t written a word in nine months.

Not since The Whispering Sky became a quiet, best-selling phenomenon. Not since the praise turned to pressure, the interviews to expectations. Somewhere in the swirl of success, her voice had quieted. The stories had stopped coming.

On her second night, she awoke in the dark.

The house was silent—except for a sound coming from her study. Not a bang or creak, but something softer. A hum.

She padded in barefoot, heart tapping against her ribs.

There, her old typewriter sat on the desk. Still and closed when she went to bed. But now, the carriage was pulled halfway across, and a single sheet of paper fluttered gently in the breeze from the cracked window.

The typewriter was humming.

Not mechanically—no keys were moving. It sounded almost... content. Like a cat purring.

Marla approached slowly. The page read:

Chapter One: Elira remembers the stars speaking her name.

She blinked. Her name wasn’t Elira. That was… someone else. But the sentence—it felt familiar. Like something rediscovered rather than created.

Before she knew it, she was sitting down, her fingers on the keys. They moved on instinct.

Words flowed. Sentences became paragraphs, and paragraphs became pages.

Elira was a girl who lived in a land without mornings. Where the sun never rose and the stars never left. She could hear constellations whispering riddles through the sky, and she was searching for something—her name, perhaps. Or her beginning.

By sunset, the manuscript was fifteen pages long.

That night, Marla dreamed of a silver pendant shaped like a falling star. In the dream, it hung from her neck, ice-cold and whispering something in a language she didn’t know.

She awoke with a shiver.

The pendant lay on her pillow.

She told herself dreams could be vivid. Maybe she’d bought the necklace months ago and forgotten it. The mind plays tricks when it’s tired, when it’s finally writing again.

But then came the voice.

Soft at first, barely a breath.

“Don’t stop,” it said. “Please. I need you to remember.”

It came from the hallway. Then behind the mirror. Then from the walls themselves. Wherever Marla wrote, the voice followed.

The lines between her and Elira blurred.

Each page she wrote felt like memory. Elira’s world became more textured, more real—with its twin moons and quiet forests, its cities shaped like spirals and staircases that led nowhere.

The longer she wrote, the stranger the town became.

Scents from her manuscript lingered in the air—smoke and lavender, burnt paper and salt. The fog grew thicker, clinging to her skin like wet ink. She heard whispers in the wind that mimicked her own sentences.

One morning, she noticed a bookstore on the corner that hadn’t been there the week before.

Ink & Ether, read the brass sign.

Inside, the air smelled of old parchment and thunderstorms. A bell rang as she stepped in, but no one came.

Books lined the walls—no sections, no signs. Just names embossed in faded gold. She wandered, drawn deeper into the maze of shelves, until a spine caught her eye.

The Whispering Sky – Marla Winters.

She pulled it down.

It was her book, down to the cover design and the dedication page. But the final chapter was different.

The last line read:

“When Elira woke up, she was someone else. A girl with trembling hands and saltwater eyes, trying to rewrite what had already happened.”

Marla dropped the book. Her breath fogged the glass in front of her.

In its reflection, she didn’t see herself. She saw Elira.

She fled the shop. The bell didn’t ring this time.

Outside, the fog had thickened, swallowing the streets. Her boots echoed on cobblestones she didn’t remember crossing. The town’s edges no longer felt real—like the borders of a dream slipping away on waking.

That night, she found a new page in her manuscript she hadn’t written. It began:

Elira stood by the sea, holding the last of the pages. The tide was calling her home.

She tore it from the typewriter. Her hands shook. She called her editor, then her sister—no one answered. The lines disconnected before they rang.

She opened old journals, flipping back years. And there it was: the name Elira, scrawled in the margins of sketches, scribbled into daydreams, mentioned in a poem she’d written at seventeen.

How long had she known this girl?

Had she created Elira… or had Elira created her?

The sea roared louder that week.

The voice returned, no longer soft.

“Finish it,” it said. “Let me become.”

She stopped sleeping. Stopped eating. The house grew colder, the fog thicker. Her manuscript grew by itself. Sometimes, she’d blink and find entire chapters written, describing events she hadn’t lived—yet remembered. Scenes of Elira walking through Marla’s house, holding the pendant, touching the typewriter.

In the mirror, her reflection flickered—black boots, silver pen, starlit eyes.

And then the voice said it clearly:

“You are the story.”

On the seventh day, Marla walked to the cliffs.

The manuscript was clutched in her arms, pages loose and trembling. The sea below clawed at the rocks, screaming with wind and foam.

She stood at the edge, her coat snapping around her. The pendant felt heavy at her throat.

She looked down at the final page.

"Elira reached the source. She understood now. She had written herself into being—word by word, memory by memory. She had always been a story pretending to be real. Now she would choose."

The ocean whispered: “Come home.”

Marla closed her eyes.

She could let it go. Let the tide take the words. Forget who she was—or wasn’t.

Or…

She stepped forward.

The manuscript slipped from her hands, pages scattering like snow behind her.

The wind carried them far, into the sky, into the sea, into someone else’s dream.

Epilogue
Weeks later, the cottage stood empty.

The fog never quite lifted. Locals said a new girl had rented it—quiet, strange, and always writing. Her name was Elira.

No one remembered the one before her.

Only the waves did.

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