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Mission Vanish The End

Voygotski
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Submitted to Contest #3 in response to the prompt: 'A stranger comes to your door. What happens next?'

"A stranger comes to your door what happens next?" Sam said after reading the last page of the diary of Nil, and then he started crying in frustration.
Oliver hurriedly snatched the diary from him and after a second he said in bitterness,"what happens after "The End?"?"
"What's this "The End?"?"asked William.
"'The End'??... Did you just said 'The End'?" Haldi screamed.
"What happened? Haldi! Why were you so surprised? What's the matter?" asked Ken.
Haldi said in a hurry without replying directly,"Nil used to live with his aunt, right? He disappeared in his early school time, right? You all listen to me carefully now!May be we are in danger! My father is a cop and he is recently involved in a case of a gang which name is recently revealed 'The End', they targets young self-dependent women, media was not aware of this gang till now because this gang has just started coming into the spotlight. But Nil watch disappeared when we wear eleven means seven years before ,right?And this gang works so cleanly that no one gets to know about its work.Hey Ken! How did you get this diary after so many years? And where are we now?"
He was startled and began to look around.
"Don't panic, friends! Hey William! Is this the last chapter of this diary? Look at it carefully" Ken said a bit nervously.
Stunned William nodded yes and said,"And here is the date Nil disappeared."
Ken said, "Our former school principal Mr. Watson's brother had called me to this farmhouse by saying that he could not tell about it on phone. After coming here I was shocked too that he called me only to show a diary but when I read the name of Nil mentioned on it and the baby bear picture of the diary is same as Sam's favourite doll of his bike key, then I called all of you to show this."
"You did great, Ken!" said Gehlot,"This is not looking a simple matter to me, I remember when we wear coming here our former school peon was with the brother of the principal, and their behaviour seemed very suspicious to me."
"Hey Nil! Where are you now?I want to read your next chapter "Sam said in despair.
"Don't worry, friends! We all know that, how precious is Nil to us! We all know that sometimes the whole world lost the hope to meet Nil again but we never lost our hope. But now, after getting this diary, no one will hinder us, we will meet Nil soon, no matter what comes in our way, The End gang or someone other,we will read the next chapter soon. After all, he is our best friend", Oliver consoled.

"Now my children!...." A sudden voice came from backward. They all turned into that voice direction. The brother of the principal and the peon was there." This is The End", the peon said with an evil laugh. Gehlot suddenly said,"My head feels heavy."
After sometime, the all six boys fainted and then other members of the gang came and they tied up those boys and put them in the car and headed towards their hideout.

In the middle of the way, all the boys suddenly attacked the gang members and after getting some information from them they knocked them unconscious.The boys dressed up as gang members and they did all this in a moving car in such a way that the gang members sitting in the vehicles behind did not even know.
William asked Oliver secretly, "How did you do it?"
Oliver said softly, " I don't drink or eat anything with the strangers. So, the tea of the farmhouse only fainted you and all and not me actually. And you know this medicine..."after showing a medicine bottle he said, "by putting a drop in that tea I knew he was poisonous and this medicine will awake the fainted person."
William asked, "Is this invented by your maternal uncle about whom you always talk?"
Oliver nodded yes.

After sometime, they all reached the gang hideout. The boys try to enter in disguise but they could not hide themselves.A fight broke out there. The boys finished all of them.They all entered the first floor and then they saw a man who looked like the gang leader was sitting on a chair. Then suddenly a voice echoed there, " Welcome! I am the king of this hell! Don't you want to know about me before your death? Don't you want to know why where you brought here?"
Oliver screamed in anger, " who are you? What do you want... from us... from my friend?"
The voice started laughing abruptly and said, "You are really friends of that dog. He is exactly like his fool aunt. She was even worse than a dog. She was so much worse that in hypnotizing chamber,she didn't let herself get hypnotized and get manipulated ever and always barked loudly that Oceaner is this, Oceaner is that. And that dog is exactly the same as her.And the temperament of all of you are exactly the same as that dog."
The voice screamed in irritation, "My dear daughter even cried due to him because he didn't follow her order to kill women.He said he would never hurt innocent people. And by stopping my commander to kill a cop at the mall... yesterday, he even denied my order. So I took all the informations about each and every people close to him from the brother of your principal and the peon and used his previously robbed diary to lure you but I didn't expect that all of you can be trapped so easily because you are only his friend."
All the other boys looked at Haldi.
"So that yesterday boy.. at the mall.. uncle was talking.. was actually Nil.. and his toy- pictured headband is actually that baby bear.. that is one of the headbands once Sam gave us as a gift on a mission."
The voice further screamed in irritation, "And now I will execute him after showing your death to him so that he would die in immense grief. Don't think that you can escape from here anyway. On every floor my men and the zombies are waiting to welcome you and for moving to the next floor you have to give sacrifice to the death chamber of that floor. This floor chamber will hypnotize you so that you will can't recognise even yourself. The second floor chamber will order you to cut the bleeding women otherwise the zombies will eat every piece of your body. The next floor chamber will order you to cut the body of at least one of your friends and not yourself and you will be alive till the fresh blood of your friend drench the floor of the chamber. The next floor chamber has contracting walls, the time you enter the chamber, your time start decreasing and the distance between you and your death will be the distance between the walls. The next chamber will order you children for your life otherwise the chamber will kill you. And on the next floor I am waiting for you all where your friend is counting the last seconds of his life. Now enjoy the hell!"
As the voice stopped with a loutish laugh, suddenly all the gang members under his leader attacked on the boys. But the boys defeated all of them. After defeating all the enemies , they started discussion.
Oliver said, " I will enter the first chamber, I know.. no one can play with my mind and don't stop me, only believe me, we have no time, move fast."
Then, one by one, all the boys entered in all chambers and left his remaining friends only in tears. " I will rescue the ladies,"Gehlot said before entering into the second floor chamber.Haldi grabbed William's hand without informing him and slapped on the knife in the stunned William's hand to cut his own palm.

Only Sam alone reached the sixth floor to rescue Nil.As Sam reached the floor,he saw that Nil was tied up and there's a knife to his neck.As soon as they got the chance, the gang members surrounded Sam.The two friends recognized each other immediately.
"It's been seven years," Sam said in tears.
Nil said in tears,"Why...why did you come here... these people are very dangerous... leave this place please...I don't want these dogs to even touch my people."
Sam roared in tears,"Now nothing will happen to anyone, we will not let anything happen to anyone.Not only me, Oliver, William, Gehlot, Ken, Haldi...all are sacrificing their lives in the death chamber...to get you...to save his best friend...then why are you losing hope,nothing will happen to anyone, we will not let anything happen to anyone...we will save you."
"You don't know how much they hate an Oceaner...please get as far away from these dogs as you can."
"No matter what are they... The ultimate truth is the one who is right, the victory is his...he must win...he has to win...he has to survive...he has to stay... you have to stay."

Suddenly the gang boss came there, started laughing loudly with loutish and evil temper. "You dog! Now it's time to pay... what you have done to my daughter,"the gang boss said and were about to order to shoot from a gun to Sam, but suddenly a loud voice came and all the people present there were totally stunned." There is your important information to all.. present here."
" What's the matter, commander! Why did you suddenly stop us like this?",the gang boss said.
The commander said,"I am not your commander..I am Omega..I am an Oceaner.. and the juice you have completely consumed right now.. is poisonous.. seven years back when I joined your gang, one after another, many of your missions were failed because I did that to destroy you and you could never recognise me.. I have taken Nil under my command..seven years back.. when you captured him, was only because to save him from you. And today no one will die here except you and your gang and this is the statement by an Oceaner, you all know."
After this, the country defence team came and captured all the gang members and rescued all the boys and innocent people there.

After sometime, Omega came to visit the boys in the hospital.
"Are you really an Oceaner!", Oliver said in amazement.
"An Oceaner of that Ocean Organization!"Gehlot said.
"From that globally reputed organisation!", Haldi said.
"I wants to give you a gift. Take this book, this is by the famous author Voygotski, you all know about him," Omega said.
"Wow!", all the seven boys said in wonder and excitement.Omega smiled and handed them the packed gift.
"And I think I should apply to create an Oceaner ID for all of you,"Omega said with a smile.
All the boys said together in excitement,"Wow!Thank You!"







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That\'s what I always thought of, once a character left impact on me, I will never forget it ever, I will never forget Omega Neil and Sam Oliver haldi Gahlot all the friends

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