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“The Man in the Grey Hat”

Aishwarya Shekar
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Submitted to Contest #3 in response to the prompt: 'A stranger comes to your door. What happens next?'


It was one of those quiet, half-dreaming Sunday afternoons where the world felt as if it were tucked under a warm blanket. Outside, the monsoon rain had just begun, tapping lightly against the windowpanes with a rhythm that made the city seem far away. Anaya Rao sat curled up on her couch with a half-read book and a cup of cinnamon tea, the kind of day she rarely allowed herself to enjoy.

Then came the knock.

Not the doorbell—just a soft, deliberate knock. Once. Then again.

She frowned. Odd. Her apartment was on the top floor of a gated complex. The security guard didn’t let so much as a food delivery past the main gate without a background check.

Curious, she walked to the door and peered through the peephole.

A man stood there. He wore a grey trench coat and a wide-brimmed grey hat that cast a shadow over most of his face. He looked to be in his late sixties, perhaps older. Tall, lean, and completely still, like a painting come to life.

Something about him gave her pause.

“Who is it?” she asked through the door.

The man tilted his head and spoke in a voice that was calm and old-fashioned, as though from another time. “Miss Anaya Rao?”

“Who’s asking?”

“Someone who made a promise. A long time ago.”

Her fingers tightened around the door handle. “I think you’ve got the wrong person.”

“I don’t,” he said kindly. “You’re the daughter of Shyam and Meera Rao. Born June 9th, 1997. You used to have a small mole on your right collarbone, which was removed when you were twelve. Your mother called you ‘Chinni’ until you made her stop in the sixth grade.”

Anaya’s breath caught. No one outside her family would know that.

“Who are you?” she demanded, heart pounding.

“I can’t explain properly from the hallway,” he said softly. “But I promise you—I mean no harm. May I come in? Just for a moment?”

Everything inside her screamed don’t. But his voice was calm, sincere. Gentle, even. Like an old professor.

Against her better judgment, she unlatched the chain and opened the door.

The man stepped in slowly, removing his hat. His hair was silver, neatly cropped, and his eyes—sharp and intelligent—looked around her home as if it was already familiar.

She poured him tea. The cinnamon aroma mixed with the faint scent of rain through the open window.

“I was there the night you were born,” he said, holding the cup with both hands.

“You were the doctor?”

“No,” he said with a small smile. “Not quite. I was watching. I’ve always been watching.”

“Okay, now you sound like a stalker,” she said, half-joking but still uneasy.

“I’m not. Think of me more as… a guardian.”

“A guardian?”

He nodded. “I belong to a group—call us Watchers, if you like. We’re not spirits. Not angels. We’re simply assigned to watch over a single person’s life from beginning to end. To protect from the shadows. Gently. Silently.”

She blinked at him. “You’re saying you’ve been… following me? My whole life?”

“Yes. And I was never supposed to show myself. But today is special. Today is the last day I can be here.”

He reached into his coat and pulled out a small cream-colored envelope, worn at the edges. He handed it to her with reverence, as though passing on a final responsibility.

Her name was handwritten on it in careful loops. Anaya Rao.

Inside was a folded letter and a small, faded photograph. It showed a young girl—her—around age six, running near the sea with a kite in one hand and joy on her face. Behind her, in the blurry distance, stood a man in a grey hat.

She had no memory of this photo ever being taken.

“You nearly drowned that day,” he said softly. “You were chasing the kite. Your parents never knew how close it was. I pulled you back just before the wave could.”

Her hands trembled slightly as she unfolded the letter. It wasn’t long, but it listed strange, specific moments she remembered only vaguely:

“Moved you five steps away from a falling windowpane in 2010.”

“Left the yellow umbrella by the shop before the surprise storm.”

“Lit the streetlight outside your hostel when you returned late and scared.”

Her throat tightened. “All those times… that was you?”

“I never interfered unless I had to. You always had the strength in you. I only helped when it was just out of reach.”

She looked up at him, emotions welling.

“Why today?”

“Because I’ve done my part. You’re strong now. Independent. You’ve come through heartbreak and loss and built a life of purpose. Today, your life is no longer shaped by me. It belongs entirely to you.”

She whispered, “What happens to you?”

He smiled, eyes soft. “I move on. Perhaps to a newborn in Paris. Or a child in a refugee camp. I won’t know until I’m called.”

She stood with him, her heart full and aching. “Will I ever see you again?”

“Not like this. But you may feel something. On a quiet evening, when the rain taps gently and the tea tastes warmer than usual—you might remember a shadow in a grey hat and smile.”

She walked him to the door. The rain had stopped.

He turned once more, tipping his hat. “Live well, Anaya. Make it count.”

And with that, the man in the grey hat stepped into the hallway—and vanished.

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