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The Boy Who Remembered Her Heartbeat

Titir.choudhury2009
ROMANCE
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Submitted to Contest #3 in response to the prompt: 'A stranger comes to your door. What happens next?'

A stranger comes to your door.

He doesn’t knock. He just stands there, looking at the brass doorknob like it remembers him.

You open the door.

He’s young—maybe fifteen. Pale, with wind-bitten cheeks and eyes too ancient for his age. In his hand, he’s holding a tiny glass jar.

Inside it: a feather. Floating. Glowing faintly gold.

“I think this belongs to you,” he says.

You pause. “I’ve never seen that before.”

He smiles. A little sadly. “Not in this life.”

You laugh, unsure. "Are you lost?"

He shakes his head. “I’m exactly where I was told to be. I promised you I'd come back.”

“Do I know you?”

“Not yet,” he says. “But your heart does.”

You let him in because something about him is familiar—not his face, but the air around him, the way he stands too still, like someone who’s listened to silence for centuries.

He sits without asking. Places the jar on your table like it's sacred.

“I don’t remember my name,” he says. “But I remember your heartbeat.”

You're not sure if he’s crazy or if you’re dreaming. But you sit too.

“What does that mean?”

He looks up. “We died together once. A long, long time ago.”

You blink. “What?”

“In the year 1321,” he says softly, “we were burned at the stake for loving each other. Forbidden love. They called us witches.”

You open your mouth to interrupt, but he keeps going.

“You gave me the feather before they lit the fire. Said it was from the last bird that ever sang for us. You said, ‘Keep this, so one day, when you find me again, I’ll remember how to fly.’”

Your breath catches.

“I… I’ve never told anyone about that dream,” you whisper.

The boy nods. “You’ve dreamed it since you were seven, right? The fire. The feather. A name you can’t pronounce.”

You stare at him.

In the deepest corner of your memory, there is a name. Buried like a seed that never bloomed. You’ve tried saying it aloud before, in the mirror. It never sounded human.

He leans forward. “I was trapped in the in-between. I stayed there for hundreds of years, waiting to be born again. I didn’t know when or where. Just that your heartbeat would call me back.”

You ask questions. He answers them like stories.

He says time isn’t a line. It’s a spiral. That some people meet again in lifetimes when the world is softer. That souls who die in pain often leave fragments behind—sounds, scents, dreams.

You ask why you.

He says, “Because you never stopped listening.”

He tells you how you used to hum in your sleep when you were little—three notes, over and over. The melody from a lullaby that doesn’t exist anymore. The one you used to sing to him before they came.

He sings it now.

And it’s the exact tune.

For weeks, he stays.

He doesn’t eat much. Sleeps curled on the window bench, always watching the stars like he knows them personally.

Sometimes he cries in his sleep.

Once, you find him whispering to the jar. The feather now glows brighter, pulsing softly, like a second heartbeat in the room.

You take him to doctors. They find nothing wrong.

You take him to a priest. He tells you the boy has the eyes of someone who's seen the other side.

You take him to your childhood home. In the attic, hidden in a box, you find a drawing you made when you were five: a burning field, two people holding hands, and a bird flying overhead.

One night, he wakes you.

“I have to go,” he says.

“No,” you say. “Stay. Please.”

“I’m not meant to be in this time. Not fully. I only came to return the feather.”

He places the jar in your hand. The moment your skin touches the glass, you feel it.

Not warmth—recognition.

Your eyes fill. “Who are you?”

He smiles. “Just a soul that made a promise.”

You open the jar. The feather rises on its own and floats toward you, landing softly against your chest.

And then you remember.

Everything.

The fields. The fire. The first time he kissed you under an eclipse. The way he whispered your name like it was holy.

The last thing you ever said to each other: “Next time, no flames.”

You look at him, really look, and for a second, his face shifts—not aging, not changing—but becoming more true. Like a reflection finally matching the soul beneath.

He hugs you.

It feels like coming home.

“I’ll find you again,” he says. “In a time where they don’t burn people for love.”

“Promise?”

He nods. “Even if it takes another thousand years.”

And then he walks out the door, into the rain.

You follow, but he's already gone.

No footsteps. No boy. Just the jar, empty now, glowing faintly in your hands.

A year later, you publish a book.
“The Boy Who Remembered Her Heartbeat.”

People ask if it’s fiction.
You smile and say, “Not entirely.”

And sometimes, when it rains, you hear that old melody in the wind—three notes, soft as a memory.

And you whisper into the night:

“No flames. Just wings, next time.”

Some souls don’t come to stay forever. They come to return what we left behind—so we can remember how to fly.

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Wow. The story felt like a dream. Loved it

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