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A Twilight of Realization

Indurkhya Manish
FANTASY
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Submitted to Contest #3 in response to the prompt: 'Your character wakes up in a different world. What do they do?'

On a Saturday evening, beneath the steady glow of my desk lamp, my thoughts spun like restless moths against the glass of my tired mind. Every breath I drew felt heavy, as though the weight of a thousand unanswered questions pressed against my chest. Then, without warning, the lamp’s light dimmed, and the walls of my room dissolved into woven reeds and dripping shadows. My heartbeat slowed until I heard only the steady pulse of another world calling me forward. In that hushed moment—between despair and wonder—I stepped beyond the familiar and found myself standing in the soft, humming twilight of a realm I could never have imagined. I realized, nature had unexpectedly opened a new chapter of progress before my eyes.

It wasn’t a dream, nor a nightmare. It was something strange in between—a twilight realm that looked like our world in many ways, yet its journey of evolution was strikingly different.

In this world, mosquitoes had made incredible progress. Though they still depended on warm-blooded beings like humans to survive, their intelligence, technical skills, and societal development had advanced far beyond what we could imagine. They had begun extracting and storing pure, rich blood from various creatures using sophisticated methods. This blood not only nourished them by various secondary and tertiary processed food products but was also used in industries they had developed as raw material.

Even though this caused a steady decline in the number and health of their host species, the mosquitoes seemed indifferent. Their evolution had lifted them beyond the ugly image of mere bloodsucking pests. Over countless generations, guided silently by evolution and sharpened by science and thought, they had become creatures of intelligence, language, and purpose. Their society was woven from threads of biology, culture, and logic.
One evening, under a shimmering sky and deep within the glowing heart of a swamp, a grand mosquito council had gathered. Their majestic hall buzzed with energy. The meeting was led by the wise and revered Professor Vesper, a renowned scholar whose recent discoveries had shaken the foundation of mosquito philosophy.

Through careful experiments and deep research, Vesper had uncovered a troubling truth that could no longer be ignored. While mosquitoes thrived on the blood of humans and animals, they had unknowingly been spreading diseases through hidden passengers—viruses and bacteria—that were weakening and killing their hosts.

For centuries, mosquitoes had fed without question, raised their young, and ensured the survival of their species. But Vesper’s discovery revealed a silent disaster hidden in their genes: if their hosts died out, mosquitoes too would soon face extinction. No host meant no life. Survival, they now understood, wasn’t just about taking from nature—it meant protecting the future of all species, including their own.

This revelation sparked a storm of debate. But as the last light of day faded behind the swamp, something profound happened. In a historic and unanimous vote, the council declared the beginning of a "Scientific Renaissance of Ethics." From that moment, mosquitoes would no longer feed on weak or ill creatures. Instead, they would help them recover.

That night, as dew fell like silver rain and echoed softly in the wetlands, the council voted once again—not just for survival, but for transcendence. The new path would be difficult. It would require sacrifice, discomfort, and the courage to leave behind the comforts of dependency. But it was the path forward. Not because they were perfect—but because they had finally chosen to listen to the quiet warnings of nature.

A new age began. Young mosquito scientists developed gentle detection methods to identify and avoid sick hosts. Advanced sensors in their wings warned them if a potential target was too ill. It wasn’t kindness that drove them—it was enlightened self-preservation. Still, their actions held great meaning. Thousands of animals, once imprisoned in factories for their blood, were released within days. For many sick creatures, research centres began developing vaccines. Now, the mosquitoes used blood solely for nourishing their eggs.

News of this change spread like wildfire through the wetlands and rivers. The world, once tormented by their stings, now looked upon their transformation in wonder. Once known only for mindless pain, mosquitoes had become guardians of ecological balance. Under starlit skies, they held gatherings, exchanged wisdom with other species, and spoke in the universal language of coexistence.

And yet, as the night deepened and stars blinked in the velvet sky, I slowly awoke from this strange experience with a long sigh. One thought kept circling my mind:

“Are we not, as humans, exploiting every form of life on this Earth—and nature itself—just as those mosquitoes once did? Professor Vesper succeeded in awakening the minds of mosquitoes, but can he ever ignite that same understanding in us—especially when so many still kill their own in the name of religion, nationalism, or racism?”
The question was gentle—and piercing. Like the sting of a hidden truth.

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Very nice

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I like this story.....................

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A Suitable Fantasy for school kids

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