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The sky below her feet.

Anu Singh
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Submitted to Contest #3 in response to the prompt: 'Your character wakes up in a different world. What do they do?'

Aaravi woke up gasping, as if the air had forgotten her lungs.

Expecting the cracked ceiling of her Mumbai apartment, she opened her eyes—only to find herself lying on a glass bridge suspended high in the sky. Below her, clouds drifted like cotton islands. Strange birds with translucent wings danced in the sky beneath her, as though gravity had retired.

The air smelled like honey and starlight.

She sat up slowly, her hands trembling as they touched the smooth, glowing surface beneath her. Where was she? Her last memory was falling asleep at her cluttered desk, drained from weeks of lectures, unfinished paintings, and unspoken disappointments. Her final-year art project—a girl on a swing tied to the moon—still sat incomplete, half-bathed in moonlight and grief.

Now, she was barefoot. Dressed in a weightless white shift that moved like silk underwater.

Above her, the sky was an ocean of floating islands. Forests hung midair like anchored ships, and in the distance, a spiral city turned slowly, its buildings made of light that pulsed with soft color—changing hue with the emotions of its citizens. She didn’t know how she knew that.

She just did.

“Am I dreaming?” she whispered.

“No,” said a voice behind her. “But this is what dreaming feels like—when it’s real.”

She turned.

A boy stood a few feet away, no older than ten, with golden eyes and skin like burnished stone. He looked at her the way someone might look at a painting they once loved and lost.

“Who are you?” she asked.

“I’m a memory,” he said. “Of someone you used to be.”

Her breath caught. “What is this place?”

“The Echo Realm,” he replied. “Where all unlived lives go. Every ‘what if,’ every forgotten version of yourself comes here to wait.”

Aaravi blinked at him, her heart thudding like a war drum. “Why am I here?”

He tilted his head. “Because you almost gave up.”

She looked down. Her fingers clenched. “I didn’t mean to.”

“I know,” he said softly. “But pain has a way of thinning the veil between worlds. Last night, when you cried into your painting, you opened a door without realizing. And walked through.”

The bridge beneath them hummed faintly, alive and listening.

He took a step closer. “You’re here to choose.”

“Choose what?”

“To return. Or to stay.”

Aaravi stared. “Why would I stay?”

He turned and pointed toward the horizon, where something shimmered like liquid gold.

“To see what you could have been. If you had never stopped believing. Here, your art becomes real. Here, your fear cannot cage you.”

She hesitated. “And if I go back?”

“You’ll have to fight for every brushstroke,” he said. “But it will be real. And it will be yours.”

Without waiting, he reached for her hand.

She followed him across the bridge, the glass warm beneath her feet. As they walked, memories floated around them like fireflies—her first drawing of a house with a crooked sun, her mother sticking it to the fridge. Her father sitting beside her, painting skies. The night she got rejected from the art gallery and nearly threw her sketchbook into the fire.

“So many no’s,” the boy said quietly. “But what if you began to say yes?”

At the end of the bridge, the world unfolded like a dream made of paint and music. An ocean of floating canvases rippled before her. Each one moved—alive, evolving, unfinished.

One canvas floated close. Aaravi gasped.

It was her.

Older. Stronger. Laughing in a sunlit Parisian alley, paint on her cheeks, surrounded by children sketching chalk rainbows on cobblestones. Her eyes shimmered with joy—not because she was fearless, but because she’d walked through fear and kept going.

“That’s you,” the boy whispered, “if you keep painting.”

Tears welled in her eyes. “I want to be her.”

“You still can.”

“But I’m tired,” she confessed. “So tired of trying. What if I never make it?”

He held her gaze, serious now. “Stay, and you’ll live in this perfect version. But no one in your world will ever see it. They’ll remember you as the girl who almost made it. Whose art almost touched the sky.”

She swallowed hard.

“Or,” he said gently, “you wake up. You try again. Even if your hands shake.”

A golden feather floated down from the sky, landing in her palm. It was her favorite brush—now glowing, weightless, warm.

She clutched it to her chest. “I’m scared.”

“So was she,” he smiled, nodding toward the version of her in the painting. “She still is. But she paints anyway.”

The wind rose. The bridge began to fade.

Aaravi looked down.

Below her, the world spun with all its mess and doubt and wonder.

She closed her eyes.

And jumped.


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She woke with a start.

Back in her room. The fan hummed. The window whispered with wind.

Her face was damp with tears.

The unfinished painting stood before her. The girl on the swing still hung from a moon made of silence. But now, Aaravi knew how it ended.

She reached for her brush, hands trembling—not with fear, but with fire.

This time, she painted not to survive. Not to be seen.

She painted to speak.

Because somewhere, in a sky made of memory and possibility, a forgotten version of herself had waited patiently for her return.

And this time, she wasn’t going to forget.

Not again.

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