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The Unexpected Visitor

DISHA SHAH
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Submitted to Contest #3 in response to the prompt: 'A stranger comes to your door. What happens next?'



It was a humid afternoon in Mumbai, the kind where the air feels too thick to breathe and even the ceiling fan seems exhausted. I had just settled into my favorite chair with a cup of chai when the doorbell rang — a long, hesitant ring, not the kind that neighbors usually press.

I wasn't expecting anyone.

I walked slowly to the door, peered through the peephole, and saw a woman standing there. She looked to be in her late twenties, modestly dressed, holding a small purse tightly in her hand. Her face showed no signs of aggression — only nervousness. Still, in a city like Mumbai, caution is not just wise, it's essential.

I opened the door just slightly and asked, “Yes? Who are you?”

She seemed startled but quickly gathered herself. “I’m sorry to disturb you,” she said softly, “My name is Riya. I was on my way to meet someone nearby, but my phone died and I’ve lost the address. I just need to make a call — could I please charge my phone or borrow yours just for a minute?”

Her voice was polite, her body language non-threatening. Still, my mind ticked through the warnings my parents, the news, and even neighbors had drilled into me. Never trust a stranger too easily.

I paused. Everything about her seemed harmless, but instinct and caution were my companions. I asked a few more questions — where she was going, who she was meeting, and if she had any ID. She quickly showed me her Aadhar card, which matched her story.

Her sincerity seemed genuine, and something in her expression reminded me of myself on the day I first arrived in this city. Lost, overwhelmed, and just looking for a bit of help.

So, I opened the door wider and said, “Come in, but just for a few minutes. You can sit down and charge your phone.”

She thanked me repeatedly, walking in cautiously and taking a seat on the wooden chair near the window. I offered her a glass of water. She hesitated at first — probably unsure whether to trust me too — but then accepted it with a soft “Thank you.”

As she plugged in her phone, she kept glancing at it, as if praying it would turn on faster. I sat across from her, watching her calmly but carefully. My mind remained alert — ready to call security or close the door if anything felt wrong. In Mumbai, where kindness and crime often share narrow lanes, careful behavior is a necessity.

Her phone finally buzzed to life. She sighed in relief and called someone — probably a friend or relative. She spoke briefly, sharing her location, then looked up at me.

“I’m so sorry to trouble you,” she said. “My cousin is nearby — he’s coming to pick me up.”

“No trouble,” I replied, though my heart had not completely relaxed. There was still the possibility that this was all a setup. I subtly moved my handbag and valuables out of plain sight.

Ten minutes later, a man arrived at my building. He seemed anxious and grateful when he saw her. He thanked me for helping his cousin and explained that her phone had been acting up all day.

They both left with polite goodbyes, and I locked the door behind them, finally able to breathe fully.

I sat back down and thought about the whole experience. What if it had been a trick? What if I had let in the wrong person? But also — what if I hadn’t helped someone who genuinely needed it?

In a city of millions, human connection is rare. Yet safety must always come first.

That night, I replayed the scene in my head. I had asked the right questions, taken small precautions, and offered help while still protecting myself. It wasn’t about being paranoid — it Title: The Stranger at My Door

It was a humid Thursday afternoon in Mumbai. The ceiling fan whirred above, working hard but barely making a dent in the oppressive summer heat. The street outside buzzed faintly with the sound of rickshaws, honking cars, and the calls of chai vendors. I had just returned from college and was settling in for a quiet day indoors. That’s when the doorbell rang.

Unusual.

Our building wasn’t one where unexpected guests showed up. Visitors usually called in advance, and delivery personnel rarely came to the door directly. I walked cautiously toward the entrance, paused, and peered through the peephole.

There stood a young woman, maybe in her early twenties. She looked nervous, almost uncertain, and wore simple clothes — a plain kurta and jeans, hair tied back in a loose bun. She wasn’t someone I recognized from the building or neighborhood.

I opened the door just slightly, keeping the chain latch fastened. “Yes?” I asked, voice steady.

She gave a small, respectful smile. “Namaste. Sorry to bother you. My name is Anaya. My phone was stolen on the train, and I got down here because I started feeling dizzy. I don’t have money or any way to contact my family. Could I please use your phone to call my father?”

I watched her carefully. Her voice was soft, respectful. Nothing about her seemed threatening. Still, my mind raced. What if this was a setup? Mumbai was no stranger to scams, con artists, or worse. My parents always said to be cautious. But what if she was telling the truth?

I decided to err on the side of cautious kindness.

I shut the door, unhooked the latch, and reopened it fully. “You can come in for a moment,” I said. “Please have a seat.”

She entered slowly, grateful but unsure. “Thank you,” she murmured. I offered her a chair and fetched a glass of water. She drank it gratefully, the glass shaking slightly in her hands.

I handed her my phone. “You said you need to call your father?”

She nodded and dialed the number from memory. As the phone rang, her face shifted — a strange mixture of hope and tension.

“Papa?” she said as the call connected. “Yes, it’s me, Anaya… I’m okay… no, I’m not at the hostel, something happened…”

She turned slightly away, clearly emotional. I stepped back, giving her space but watching carefully.

The call lasted less than two minutes. When she ended it, she turned back to me. “Thank you so much. My father is coming to pick me up. He was so worried…”

I nodded. “Where do you study?”

“St. Xavier’s,” she replied immediately, and even named her department — sociology. I cross-checked in my head. That wasn’t far from here. It made sense.

“Why did you get down here, though? This area isn’t exactly close to Churchgate,” I asked.

“There was a problem on the train… some argument between passengers, and I got scared. I just got off at the next station, which I think was Dadar. Then I wandered a bit to find help.”

Plausible again.

But something still didn’t sit perfectly. Her story had no glaring holes, yet there was an undercurrent of tension I couldn’t shake off.

Ten minutes passed. I offered her another glass of water, and she thanked me again.

I said, gently but firmly, “I hope you understand — I let you in because you seemed sincere. But I don’t usually invite strangers in.”

She nodded quickly. “I know. I wouldn’t usually ask. I was just desperate.”

I believed her.

But then came the knock.

This time, I was the one frozen.

She glanced at the door and then at me. “That must be Papa.”

My heart rate quickened. Could it be? Or was this the real twist?

I walked to the door slowly, this time even more careful. I peered through the peephole. A middle-aged man stood there. Thick glasses. Concern on his face. He was holding a helmet — probably came on a scooter.

“Hello?” I called through the door.

“Is Anaya inside?” he asked. “I’m her father. She called me from your phone.”

The voice was kind. Sincere.

I opened the door cautiously. Anaya stood behind me, and the moment they saw each other, something shifted. He rushed forward and hugged her tightly. “I was so scared,” he whispered.

She was trembling. “I’m sorry, Papa.”

I stepped aside. “She said her phone was stolen. She seemed in distress.”

He turned to me, gratitude plain on his face. “You did more than most people would. Thank you, beta. Thank you very much.”

They sat for another few minutes. I offered chai, but they declined politely. Then, with more words of thanks, they left.

As I closed the door behind them, I felt something shift within me. I had helped someone. Maybe even saved her from something worse. But at the same time, I felt vulnerable. What if I’d been wrong?

The next day, I got a text from an unknown number.

“Hi, this is Anaya. Thank you again for yesterday. I reached safely and got a new SIM. My father said you were very kind. I hope we can stay in touch, even just as friends.”

I smiled.

Six Months Later

Anaya and I did stay in touch.

Occasional messages turned into regular chats. We met a few times — always in public spaces. She really was a sociology student, and she had really lost her phone that day. Over time, I heard more about her life: the pressure of studies, family tensions, and her hopes to work in NGOs. I told her about my dreams too — to work in tech, to travel, maybe even to study abroad one day.

Then one day, she messaged me: “I’m applying for an internship in Dharavi for a community outreach program. Would you help me prep for the interview?”

Of course, I agreed.

We met at a quiet café in Matunga. I brought my laptop and we went over possible questions. I even helped her polish her resume. After two hours, she seemed more confident.

“You know,” she said, sipping her coffee, “I still think about that day.”

“What day?”

“When I came to your door.”

I chuckled. “Me too. I wasn’t sure whether to let you in.”

“I could tell,” she said, smiling. “But I’m glad you did.”

A Year Later

Life moved on. I got a job in a tech startup. Anaya was now part of an NGO working with underprivileged children. We still met now and then. Once, she invited me to a small street play her team had written about safety and awareness in urban spaces. It was powerful.

Afterward, we stood outside, watching the kids laugh and run around.

“You’ve changed,” I told her.

“So have you.”

“No,” I said, smiling. “You’ve become braver.”

She shrugged. “Maybe. Or maybe I was always brave. Just scared sometimes.”

I nodded. “We all are.”

Then she said something I’ll never forget.

“You know, that day, when I knocked on your door… you didn’t just help me. You reminded me that people can be kind. That strangers aren’t always threats. But also, you were cautious. You balanced it. That’s what I remember most.”

Present Day

It’s been three years since that afternoon.

Anaya now leads her own NGO. I still work in tech, but I volunteer with her organization when I can. We’re close friends — perhaps even more, though we haven’t named it yet.

Sometimes we speak to college students about digital safety, trust, and awareness. And often, I tell the story of the day she came to my door.

“I opened the door with caution,” I tell them, “but I didn’t shut out compassion. That’s the balance we need in cities like ours. In lives like ours.”

Reflection

In a city like Mumbai — vast, chaotic, full of wonder and danger — strangers can be anything. Friends. Foes. Stories waiting to unfold. Being careful is necessary. But so is keeping a sliver of openness.

If I had shut the door that day, I might have never known Anaya. Never helped her. Never changed my own perspective.

Yes, some people mean harm. But not all.

Sometimes, when a stranger knocks, the story that follows can be one of trust, growth, and lifelong impact — if we walk the line between caution and kindness with wisdom.




















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