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"The World Beyond the Dawn"

DISHA SHAH
MYSTERY
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Submitted to Contest #3 in response to the prompt: 'Your character wakes up in a different world. What do they do?'


I don’t remember falling asleep. One moment, I was gazing at the stars from my window, and the next, I awoke under a sky far too vast, too strange to be familiar. The sun wasn’t the same; it shone in hues of amber and violet. The air smelled of something between pine and spice. The ground beneath me felt alive—soft, warm, and humming with energy.

I sat up slowly, taking everything in. The trees reached higher than skyscrapers, with leaves that shimmered like glass. Strange birds with luminous feathers glided silently overhead. There were no buildings, no signs of civilization, yet the world did not feel empty.

Many thoughts rushed through my mind:
Where am I?
What happened to my world?
Am I dreaming or dead?

But surprisingly, I didn’t panic. I took a deep breath. And then another.

"Accept," I whispered to myself. "Accept and adapt."

This wasn’t fear. It was awe. Somewhere deep inside, I understood that this place was meant for me—or maybe I was meant for it. I stood, brushed the soft dust from my clothes, and looked around.

There was no obvious path, but something inside pulled me forward. I started walking.

I wandered for what felt like hours—maybe even days. Time here was different. The sky changed colors, not from light to dark, but through waves of deep blue, gold, then silver. I didn’t grow tired or hungry. I was simply...present.

Eventually, I reached a wide plain where the grass sang softly in the wind. In the center stood a figure cloaked in white, face hidden beneath a hood.

“You came,” the figure said.

“I woke up here,” I replied calmly. “Who are you?”

The figure tilted their head. “That depends. Who are you?”

I paused.

“In my world,” I said, “I was someone who worked, struggled, loved, feared. But here... I am still me. Nothing changed inside.”

The figure nodded. “You accepted this world without resistance. That is rare.”

“Resistance wastes energy,” I said. “Faith gives strength. Whatever this place is, I trust I’m meant to be here.”

The figure slowly lowered their hood. They looked... like me. Not exactly, but close—like a version of me who had aged through centuries, who had seen countless worlds.

“You are a Seeker,” they said. “This world responds to the mind. Most people shape it with fear. You shape it with peace.”

And as they spoke, the world around us shimmered—trees gently bent toward me, flowers bloomed at my feet. I realized then: this place was alive, and it listened.

I traveled further, led by instinct, faith, and something else: a quiet inner light. I met other beings—some humanoid, some nothing like anything I’d ever seen.

One was a child made of stars, who laughed and danced through the air.

“Why aren’t you afraid?” she asked as she floated around me.

“I don’t know,” I said honestly. “Maybe because fear closes doors. I’d rather see what’s behind them.”

She giggled. “Then come!” And suddenly, I was flying beside her, soaring through skies lit with moons and suns. When we landed, she whispered, “This world doesn’t test your strength. It reveals it.”

At one point, I entered a dark forest, where even the air seemed to weigh heavily on my shoulders. Strange whispers followed me, shadows danced just beyond the edge of my vision.

“This is the place of doubt,” said a voice—my own voice. A shadow stepped forward, identical to me but twisted slightly, darker.

“You think you’re brave,” it said. “But you don’t know what’s coming.”

I faced it, heart steady. “I don’t need to know. I only need to walk forward.”

The shadow lunged, but it passed through me like mist. I didn’t fight it. I accepted it, and it vanished.

There were moments of loneliness, of course. In a world where nothing is familiar, it’s easy to feel isolated. But every time that emotion stirred, something beautiful would happen—a tree would bloom nearby, or an animal would sit beside me in silent companionship.

I realized this world mirrored my heart. When I doubted, the world grew darker. When I hoped, the sun returned. My faith, not just in myself but in something greater—God, the universe, a divine force—kept the world vibrant.

I whispered prayers each night, even when I didn’t know if someone was listening.

“Guide me,” I would say. “Wherever this path leads, I walk it with open eyes.”

Eventually, I found a city—not made of stone or metal, but of light. Towers shimmered like crystal; bridges floated on clouds. Beings of all shapes moved together in harmony.

A woman greeted me at the entrance. Her eyes were galaxies.

“You have arrived,” she said.

“Where?”

“This is the Heartplace,” she answered. “Where those who accept the call come to serve.”

“Serve?”

She smiled gently. “You have proven your soul’s readiness. You passed through fear, through uncertainty, with grace. Many resist the world’s call. You embraced it. That means you can help others.”

And so, I stayed. Not as a ruler or savior, but as a Guide. When others woke up in this strange world—frightened, lost—I was there to meet them.

“It’s okay,” I’d tell them. “You’re not alone. Breathe. Walk with me.”

Some would cry. Others would shout. But eventually, like me, they’d start to see the beauty. They’d let go of fear. And the world would bloom around them.

I built a small home near a waterfall, where the water sang of peace. I wrote in journals, painted the skies with thoughts, planted trees with hope. Time passed—not as days, but as moments of meaning.

I never searched for a way back. Not because I didn’t care about the old world, but because this world needed me now. Maybe someday I would return. Maybe I already had, in another form.

One night, under a moon that pulsed like a heartbeat, I sat by a fire and thought about that first moment—the waking.

How easy it would have been to panic. To scream. To fight.

But I didn’t.

I accepted.

And that changed everything.

I looked at my hands—steady, weathered, kind.

Then at the world—ever-changing, ever-responsive.

And finally, upward—toward a sky that had no end.

“I am here,” I whispered. “Wherever here may be. And it is enough.”

The End.


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