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Reflections

Krish Panwar
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Submitted to Contest #3 in response to the prompt: 'Your character wakes up in a different world. What do they do?'

The silence hit Riley first. Not calm or quiet, but strange—like the world had halted mid-sentence. Riley sat up in bed, scowling. Something was. different.

The bedroom was familiar-looking—same bedspread, same posters adorning the walls, same quiet whir of the ceiling fan. But details were off. The bookshelf was on the left side of the room, not the right. The desk had its familiar scratch—but on the wrong side. Even the print on the posters seemed reversed, as if viewed in a mirror.

Riley's stomach coiled. They stood up slowly, bare feet against the chilly floor. The room was theirs, but not. A funhouse replica.

They turned to the dresser mirror—and stopped.

Their image confronted them, but something was amiss. It moved a heartbeat behind. It blinked when Riley didn't. Its grin was too precise, too symmetrical.

A chill ran up their spine.

They yanked their phone off the nightstand. The lock screen glowed.

May 20, 5025.

Not 2025.

The screen clock reversed—3:34, 3:33, 3:32.

"What the hell?" they whispered.

Their voice felt strange. Echoy, as if it had rebounded from glass before reaching their ears.

A knock resonated through the apartment.

Sharp. Rhythmic.

Riley crept toward the front door, every nerve in their body protesting. Looking through the peephole, they didn't see the hallway.

They saw their own face.

Their own face—but not exactly. The skin of the figure on the other side of the glass was pale and smooth, too smooth. Dark, glinting eyes like black marble. And the smile—wide, untroubled, too frozen—stretched a fraction too wide.

Then the door swung open by itself.

The reflection came into the room. Exactly like Riley in shape, but the aura it had was unfamiliar. Cold.

"Welcome," it said. "You made it.

Made it where?" Riley stepped back, almost falling over a chair.

The reflection cocked its head. "The Mirror World. You crossed over."

"This isn't happening."

"You stared too long. Whispered your name backwards into the glass, didn't you? At 3:33 a.m.?"

Riley's eyes widened. A memory materialized. A TikTok challenge. A joke, actually. "Summon your 'Other' self in the mirror," the video instructed. "Try it at 3:33 a.m. for creepy vibes.

They’d done it for fun.

“You opened a door,” the reflection said. “Now you’re on this side.”

“I want to go back.”

“Then follow me.”

Outside, the city glimmered. At first sight, it resembled home—same design, same buildings—but all details were in reverse. Street signs, vehicles, even the populace. Mirrors moved in haunting silence, all with that same flawless smile. Some sported slightly incorrect features: too many teeth, or eyes that never blinked. They all gazed at Riley as they moved.

Time moved oddly here. The sun hovered in the western sky, frozen. Cars glided by without engines. There was no sound of wind. No birds. Just that heavy, artificial silence.

The reflection led Riley through the city. “You’re rare,” it said. “Most people who come here fall apart. The mind can’t always handle being unreflected. You’ve lasted longer than most.”

“I didn’t ask for this.”

"You did," the reflection replied, not ungraciously. "You wanted to know what lay beyond. Mirrors are not just glass. They recall. They reflect what you refuse."

They thought they came to an enormous building—black glass rising to the heavens, curling like molten obsidian. Faces rippled on its surface. Some were Riley's. Others were not.

"This is the Spire," the reflection explained. "It's where the decision is made."

"What decision?"

"You will find out."

Within, the Spire throbbed with icy light. Mirrors covered every wall—some whole, others shattered. As they moved, Riley noticed changing images: memories from childhood, moments from shame, joy, and sorrow. Every mirror seemed to recognize them.

At the end of a lengthy corridor was a vast circular room, bathed in gloom. In the center, on a throne of broken glass, was a humanlike creature that shimmered and changed with every blink.

It had no face. Instead, it bore Riley's—dozens of iterations, perpetually shifting in and out of focus.

The Mirror King.

"You've crossed the veil," it told him, its voice multilayered, as if a thousand Rileys spoke simultaneously. "Now you must choose."

"Choose what?"

"To go back," it replied, "you must confront the truth of who you are. Not what the world sees—but the totality of every possibility."

A mirror sprang up out of the ground. In it, Riley saw a version of themselves—older, exhausted, stooped, their eyes empty.

"This is you if fear makes every decision," the King said.

Another mirror emerged. This Riley stood on a stage, sure, successful, eyes keen.

"This is you if ambition reigns."

More mirrors sprang up—Riley loving, Riley isolated, Riley cruel, Riley kind, Riley famous, Riley forgotten.

Each one seemed real. Solid. Feasible.

"Your choice must be made," the Mirror King declared. "Whatever reflection you take will decide your course of action once you are home."

Riley examined the mirrors. There were some pleasant ones. There were some frightening ones. They were all attractive.

"I don't want any of them," they said. "I don't want a dream."

"These aren't dreams. They're realities—pieces of what you could become. They all carry significance."

Riley shook her head. "I don't want to be a version. I want to be me. Whatever that is."

The Mirror King cocked its head. Its face flickered—child Riley, grown-up Riley, angry Riley, laughing Riley.

"You reject perfection?"

"I prefer imperfection," Riley said. "It's real."

The mirrors started to crack.

The chamber trembled.

The Mirror King did not flinch. It merely whispered, "Then you pass."

A mighty wind screamed as mirrors splintered. Light burst from the ground. Walls of the Spire broke apart into a whirl of silver pieces. Riley was plummeting—through reflections, memories, moments. All mirrors they'd ever gazed into whizzed by—bathroom mirrors, shopping windows, a puddle underfoot on a rainy day.

Then, stillness.

Then—awakening.

Riley came up in bed, racing heart.

The room was fine. The bookshelf was to the right. The posters displayed correctly. The phone displayed May 20, 2025, and the clock ticked onward.

They turned to the mirror.

Their reflection gazed back.

Fine.

Except that something was different. Slight.

For a nanosecond, Riley could have sworn they caught their reflection winking.

And then it vanished.

Later, Riley attempted to forget. They covered mirrors. They replaced the one in the hallway. But reflections are difficult to escape. In car windows. On phone screens. In shiny metal.

Now and then, for just a split second, their reflection would drift slightly out of sync. Smile before Riley did. Or sustain their gaze a fraction too long.

And each night, at 3:33 a.m., Riley woke from fitful sleep, racing heart. In the stillness, sometimes they heard a faint whisper behind the glass.

"Choose."

They never gazed into a mirror after that time of night again.

Because once you've glimpsed the Mirror World, it never quite releases you.

It waits.

It remembers.

And someday, it may summon you back.

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