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The Day the Sky Changed

Deepak Kairwal
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Submitted to Contest #3 in response to the prompt: 'Your character wakes up in a different world. What do they do?'

When Kael opened his eyes, the sky was wrong.

It wasn’t the dull grey of city mornings, nor the bruised pink of sunset. It shimmered like oil spilled on water — ripples of amethyst and green stretching into infinity. Two moons floated above him, one cracked like old pottery, the other pulsing with veins of gold.

He blinked. Sat up. The grass beneath his fingers was soft, cobalt-blue, and it hummed faintly.

This wasn’t Earth.

His heart thudded in his chest, a mix of confusion and awe. His jeans were still dusty, his shoes scuffed, but the air around him thrummed with something deeper — older — as if the world itself was alive and breathing.

Then came the growl.

He spun toward the sound.

A creature stood at the edge of a glowing forest. It looked like a wolf made of smoke and stars, its eyes twin comets burning through the mist. It stared at Kael, then bowed.

Bowed.

“Okay,” Kael muttered, voice shaky, “either I’m dreaming, dead, or stuck in someone else’s fantasy.”

But the thorn that pricked his palm and the scent of cinnamon and ash riding the breeze were real enough.

A voice came from behind, clear and musical, with a teasing undertone.

“You’re not supposed to be here yet, Earthborn.”

Kael turned. A woman stood there — tall, draped in robes that shifted colors with her breath, like liquid light. Her silver eyes gleamed, her hair woven with glowing threads.

“Where… am I?” he asked.

She smiled softly. “The realm between. A place outside time and space where choices are made.”

Kael swallowed hard. “Choices? What do you mean?”

“The balance of your world is broken,” she said, stepping closer. “Your people have forgotten to listen — to the earth, the sky, the silence between. The scale has tipped, and now both your world and this one face destruction.”

He stared at her, the reality sinking in.

“But you,” she continued, voice gentle but firm, “you have a rare gift. You dream still. You question. That makes you dangerous… and necessary.”

The starry wolf circled him now, brushing against his side like a protector.

Kael looked up at the strange sky, then down at his trembling hands. Far in the distance, towers rose like teeth, crackling with lightning that flowed upward.

He took a deep breath, steadying himself.

“Alright,” he said, “what do I have to do?”

Her smile was tinged with sadness. “You must choose which world to save.”


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Chapter Two: The Choice

The woman introduced herself as Liora — guardian of the realm between. She told Kael that his Earth had fallen into decay, poisoned by neglect and greed, while this new world, Ae’thralis, thrived on magic but teetered on the brink of collapse from a war between ancient forces.

Kael was told he could only save one.

If he chose Earth, Ae’thralis would fade away like a dream lost at dawn. If he chose Ae’thralis, Earth would plunge into darkness and ruin.

The weight of the decision crushed him.

Liora handed him a glowing shard—the Heart of Ae’thralis—its pulse synced with his own heartbeat.

“This shard will show you visions of what could be. Choose wisely.”


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Chapter Three: Visions of Two Worlds

Kael closed his eyes and held the shard tight.

Suddenly, he was standing in his old neighborhood. The air was thick with smog. Trees wilted in cracked parks. Children wore masks. His mother’s voice echoed from memory, worried and tired.

Then the scene shifted.

He stood in a meadow under Ae’thralis’s twin moons. Creatures of light danced, rivers sang, and the forests pulsed with life. But shadows lurked—battles fought, cities burned, magic tearing the land apart.

Kael felt their pain, their hope, and the fragile thread that held them all together.


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Chapter Four: The Journey Begins

Liora explained that to make his choice, Kael must journey through Ae’thralis and understand its people, its struggles, and why it deserved saving. Only by seeing beyond the surface could he find the truth.

Accompanied by the starry wolf — whom Kael named Astra — they set off toward the glowing forest.

Along the way, Kael met beings of all kinds: a warrior who wielded light like a sword, a scholar seeking lost knowledge, and a child who whispered to plants.

Each shared stories of a world both beautiful and broken.


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Chapter Five: Trials of the Heart

Kael faced tests — physical and moral. He rescued villagers from magical storms, helped heal the wounded, and confronted his own fears.

In moments of quiet, Astra would nudge him gently, as if reminding him that the wolf’s own fate was tied to this land.

One night under the golden moon, Liora appeared again.

“The final choice is yours,” she said softly.

“But how?” Kael asked. “Both worlds need me.”

“Sometimes,” Liora replied, “saving one world can inspire the other. Hope is a powerful magic.”


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Chapter Six: The Decision

Kael stood on a cliff overlooking Ae’thralis. The shard in his hand blazed bright.

He thought of Earth — of his family, the people who had forgotten how to dream.

And he thought of Ae’thralis — a world of wonder and peril, waiting for a chance to heal.

Closing his eyes, Kael whispered, “I choose both.”

The shard shattered, releasing a wave of light that wrapped around him.


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Epilogue: New Beginnings

Kael woke up. The sky was normal. The familiar hum of the city filled his ears.

But something had changed.

He felt it in his bones — a connection to a world beyond, a call to protect, to dream, to fight for balance.

He wasn’t alone.

Somewhere out there, Ae’thralis lived on.

And so did hope.

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