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The Real Treasure

Dhanya Bansal
MYSTERY
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Submitted to Contest #3 in response to the prompt: 'A stranger comes to your door. What happens next?'

The never-ending honking of auto-rickshaws was basically the background music to my life in Agra, Uttar Pradesh. It was a super humid Thursday, May 22, 2025, around 5:30 PM, and I was just finishing my evening chai. You know, enjoying that little bit of peace before everything gets crazy again. My small apartment, right above a busy street, felt like my own little fort. The TV was just buzzing in the background, some Hindi soap opera I barely paid attention to.
Then, bam! A sharp, really loud knock hit the door. I totally frowned. I wasn't expecting anyone. My friends always call first, and delivery guys usually just hit the doorbell, which is way less aggressive than this. This knock was different. It felt… urgent.
I just froze for a second, my hand going to my chest. Who in the world could that be? Our building has a watchman, so it’s pretty safe. Another round of knocks, even louder, followed by a voice, kind of rough and with an accent I couldn't figure out.
"Hello? Anyone home? I need to speak to someone."
I slowly walked to the door, peering through the peephole. A man stood there, tall and broad, wearing a kurta that looked a bit messy. His face was hard to see in the dim hallway light, but I could make out a pretty big scar near his eyebrow. He definitely didn't look like anyone I knew.
"Who is it?" I called out, my voice a little tight.
"My name is Ranjit," the man said, his voice gruff. "I'm looking for the owner of this apartment. It's urgent."
Urgent? My mind started racing. I own this apartment. No one else lives here. This was weird. "What about?" I asked, pulling my heavy dupatta tighter around me.
"It concerns a matter of family business," Ranjit said, his voice flat. "It's a mistake that needs to be corrected."
My eyebrows went up. Family business? I don't have any family business, not in Agra. My parents are just teachers in another city. This was getting super weird. "I think you have the wrong address," I said firmly, trying to sound confident. "There's no family business here."
There was a moment of silence. I could almost imagine him frowning on the other side of the door. Then, he chuckled, a dry, humorless sound that sent shivers down my back. "Oh, but there is, Aisha. More than you know."
I froze. He knew my name. I hadn't told him. How? My heart started pounding like crazy. The usual sounds of the street outside suddenly felt far away, replaced by this heavy silence inside my apartment.
"I saw your name on the property records," he said, like he could read my mind. "And I've been watching this place for a while now. Just making sure I had the right person."
Watching? My apartment? A cold, horrible feeling started to spread through me. The way he just casually said that, so bold, was terrifying. I glanced at my phone, sitting on the coffee table, just out of reach.
"Look, I'm calling the police," I threatened, my voice shaking a little even though I tried to sound tough.
"That won't be necessary," Ranjit's voice was closer now, just a bit muffled by the door. I heard a faint scratching sound, like metal rubbing against wood. "Because I'm not here to hurt you, Aisha. I'm here to give you something."
My breath hitched. Give me something? My eyes darted around the room, desperately looking for anything I could use as a weapon. The heavy brass Ganesh idol on my bookshelf seemed too far, and the kitchen knives were even further. The scratching sound kept going, annoying and creepy.
Suddenly, I heard the familiar click of my door's lock. I gasped, stumbling backward. I hadn't heard a key, hadn't heard anything forced open. The door swung inward slowly, and there he was, Ranjit. He stepped into the light, and I finally got a good look at his face. It was rough, weathered, with eyes that looked like they'd seen a million secrets. That scar on his temple was super clear.
He wasn't holding a weapon. Instead, in his outstretched hand, he held a small, really fancy carved wooden box. It looked super old, worn smooth from being handled for hundreds of years.
"This belongs to you, Aisha," he said, his voice softer now, almost gentle. "It's been passed down through your family for generations. A secret kept from you, until now."
I just stared at the box, then at him, my mind spinning with confusion and fear. "What… what is this?" I whispered, barely able to speak.
Ranjit took another step forward, placing the box carefully on my coffee table, right next to my half-empty chai cup. "It's the truth of your family line," he said, looking right into my eyes. "Your ancestors weren't just teachers, Aisha. They were the protectors of something very valuable, something that has been kept safe for centuries from people who would use it for bad things."
He paused, then pointed to the Ganesh idol on my bookshelf. "That idol," he said, "it's not just a decoration. It's a key. A clue. And this box, it holds the map."
My eyes widened. I looked from the box to the Ganesh idol, then back to Ranjit, my fear slowly turning into this crazy feeling of disbelief. "Map? What map?"
Ranjit smiled then, a real smile this time. It looked tired but wise. "The map to the lost treasury of Raja Man Singh, hidden somewhere deep beneath the old city. Your family was trusted with its secret. And now, so are you."
He turned, walking back towards the open door. "My job is done," he said, his voice fading. "The rest is up to you, Aisha. The world has many treasures, not just gold. But it also has many dangers. Be careful."
I rushed to the door, but he was gone. The hallway was empty, silent, except for the faint sounds of the city creeping back in. I looked down at the wooden box on my coffee table, then at the Ganesh idol. The initial terror was gone, replaced by this weird mix of wonder and a chilling thought: my quiet life, my safe apartment, was just a cover. And the knock at the door wasn't a threat, but the sudden, irreversible start of an adventure I never knew I was supposed to have.
With trembling hands, I picked up the wooden box. It felt strangely warm to the touch, like it was alive. I carefully lifted the lid. Inside, nestled on faded velvet, was not a map of gold or jewels, but a collection of ancient, brittle scrolls. They were written in a script I didn't recognize, filled with intricate symbols and drawings.
As I touched one of the scrolls, a faint image flickered in my mind: a bustling marketplace in old Agra, my ancestors, not teachers, but scholars, carefully guarding these texts. They were not maps to gold, but to a philosophy of peace, harmony, and interconnectedness, a wisdom lost to the modern world. Raja Man Singh, a powerful ruler, had sought to hoard this knowledge, believing it would give him ultimate power. But my family, understanding its true value, had hidden it away, choosing to protect it rather than exploit it.
The Ganesh idol, I realized, wasn't just a key, but a compass, guiding me to the places where these texts could be deciphered and their wisdom shared. Ranjit wasn't a threat, but a messenger, a keeper of this secret history, ensuring the scrolls found their rightful guardian.
The adventure that lay ahead wasn't about finding riches, but about rediscovering a lost way of life, a path to healing the world's divisions. The knock at my door wasn't the beginning of a treasure hunt, but the start of a mission, a responsibility passed down through generations. And as I looked out at the chaotic, beautiful city of Agra, I knew what I had to do. I had to open the box, not for gold, but for a chance to bring peace back to a world that desperately needed it.

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