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The Man in the Green Coat

Kartik Gupta
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Submitted to Contest #3 in response to the prompt: 'A stranger comes to your door. What happens next?'

The storm began just after sunset—one of those sprawling tempests that seemed to wrap the entire town in electric tension. Thunder growled over the distant hills, and the wind came in angry gusts, rattling windowpanes and moaning through the spaces beneath doors. It was the kind of night that made people stay indoors, drink something warm, and keep the lights on just a bit longer than usual.

Emma Langley had done just that. She lived alone in a cottage on the edge of Blackbirch Lane, where the forest crept close to the back garden and deer often wandered to the edge of the yard. She had lived there for five years now, ever since moving away from the city after her brother, Caleb, disappeared without a trace.

Tonight, she sat curled on her corduroy sofa, one leg tucked beneath her, a mug of cinnamon tea resting in her palm. A book lay open in her lap, though she hadn’t turned the page in twenty minutes. The wind outside howled again, and she looked up, instinctively glancing at the door. Her old Labrador, Mags, lifted her head from the rug and gave a soft huff before settling again.

Then came the knock.

Three gentle raps—soft, almost uncertain. Not the firm knock of a neighbor, nor the impersonal pound of a deliveryman. Emma froze, her fingers tightening on her mug.

She wasn’t expecting anyone.

The knock came again. Same rhythm. Not loud, not threatening, but somehow… strange.

Mags stood, tail low, and padded toward the door, sniffing. Emma followed slowly, placing her tea on the hallway table and reaching for the latch. Her heart thudded in her chest. She peeked through the peephole.

A man stood there. Middle-aged, maybe fifty. His coat was the first thing she noticed—it was green, long, and slightly too big for his frame, with a subtle shimmer under the porch light. He wore no hat, though his dark hair was slick with rain. His hands were clasped in front of him. He didn’t fidget, didn’t seem cold. Just waited.

Emma hesitated.

“Yes?” she called through the door.

“I’m sorry to disturb you,” the man said. His voice was soft and level, almost melodic. “But I believe something of yours has gone missing.”

Her breath caught. “Excuse me?”

“I believe something of yours has been lost. And I’ve found it.”

“I… I think you’re mistaken.”

“I don’t believe I am.”

She hesitated, unsure whether to call the police or slam the door. But then he reached into his coat and pulled out a photograph, holding it up where she could see. The porch light illuminated it, just enough.

It was a picture of her and Caleb.

They were sitting on the dock at Shale Lake, legs dangling, sunlight golden on their skin. She remembered the moment. Caleb had teased her about something, and she’d just turned to scowl as the camera clicked. It was the last summer before everything changed.

She hadn’t seen that photo in over fifteen years.

Emma slowly unlatched the door but left the chain on.

“Where did you get that?”

The man didn’t smile, but something kind flickered in his expression.

“I’ve been… retrieving things. Returning them. May I come in for a moment?”

“No,” she said instinctively, but not harshly.

“Then perhaps I could give you this.” He held out the photo.

She closed the door briefly, unhooked the chain, opened it just wide enough to take the picture. The photograph was warm, as if it had been held for a long time. The edges were worn, but the image was untouched by age.

“Who are you?” she asked.

“Someone who lost something once. And who’s been trying to make amends.”

Emma stared at the man. “I don’t understand.”

“You will. Not all at once, but in time.” He looked past her, into the house, then back at her. “You’ve been living with echoes. Ghosts. The hollow feeling of something unfinished.”

Her throat tightened. “What do you want from me?”

“Nothing. I only return what was taken.”

He turned and walked away, down the front path and into the rain. She watched him go, stunned, the photo clutched in her hand. He didn’t look back.

That night, Emma didn’t sleep.

The next morning, she rose with the dull ache of unrest. She kept the photo on her nightstand, studying it by daylight. It was definitely hers. The crease in the bottom corner was where it had once been folded into a journal. How he had it—where he found it—was a mystery.

After breakfast, she opened the closet in the hallway and dug out a dusty old box from beneath the coats. It was filled with memories—school notebooks, postcards from Caleb, the last letter he had sent her. She hadn’t looked through it in years. She had stopped allowing herself to hope.

But that day, hope whispered again.

That evening, just after dusk, she found something else.

A package sat neatly on her doorstep. Small, wrapped in brown paper and tied with green string. There was no note.

Inside was a small stuffed rabbit—its fur threadbare, one ear drooping, the button eye chipped. Emma gasped.

“Benny,” she whispered.

Her childhood toy. She had lost it when she was nine, during a camping trip. Her parents had searched the woods for hours. She’d cried for days. And yet, here it was.

She sat on the porch step, heart pounding.

For the next week, the stranger did not return. But every evening, something appeared on her doorstep.

A cracked leather bracelet her brother had made for her at summer camp.

Her mother’s locket, lost when they’d moved houses after the divorce.

A pressed flower from the journal she’d kept in high school.

Each item stirred a memory. Each memory stirred a question.

Who was this man?

Where did he find these things?

And—most hauntingly—how did he know they belonged to her?

Emma began to change. She found herself rising earlier, opening windows to let in fresh air. She took long walks through the woods behind her house, looking for signs of the past. She started journaling again.

Mags, too, seemed livelier—sensing her owner’s renewed purpose.

One night, exactly ten days after the first visit, there was a knock again.

Emma rushed to the door and flung it open.

The man stood there, his green coat slick with rain. He looked as though he hadn’t aged a day.

“You’ve been leaving things,” she said.

“I have.”

“Why?”

“I told you. I return what was lost.”

“But… how do you find them? How do you know what they are?”

He tilted his head, and for a moment, something unreadable crossed his face.

“I walk in the places people forget. Places between memories. Between moments. Sometimes, what is lost doesn’t disappear. It simply slips.”

“That doesn’t make sense.”

“No,” he said gently. “But it doesn’t have to.”

She stepped aside, heart pounding. “Come in.”

He entered, pausing in the foyer. He removed his coat and hung it on the hook without asking. Underneath, he wore a gray sweater and worn trousers. He looked like a man who had traveled far but never tired.

They sat in the living room. She poured tea.

“What’s your name?” she asked.

“I don’t use it anymore.”

“Why not?”

“Because names are for the living. I move between those who remember and those who forget.”

Emma stared. “Are you… human?”

He smiled, faintly. “Once. Now I’m something else. Not more. Just… different.”

She didn’t understand, but somehow, that didn’t matter. His presence felt safe. Calming.

“I want to know why you’re really here.”

“I told you. I’m returning what was taken.”

“Taken by who?”

“By time. By grief. By choice. Sometimes by accident. But the worst things—the ones that haunt—are the ones taken without reason. That’s what I find.”

“And Caleb?” she asked. “Did you find him?”

Silence fell like a curtain.

“I did,” he said finally.

Her breath hitched. “Where?”

“Somewhere between here and gone. Between memory and silence.”

“Is he alive?”

“No,” he said softly. “But he isn’t lost.”

Tears filled her eyes. “He just disappeared. No note. No sign. They said he ran away, or that something happened, but… we never found him.”

“He died in the woods. An accident. No one saw. He slipped. It was quick.”

She covered her mouth with trembling hands.

“I’m sorry,” the man said. “I can’t change what happened. I can only return what remains.”

“And what remains?”

He reached into his coat and pulled out a small notebook. Her brother’s handwriting on the cover: For Em.

She took it with shaking fingers. Inside were sketches, little poems, scraps of thought. It smelled like old cedar and earth.

“I never knew this existed,” she whispered.

“He made it the summer before he left. He meant to give it to you, but never did.”

She sobbed quietly.

The man stood.

“I have others to visit.”

“Wait,” she said. “Will I see you again?”

“Maybe. But I’ve given you what I came to return.”

She followed him to the door. As he stepped onto the porch, she asked, “Why me? Why now?”

He turned back, his eyes reflecting the porch light like water.

“Because you were ready to remember.”

Then he was gone.

Emma never saw the man again.

But in the weeks that followed, she felt something shift. The weight she had carried for years lifted, piece by piece. She read Caleb’s notebook every morning, took up sketching herself, and started volunteering at a local youth shelter, quietly honoring her brother’s memory.

She told no one about the man in the green coat. Not because she didn’t think they’d believe her—though they wouldn’t—but because the experience belonged wholly to her, like a secret seed planted in the heart.

And sometimes, on quiet, stormy nights, she would leave a candle in the window. Just in case.

In case someone else had lost something. In case someone else needed to remember.

Or in case, somewhere out there, the man in the green coat was still walking the borderlands—between memory and forgetting—gathering what was lost, and bringing it gently, faithfully, home.





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