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TITLE :ARYAN AND THE LAND OF WHISPERS

Jyoti Singh
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Submitted to Contest #3 in response to the prompt: 'Your character wakes up in a different world. What do they do?'





Aryan and the Land of Whispers

Thirteen-year-old Aryan had always loved stories—ones filled with dragons, hidden worlds, and magic spells. But his life felt very ordinary: school, homework, and the same routine every day. Still, books helped him escape. Whenever it rained, he would sit near the window with his favorite fantasy novel, imagining himself as the hero.

One stormy evening, as wind howled through the trees and rain lashed against the windowpane, Aryan snuggled in bed with a book about magical portals. Thunder boomed outside. His eyelids grew heavy. The words on the page blurred.

And just like that, he fell asleep.

But when he opened his eyes, he was no longer in his room.


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A New World

Aryan sat up slowly. He was lying in a meadow of silver grass that shimmered like moonlight. Above him stretched a golden sky with not one, but two suns, their warmth gentle and welcoming. Trees in the distance had glowing blue leaves that rustled like wind chimes.

“This... isn’t Earth,” Aryan whispered in awe.

A tall woman stepped out from the trees. She wore robes that shimmered like starlight and had kind, glowing eyes.

“Welcome, Aryan,” she said softly. “You have arrived in the Land of Whispers.”

Aryan stared at her. “How do you know my name?”

“I am Elaria, Guardian of this realm. We called you here because our world is in danger. And only someone like you can help.”

“But... I’m just a boy. I’m not special.”

“You are exactly who we need,” she said with a smile. “The Whispering Tree, the heart of our land, is dying. It gave life, stories, and music to this world. But now, no one listens to it. The silence is spreading. You must bring back the voice of the world.”

She placed a small, glowing crystal in his hand.

“This is the Stone of Listening. It will guide you—if you’re willing to hear.”


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Pico and the Journey

Suddenly, a small creature flapped down beside him. It had the body of a fox and the wings of a hummingbird.

“Name’s Pico,” it chirped cheerfully. “I’m your guide. We’d better get moving. The land’s fading fast!”

Aryan followed Pico through magical landscapes he could barely believe. Every step revealed something new—a mountain made of mirrors, a river that flowed with liquid light, and clouds that whispered songs.

Their first challenge was the Forest of Memories. The trees here murmured softly, their bark etched with shimmering images.

Aryan touched the Stone of Listening to one tree. A voice entered his mind:
"I remember the days when children laughed and sang beneath my branches. Now... all is still."

He understood: this world wasn't broken by disaster, but by loneliness and silence. Its magic faded because no one believed in it anymore.


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Lessons of the Land

Next, they crossed the Desert of Echoes, where time moved in strange ways. Aryan saw visions of his own life—times when he ignored a friend’s cry, when he kept quiet instead of standing up for someone.

Pico looked at him gently. “The desert doesn’t judge. It shows you what can be changed.”

Aryan nodded. “I want to be better. For them—and for myself.”

Their final trial was the Lake of Reflections. The water rippled as Aryan approached, and from its surface rose a version of himself—angry, scared, and full of doubt.

“You’re not a hero,” the reflection sneered. “You’re just a kid who reads books.”

Aryan stood tall. “I don’t have to be perfect to do what’s right.”

With that, the reflection vanished—and the lake turned calm and clear.


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The Heart of the World

At last, they reached the Whispering Tree. Once beautiful and glowing, it now stood gray and cracked. Around it slithered dark shadows—the Silencers, creatures born from fear, doubt, and silence.

Elaria appeared once more. “They grow stronger each day the tree goes unheard.”

Aryan stepped forward, heart pounding. He closed his eyes and pressed the stone to his chest.

At first, only silence.

Then... soft whispers.

"I feel forgotten."
"I’m scared."
"Does anyone hear me anymore?"

Tears filled Aryan’s eyes. “I hear you. I hear all of you.”

The Silencers screamed and rushed toward him. Pico darted through the air, trying to distract them.

Aryan raised his voice. “You matter! You are not alone!”

The Stone glowed brighter. Light poured from the tree’s roots. Golden leaves unfurled. The shadows shrieked and vanished into dust.

The tree bloomed. Birds sang. The wind danced. Life returned to the Land of Whispers.

Elaria placed a gentle hand on Aryan’s shoulder. “You saved us not with power, but with listening. And that... is true magic.”


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Back Home

A warm wind swirled around him again.

“Will I remember this?” Aryan asked.

Elaria smiled. “The heart remembers what the mind forgets.”

Light engulfed him—and then, he was back in his bed.

The storm outside had passed. Morning sunlight peeked through his window.

Had it all been a dream?

He turned—and gasped.

The Stone of Listening lay on his desk, still glowing softly.


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Moral of the Story:

We all want to be heard. Sometimes, listening—truly listening—is the greatest magic of all.


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