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The Forbidden Door

Amlan Mohanty
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Submitted to Contest #4 in response to the prompt: 'You break the one unbreakable rule. What happens next? '

I'd always been told that the door was forbidden. The elders would whisper warnings, their eyes wide with fear, about the consequences of crossing the threshold. But I'd always been curious. What secrets lay beyond the door? What mysteries waited to be uncovered? The more they warned me, the more I felt drawn to it.

As a child, I'd try to sneak peeks through the small window, but the glass was frosted, allowing only shadows to filter through. I'd ask questions, but the elders would shake their heads, their faces grave. "Some things are better left unknown," they'd say.

But I couldn't shake the feeling that there was something important on the other side. Something that could change everything.

One fateful night, I decided to take the risk. The moon was full, casting an eerie glow over the landscape. I approached the door, my heart pounding in my chest. As I reached out to touch the handle, a shiver ran down my spine. What if the warnings were true? What if I wasn't supposed to do this?

The door creaked open, revealing a world I'd never seen. A realm of shadows and whispers, where the air was thick with secrets. I stepped forward, and the door slammed shut behind me, plunging me into darkness.

I stood still, my ears straining to pick up any sound. The silence was oppressive, like a weight on my chest. Then, a faint whisper seemed to caress my ear. "Welcome to the other side."

I spun around, trying to locate the source of the voice, but there was no one in sight. The whisper seemed to come from all around me, echoing off the walls.

Suddenly, a light flickered to life, casting eerie shadows on the walls. I found myself in a long, narrow corridor, with stone walls and a low ceiling. The air was damp and musty, like a tomb.

As I walked down the corridor, the light grew brighter, illuminating a series of ancient tapestries on the walls. They depicted strange creatures and mysterious symbols, like nothing I'd ever seen before.

The corridor twisted and turned, leading me deeper into the heart of the mysterious realm. I began to feel a sense of unease, like I was being watched. Every step seemed to echo through the corridor, making me feel like I was being herded towards some unknown fate.

Finally, I emerged into a vast chamber, lit by a thousand candles. The ceiling disappeared into darkness, giving the impression of infinity. In the center of the room, a figure sat on a throne-like chair, shrouded in darkness.

As I approached, the figure leaned forward, its features slowly coming into focus. It was an old man with piercing eyes and skin like parchment. He regarded me with a calculating gaze, like a scientist studying a specimen.

"So, you've broken the rule," he said, his voice low and gravelly. "You've crossed the threshold. What do you hope to find here?"

I swallowed hard, trying to find my voice. "I don't know," I admitted. "I just felt drawn to it."

The old man nodded, a small smile playing on his lips. "Curiosity can be a powerful motivator. But be warned, the secrets you uncover may not be what you expect."

He leaned back in his chair, steepling his fingers together. "You see, this realm is not just a physical place. It's a state of mind. A place where the boundaries between reality and myth blur."

As he spoke, the chamber began to shift and change around me. The candles flickered, casting strange shadows on the walls. I felt like I was being pulled into a different dimension, one where the laws of physics no longer applied.

The old man leaned forward, his eyes glinting with intensity. "You've entered this realm uninvited. Now, you must face the consequences."

I felt a surge of fear, but the old man's words were cryptic. What consequences? What lay ahead?

The old man smiled again, like he could read my thoughts. "You'll discover the secrets of this realm, but be warned, knowledge comes at a price."

As I stood there, frozen in uncertainty, the chamber began to fade away, like a dream dissipating into reality. I was left standing alone, wondering what lay ahead.

The old man's words lingered in my mind like a challenge. "Knowledge comes at a price." What did he mean? What kind of price would I have to pay for uncovering the secrets of this mysterious realm?

As I stood there, pondering the old man's words, the chamber began to take shape again. The candles flickered back to life, casting eerie shadows on the walls. The air seemed to vibrate with an otherworldly energy, like the hum of a thousand bees.

The old man gestured to a door on the far side of the chamber. "Beyond that door lies the heart of the realm," he said. "But be warned, what you find there may change you forever."

I felt a shiver run down my spine. What could be so powerful that it would change me forever? I steeled myself and approached the door. As I reached out to touch the handle, the old man's voice stopped me.

"Remember, the price of knowledge is not always what you expect," he said. "Sometimes, it's not what you gain, but what you lose."

I turned to ask him what he meant, but he was gone. The chamber was empty, except for the candles, which seemed to be burning brighter than ever before.

I took a deep breath and pushed open the door. Beyond it lay a garden unlike any I had ever seen. The flowers were unlike any I had ever encountered, their colors vibrant and alive. The air was filled with the sweet scent of blooming flowers, and the sound of soft music seemed to come from nowhere and everywhere at the same time.

As I walked through the garden, I felt a sense of peace wash over me. It was as if I had finally found what I had been searching for all my life. But beneath the surface of this tranquility, I sensed a deeper truth. This garden was not just a beautiful place; it was a testing ground.

Suddenly, a figure emerged from the shadows. It was a woman with skin as pale as moonlight and hair as black as the night. She regarded me with eyes that seemed to see right through me.

"Welcome to the heart of the realm," she said. "I have been waiting for you."

I felt a sense of trepidation, but she smiled and took my hand. "Do not be afraid," she said. "I will show you the secrets of this place."

As we walked through the garden, she revealed to me the mysteries of the realm. I learned about the ancient magic that flowed through the land, and the secrets of the universe that lay hidden beneath the surface.

But with each revelation, I felt a sense of loss. It was as if I was gaining knowledge, but losing something precious in the process. The woman seemed to sense my unease and nodded.

"The price of knowledge is indeed steep," she said. "But it is a price you must pay if you wish to truly understand the secrets of this realm."

I realized that the old man had been right. The price of knowledge was not always what I expected. Sometimes, it was not what I gained, but what I lost. And what I was losing was my innocence, my naivety, my sense of wonder.

As we reached the end of the garden, the woman turned to me and smiled. "Now, you must make a choice," she said. "You can stay in this realm forever, bathed in the knowledge and magic that lies within. Or you can return to your world, armed with the secrets you've uncovered."

I hesitated, unsure of what to do. Part of me wanted to stay, to bask in the knowledge and magic of this realm. But another part of me knew that I had to return, to share what I had learned with the world.

As I stood there, weighing my options, the woman's eyes seemed to bore into my soul. "Remember," she said, "the choice you make will determine the course of your life forever."

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Hey Amlan, The story is so beautifully written! I really enjoyed the depth and emotion in your story โ€” I gave it a full 50 points. If you get a moment, Iโ€™d be grateful if you could read my story, โ€œThe Room Without Windows.โ€ Iโ€™d love to hear what you think: https://notionpress.com/write_contest/details/5371/the-room-without-windows

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