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Breaking the cage

Raghav Goyal
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Submitted to Contest #4 in response to the prompt: 'You break the one unbreakable rule. What happens next? '


The rule was simple: "Never open the black door."

In the City of Liora, perfection was engineered. No hunger, no crime, no lies. Every citizen was assigned a Purpose at birth. They followed it. No questions. Because beyond everything else, one law bound them all:

Never open the black door.

They said it kept out the chaos. That behind it lay what nearly ended humanity centuries ago.

But I, Kairo Unit 57-D, wasn’t like the others.

Not just because I dreamed—something no other citizen did—but because I remembered.

In the stillness of night, in the algorithm-controlled silence, fragments whispered through my mind. Shadows of laughter. Fire. A child’s cry. A woman's voice saying, "Not everything that is forbidden is evil."

Memories I shouldn't have. Because we were cleansed at birth. Purified. Our minds reset.

I was seventeen cycles old when I decided.

I would break the unbreakable rule.


They monitored thought. Watched deviation patterns. But I had learned to trick the neuro-nets. Slow my heart. Breathe evenly. Think only what they wanted.

I walked through Sector 9 like a machine. A ghost in a crowd of obedient smiles. My steps calculated, but my soul restless. Always, the black door stood at the edge of the city—a massive obsidian monolith. No lock. No handle. Just a line across it that pulsed red like a heartbeat.

A reminder: Do not touch.

At 02:13 Cycle Time, I made my move.

I bypassed the perimeter drones using an EM pulse I engineered in my secret lab. The price? My identity would be erased if I was caught. But I didn’t care. I had to know.

As I stood before the door, every lesson drilled into me roared in protest. Every warning from instructors, every poster, every subliminal message repeated in sleep training, DO NOT OPEN.

I placed my hand on the surface.

Nothing.

Then it turned blue.

The door opened inward with a hiss, revealing darkness. Not an ordinary dark, but one that felt alive. It breathed. It waited.

I stepped inside.


Silence.

No alarms. No pursuit.

Just an old, dust-covered chamber, filled with… books. Screens. Holographic projectors. And mirrors.

A thousand mirrors.

I approached one. My reflection stared back but it wasn’t me.

He had the same face, but his eyes bled red. His smile was crooked. There was madness in him.

"Welcome back," he whispered through the glass. But I hadn’t spoken.

Another mirror this one showed me as a child, screaming while flames engulfed my home.

I staggered back, but the scene shifted. A woman appeared.

My mother.

Something deep within me cracked.

Memories flooded in. Real ones.

I wasn’t born in Liora.

I was taken.


Liora wasn’t a city. It was a prison.

A laboratory.

An experiment.

We its citizens were abducted from across time, erased, and assigned new identities. Minds scrubbed. Emotions muted. Dreams forbidden.

But something had gone wrong with me. A flaw. A crack.

And now, I had opened the black door—the vault of truth.

A screen flickered on behind me. A message:

“You were never meant to wake up.”


Then the lights dimmed.

A voice spoke from the shadows.

Not human. Not AI. Something between.

“You’ve broken the one rule,” it said. “Now you must pay the price.”

I turned. A figure emerged—tall, metallic, draped in liquid-like shadows.

“Who are you?” I demanded.

“I am the Guardian of the Lie. You pierced it. You must now carry its weight.”

I clenched my fists. “What lie?”

“That peace can be created without truth.”

The floor trembled. The room reshaped itself into a simulation of Liora. I watched as people walked like drones, their smiles hollow.

“You were programmed to obey,” the Guardian said. “But you… you chose.”


Then came the test.

“If you wish to leave this place and return to your people,” the Guardian said, “you must choose:

A. Close the door. Forget what you saw. Return to peace.

B. Stay in truth. But Liora will hunt you. You will be alone. Hated.

I hesitated.

Peace. Or Truth.

Safety. Or Freedom.

I looked at my reflection—now my real self. Scarred. Awake.

“I choose truth,” I whispered.

The Guardian nodded once. “Then you are no longer Kairo Unit 57-D. You are simply Kairo.”

With that, the chamber collapsed, and I found myself outside again.

Only now, I could see.

The smiles were fake.

The peace was enforced.

And I was no longer part of the machine.


They came for me within hours.

Drones. Enforcers. My name echoed in the surveillance networks.

“Kairo has broken the One Rule. He is corrupted.”

I ran. Through shadows. Through alleys. I whispered the truth to those I passed.

Some recoiled.

Some followed.

A spark.

Then a flame.

Liora began to shake.

A rebellion brewed—not with guns, but with awareness.


Years passed.

I became legend. A myth whispered in dreams—The One Who Opened the Door.

Liora cracked.

Not destroyed—but changed.

People remembered.

Some broke.

But others awakened.

They built new doors—not of fear, but of curiosity.

And on each, a new rule was etched:

“Do not fear the truth. Fear the comfort of a lie.”



Moral of the Story:

The rules we’re taught to never break are often the ones built to trap us. But someone must be the first to question, to fall, and then rise—for the rest to awaken. Peace without truth is a prison. And every society, like every mind, has its own black door.

The question is: Will you open yours?

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Thrilling reading experience! I got completely engrossed in this deeply engaging story — I gave it a full 50 points. If you get a moment, I’d be grateful if you could read my story, “The Room Without Windows.” I’d love to hear what you think: https://notionpress.com/write_contest/details/5371/the-room-without-windows

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