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THE DAY THE CLOCK STOOD STILL

Havish
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Submitted to Contest #4 in response to the prompt: 'You break the one unbreakable rule. What happens next? '

The Crimson Clock dominated the skyline of Veyra, its copper gears exposed like the ribs of a leviathan, turning with perfect, eternal rhythm. Every citizen was taught the city’s single, ironclad commandment before they could even recite the alphabet:

> “Speak no truth beneath the Crimson Clock.”



No one remembered the law’s origin, but everyone honored it with the same instinctive caution that keeps a hand from lingering in flame. Priests claimed the rule guarded the boundary between time and chaos; scholars whispered of an ancient pact with something that listened from beyond the cogs. For most, the why didn’t matter. Veyrans simply learned to lie—small, artful untruths—whenever the tower’s shadow touched them.

Ilan Verin, a nineteen-year-old apprentice clock-smith, wore those white lies as easily as his leather apron. But to him, the throbbing heartbeat of the Crimson Clock was not a menace; it was a marvel. He’d spent half his childhood sneaking into the tower’s underbelly, polishing escapements and filing pinions until they sang sweet as glass. He believed in mechanisms—predictable, material, knowable. Legends about disembodied listeners belonged to bedtime candles and nervous bureaucrats.

Then the arrests began.

One chilly dawn, Ilan’s older sister—Seraphine, a street-poet whose verses were as precise as his gears—was dragged from their apartment. Her crime was never announced. The Enclave Guard marched her away while the clock above drummed out its indifferent time. A sealed warrant stamped CONFIDENTIAL dangled from the officer’s belt, fluttering like a taunt.

Two nights later, Ilan bribed his way into the Ministry Archives. What he found chilled him more than the December wind: lists of “dissenters,” marginalia describing mind-recalibration chambers, and a single cryptic note beside his sister’s name: Told the truth at 23:58; subject unstable.

That was the first rip in Ilan’s faith. He slipped the note under his pillow and lay awake hearing the tower’s thrum counting down to dawn. By the third sleepless night, the solitary rule—speak no truth—felt less like protection and more like a shackle locking Veyra’s lips while tyranny grew bold.

He had spent his life keeping gears aligned; now he felt the moral machinery of his city grinding out of phase. And like any good smith, he resolved to correct the misalignment.


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Midnight on the Winter Solstice approached—an hour the philosophers called the hinge of the year. Snow clung to rooftops in muffled sheets, and sharp constellations glittered like tacks pinning the heavens just out of reach.

Ilan climbed the interior ladder of the tower, heart hammering faster than the pendulum above him. At 23:55 he stepped onto the exposed balcony that ringed the dial face. From here, the city looked like a slumbering mosaic. Far below, perpetual lamps marked the straight, cruel lines of the Enclave’s district.

He inhaled ice-laced air and reminded himself of Seraphine’s smile—a crooked, daring thing that turned strangers into confidants. He pictured the sterility of the re-calibration ward, the way they’d shave her scalp for neural probes, render her poems into gray ash.

23:58.

The great brass bell tolled, each note rippling across rooftops. Rumor claimed the bell’s harmonics blurred the boundary between truth and consequence; Ilan suspected it was tuned merely to frighten children. Still, his knees shook.

23:59.

The tower’s shadow, cast by the moon, passed like dark water over his boots. He remembered every wisp of folklore and every tutor’s warning, but urgency was louder.

When the long needle of the minute hand kissed the topmost numeral, Ilan drew a breath so deep it scalded his lungs—and spoke.

“Seraphine Verin is innocent, and those who took her are cowards hiding behind fabricated law.”

The sentence hung visible, like crystalline breath—only it did not disperse. Letters glowed, amber-red, freezing midair. The balcony floor vibrated; then, with a seismic tick, the Crimson Clock stopped.

Silence struck Veyra. Torches guttered. A stray dog’s bark died unvoiced. Snowflakes hovering in descent became motionless stars. Even Ilan’s heartbeat seemed to pause between one pulse and the next.


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A rift opened where the balcony’s brass railing met stone: a thin seam of humming darkness. From it stepped a figure draped in parchment-white robes, inkblot eyes soft as spilled night. Its voice resonated inside Ilan’s skull rather than his ears.

“You have broken the Covenant of Dissonance,” it intoned, each syllable a chime. “State your designation.”

“I— I’m Ilan Verin. I just want my sister.” The words felt heavy, tethered by the very truth they carried.

The being’s robes stirred despite the frozen air. “Truth is weighty. Your world spins on the counterbalance of falsehood traded here.” One gauzy sleeve gestured toward the petrified city. “Each untruth you mortals utter under the clock bleeds distortion we harvest, lest harsher forces harvest you.”

Ilan’s mind flashed through diagrams of counterweights and springs. A mechanism needed tension to function. Was Veyra…an apparatus to confine something worse?

“Then take my distortion,” he pleaded. “Spare her. We can’t live gagged forever.”

The entity regarded him, eyelids flickering like shutters. “A single life for equilibrium? An amateur bargain.” It touched the luminous sentence floating beside them; the words cracked, emitting sparks that smelled of burnt copper. “Your utterance has already destabilized the gyro-line of Specious Time. A debt exists. Someone must pay.”

Ilan had spent years accepting that every gear demanded oil, every promise a price. He stepped forward. “Then take my memories—my years—whatever keeps the city safe. Just—let truth breathe again.”

The robed listener extended two fingers, brushing his forehead. Images roared: a newborn Ilan grasping his mother’s finger, Seraphine reciting her first poem, their father teaching them chess with sugar cubes for pawns. Lives unlived flashed and vanished. Pain lanced, yet a strange calm followed, like a gear slipping into its proper tooth.

“The offering suffices,” the being pronounced. “The Clock will move. Your city may now choose whether to speak or to swallow truth. Your sister returns unaltered.” It paused. “But you, Ilan Verin, will carry the delta of memory. You alone will recall tonight, for every system requires a witness.”

Snow resumed falling. Torches flared awake. Distantly, vendors cried morning specials though the sky was still black. The dial’s hands resumed their crawl as if nothing had occurred. The robed figure folded into the seam; gears groaned, sealing it shut.

Ilan slumped against the railing, mind echoing with half-remembered faces. When he checked his pocket watch—an heirloom once engraved “To Ilan, on mastering his first escapement”—the inscription was gone, the metal blank as an unwritten page.


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At dawn, Seraphine knocked on his workshop door, hair wild, eyes storm-bright. She wore no prison uniform—only the charcoal coat she’d vanished in. “They just…let me out,” she whispered, like someone describing a dream’s fade. “Said there’d been an error.”

Ilan embraced her, a hug tinged with grief he couldn’t name. She noticed the clock tower visible through the window, where city maintenance crews were replacing the metal plaque of the old commandment. Fresh letters glinted:

> “Speak as you will, and bear the weight.”



“What in Veyra does that mean?” Seraphine asked, amused.

Ilan smiled—a thin, uneven crescent. “Maybe it means stories have gears we never saw.” He did not add that he’d surrendered half his memories of her to buy this dawn. Some costs were best left in silence.


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Weeks passed. Without the gag of compulsory lies, people stumbled, laughed, argued, apologized. Truths were messy; they pried open old wounds but also stitched strangers together. The Veyran Ledger published uncensored poetry for the first time in a century. Political prisoners walked free. The Enclave collapsed under archives of contradictions suddenly laid bare.

Yet every evening, when shadows stretched long under the still-ticking Crimson Clock, Ilan felt a phantom weight behind his eyes. At times he forgot his mother’s face, other moments he failed to recall entire winters of childhood. In those absences, he sensed the robed listener watching—not cruel, simply maintaining cosmic accounts.

He kept forging timepieces, but each new watch carried a silent oath etched interiorly where only he knew to look:> Truth costs. Pay gladly.



One blustery night, he found Seraphine perched on the tower balcony, pen in hand.

“Writing?” he asked.

“Untangling,” she answered. “Feels like reality pivoted, and we’re catching up.” She squeezed his hand. “Whatever happened, you look older.”

“Timework’ll do that.” He forced a grin, but she studied him as though hearing a chord under his words. She didn’t press, perhaps sensing that every answer has a toll.

Below them, the city breathed in honest hues—love confessions shouted across squares, taxes debated in transparent ledgers, children cataloging constellations without fear of naming them wrongly. For all the friction, Veyra glittered brighter than any immaculate lie.

The great bell tolled midnight, its timbre deeper now, as though acknowledging new loads across unseen fulcrums. Ilan closed his eyes and felt the vibration course through the tower bones and his own. He thought of gears shifting, threads rewoven, and a sister free to speak verses that might outlast clocks.

The unbreakable rule had shattered, but in its shards Ilan discovered a harsher, nobler law: Every truth reshapes the world—and someone must hold the shape. He was content to be that hidden gear, unseen yet essential, turning steadily while the city learned to sing with its real voice.

And far beyond cold stars and warmer roofs, a listener in parchment robes turned away from its scrying window, satisfied that the balance, for now, held.

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