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Theme of This month? A New Beginning

Urmila Sheokand
MYTHOLOGY
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Submitted to Contest #4 in response to the prompt: 'You break the one unbreakable rule. What happens next? '


Prompt 1: You break an unbreakable rule. What happens next?

Kamini felt a joy today that words could barely contain. After years—decades, even—of oppressive traditions and unyielding customs, something unthinkable had happened. Her daughter, Seema, had just been appointed a Class One officer. The same Seema who, by the rules of the ancient haveli, was never meant to step outside its four walls for education, much less dream of a professional career. But today, as garlands were strung across the courtyard and relatives buzzed with congratulations, the mansion rang not with silence or judgment—but with the laughter of celebration.

This wasn't just Seema’s victory. It was Kamini’s quiet revolution.

Twenty-five years ago, Kamini had stepped into this mansion as a shy young bride. She remembered vividly the scent of fresh marigolds, the hushed conversations of elder women, and the constant reminder: dignity in silence, pride in obedience. Her husband, Ritesh, a studious man with an MBA, managed the ancestral lands and crop trade. Though kind-hearted, he too had been steeped in the rules of the haveli—rules forged not in empathy, but in tradition.

Kamini came from a very different world. Her father was a professor, and so was her mother. She had earned a Master’s degree in English but had chosen not to pursue a job after marriage, believing she could still pass on her values through her children. It had seemed like a noble trade-off at the time. Her father’s friend had arranged the match with Ritesh, comforted by the fact that Kamini wouldn't "challenge" the deeply entrenched ways of the family.

But that comfort was an illusion.

Once inside the haveli, Kamini quickly realized that her education made her an outsider. Her degrees were seen not as qualifications, but as decorations—pretty, but unnecessary. Women were expected to uphold decorum, mind the household, and, above all, raise daughters to do the same. The rule was unspoken yet ironclad: girls would study only till the eighth grade, after which they’d learn stitching, cooking, and the art of blending into the background.

Seema’s birth, two years after Kamini’s marriage, had brought joy—but also a creeping dread. Would her daughter, brilliant and full of questions, meet the same caged fate?

When the time came to enroll Seema in school, Kamini hesitated. She approached Ritesh, who was sympathetic but helpless. The mansion was governed by the will of the elders, and defying them meant shaking the very foundation of family honor.

Yet even as her hands trembled, Kamini chose defiance.

She approached the elders—not with rebellion, but with reason. She promised to chaperone Seema personally. She swore that education wouldn’t corrupt but refine her daughter. It took weeks of negotiation, countless cups of tea, and more than a few tears, but finally, the elders agreed—reluctantly—to let Seema study up to tenth grade.

Kamini knew it was a small victory in a long war, but she also knew that wars were won step by careful step.

Seema did not disappoint. When her 10th-grade board results were announced and her name shone at the top, the whole community took notice. Neighbors whispered not with suspicion, but with admiration. Still, as college approached, resistance returned. But now, Seema spoke for herself—with dignity and resolve that left even the staunchest traditionalist speechless. She had inherited her mother’s fire, but had also learned the art of channeling it.

With her parents’ support, Seema enrolled in university and began preparing for the UPSC exams. Her goal was crystal clear: to serve the nation as an IAS officer. She prepared quietly, without fanfare. Only Kamini and Ritesh knew. Seema had promised them that she would never act in a way that shamed the family, only honor it in a new light.

When the preliminary exam results arrived, no one but Kamini dared to hope. When the final results came, they were undeniable—Seema had topped.

The mansion that once silenced ambition now echoed with it. A courtyard that only witnessed weddings and death rituals now bore witness to victory parades. The very elders who once insisted girls should never dream were now recounting Seema’s journey to distant relatives with pride.

Kamini’s heart swelled—not with arrogance, but with quiet affirmation. She had broken a rule once believed to be unbreakable. And in doing so, she had not destroyed her family’s legacy, but redefined it.

Later that night, as the lights dimmed and guests returned to their homes, Kamini sat on the terrace with Ritesh. The sky above them glittered with stars, and soft music drifted from an open window.

“We didn’t just raise a daughter,” Ritesh murmured. “We raised a new beginning.”

Kamini smiled, her eyes misting. “And all it took was a little courage, and one broken rule.”

It’s a simple truth, yet often forgotten: traditions are meant to honor the past, not imprison the future. Breaking an unbreakable rule, when done with grace and purpose, can transform not just a person—but a generation. Kamini had long thought herself just a guest in the haveli. But tonight, for the first time, she felt like its architect.


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Story is very motivational as it motivates us to respect the warmth of old traditions along with the valuing the other factors of the modern world. Equisite plot, congrats and best wishes

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Beautifully written story with valuable thoughts.Trditions are not to be followed blindly but to be adopted to enrich the life.

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Heart touching real life based story

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Very beautiful and inspiring story

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