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The Echo in Anand

Khushali Salunkhe
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Submitted to Contest #4 in response to the prompt: 'Past follows you when you move to a new city for a fresh start'

Sarah gazed out the train window, the urban sprawl of Ahmedabad slowly giving way to the blurred greens of the countryside. Each click-clack of the wheels felt like a beat counting down to a new life, a rhythmic promise of escape. Mumbai, with its suffocating memories and a past she desperately wanted to outrun, was shrinking behind her, a hazy smudge on the horizon. The suffocating whispers, the judgmental glances, the way her reputation had crumbled like a dry leaf in a harsh wind โ€“ all of it she hoped to leave behind. Anand, a city she'd only seen on maps, a quiet dot nestled in the heart of Gujarat, promised a clean slate, an unblemished canvas. No one knew her there. No one knew about the incident.

The first few weeks in Anand were a balm to her frayed nerves. Her small, sunlit apartment, tucked away on a quiet street lined with Gulmohar trees, felt like a sanctuary. She'd painted the walls a soft cream, bought a few potted plants, and the space slowly transformed into a reflection of the peace she yearned for. She found a job at "The Literary Nook," a quaint bookstore nestled between a bustling tea stall and a tailor's shop. The scent of old paper and new possibilities filled her days, a comforting aroma that replaced the acrid smell of burnt bridges. Her colleagues, a quiet, scholarly woman named Mrs. Shah and a jovial young man named Amit, were friendly, if a little reserved at first. She enjoyed the quiet rhythm of the city, the gentle hum of everyday life that was a stark contrast to Mumbai's incessant roar. Evenings were spent exploring the local market, sipping chai at roadside stalls, or taking long walks by the sprawling Kankaria Lake. The gentle lapping of the water against the shore was a lullaby, soothing her anxieties, washing away the lingering dread. This was it, she thought, this was the fresh start she craved. She was finally breathing.

Then came the email. It arrived late one Tuesday night, an unwelcome glow on her laptop screen. The subject line was blank. Her finger trembled slightly as she clicked it open. It was short, anonymous, and chillingly specific. "Remember what you did, Sarah? Anand won't save you."

Her blood ran cold. The carefully constructed walls of her new life began to crack. How? How had it followed her? She frantically checked her social media, accounts she rarely used, old contacts, trying to pinpoint the source. Nothing. The email address was a throwaway, a series of random letters and numbers, untraceable. Panic, a familiar, unwelcome guest, began to claw at her throat. She spent a sleepless night, the comforting sounds of Anand outside her window replaced by the thumping of her own terrified heart.

The anonymous messages continued, sporadic but potent, like tiny, insidious darts. A note, folded precisely, slipped under her apartment door one morning: "The truth always comes out." She almost screamed, snatching it up as if it were a venomous snake. Another time, while Browse an old, forgotten online forum she'd once frequented years ago, she saw a new comment on one of her long-dormant posts: "Hypocrite." Each one chipped away at her carefully constructed peace, eroding her newfound sense of security. Sleep became a luxury she couldn't afford, haunted by distorted faces and replayed accusations.

She started seeing shadows where there were none, interpreting every casual glance from a stranger as suspicion, every hushed conversation as a discussion about her. The bookstore, once her haven, became a place of paranoia. Mrs. Shahโ€™s polite, knowing smiles seemed to hide judgment, Amitโ€™s innocent questions about her past felt like veiled interrogations. Even the lake, with its once-calming waters, now felt like it was watching her, its surface reflecting not the peaceful sky, but her own mounting fear. She began to isolate herself, declining invitations from colleagues, finding excuses to stay home. The joy she had found in Anand slowly evaporated, replaced by a constant, low-level hum of dread.

One evening, after meticulously closing and locking the bookstore, her hand shaking as she turned the key, she saw him. He was standing across the street, partially obscured by the fading light of a streetlamp, a silhouette against the deepening twilight. But even in the gloom, she recognized the familiar set of his shoulders, the way he held his head. It was Rohan. The one person she never wanted to see again. The very root of her past, the catalyst for everything she was trying to escape, the man whose accusation had shattered her world in Mumbai.

Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic drum solo against the silence of the evening. Rohan. Here. In Anand. He crossed the street slowly, deliberately, a ghost from a life she had painstakingly tried to bury. His eyes, even from a distance, seemed to bore into hers, cold and unwavering.

"Sarah," he said, his voice flat, devoid of emotion, yet carrying the weight of years of unspoken grievances. He stopped a few feet away, close enough for her to smell the faint scent of his cologne, a scent that instantly transported her back to the day everything fell apart. "Thought you could just disappear, did you?"

The fresh start shattered around her, disintegrating into dust. Anand, it turned out, was just another stage for the unfinished drama of her past. The past hadn't just followed her; it had been waiting. And now, it was finally time to face the echo.

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Wow, Khushali, what a gripping tale! Your vivid storytelling and the way you weave Sarah\'s paranoia with the quiet charm of Anand is truly captivating โ€” I gave it a full 50 points. If you get a moment, Iโ€™d be grateful if you could read my story, โ€œThe Room Without Windows.โ€ Iโ€™d love to hear what you think: https://notionpress.com/write_contest/details/5371/the-room-without-windows

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