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Chandrika

Meena Bisht
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Submitted to Contest #4 in response to the prompt: 'You break the one unbreakable rule. What happens next? '



The rule that bloomed at dusk: In the ancient Kingdom of Ratnapur there bloomed a peculiar custom every queen, upon her coronation was told the same line-"you may wrong every corridor speak every thought lift every wheel but you must never walk into the garden after dusk."
Not forbidden by law. Just... tradition and in Ratnapur, tradition was older than Queens. No one explained why. They didn't need to. The Royal garden was called Virasat Bagh--the legacy garden. By day, it was tame: Jasmine creepers, mango trees, parrots speaking broken Sanskrit but at twilight the air changed. The peacocks grew still. The leaves leaned inward.

And so, dusk came and queens turned away. Until Rani Chandrika.
She was no Rebel. She was gentle. Curious. A lover of poetry not war. The kind of Queen who asked the palace meets about their children and remembered their names.

But she couldn't let the question rot inside her.

So one dusky evening, as the sun dipped behind the temple spires and the palace bells marked the Sandhya Aarti, Chandrika slipped barefoot into Virasat Bagh.

The breeze was thick, like someone whispering too close. The trees weren't trees anymore. They were memories. The hummed. She walked past a neem tree and heard the voice of her grandmother who had died before her birth singing a lullaby in Maithili.
She touched a rose, and it bled ink, forming versus of a forgotten poem her mother once wrote but never shared.

Then, in the centre of the garden, she found a pond. Black, still, round like a Shanka's mouth. She looked into it. It didn't reflect her face. It showed every version of her that could have ever been.

A warrior Queen a tried a white horse. A widow exiled to the banks of Ganga. A mother of 7.
A poet lost in madness.
A saint in saffron robes.
A tyrant with Ruby eyes.
She looked into it again. This time the pond didn't reflect her face. It showed her mother. Not as queen but as a young girl, twirling beneath the mango tree, laughing, barefoot and unburdened. Then it showed her mother again older in the same garden, whispering, " Forgive me, I looked too."

One by one, all the queens of ratnapur appeared in that pond. Each had walked this garden at dusk. Each had broken the rule. Each had vanished from history quietly, without scandal or war.

Chandrika stumbled back, the breath punched out of her. They were forbidden from entering the garden not because it was cursed but because it was true. Too true. The garden showed the women they might have been-if they had been free. Not queens not wives, not symbols, not shadows in palace murals...just themselves. And once you see that truth ... u can never wear the crown the same way again.

Chandrika gasped. The water moved again. Another woman. And another. All unfamiliar. All once royal. Queens. Forgotten ones. Each woman stood alone in the garden, dusk behind her, truth before her.

Some wept.
Some smiled.
One tore off her crown.
One just turned to mist.

Each had walked into the garden. Each had broken the rule. And none had ever return the same. Not dead. Not cursed. Just...undone.

Because the garden did not punish. It revealed.
And once you saw who you truly were-not as the palace painted you, not as politics case due, but as might have been-how could you return to wearing the mask again?

Chandrika's heart was a battlefield of rage and ache. The rule wasn't created to protect the queens. It was designed to preserve the illusion. The illusion of duty.
Of lineage.
Of obedience disguised as Glory.

Because if even one Queen had told the truth-told the world what the garden showed her-the Kingdom would fall. Not by war. But by awakening.

The night, Queen Chandrika returned to the palace. She bathed. She wore the crown. She ate with the ministers, nodded at the generals, smiled at her maid.
But something in her eyes had dimmed-or perhaps too brightly to bear
Since then, no Queen ruled Ratnapur. The Kingdom was run by council, and then quietly dissolved into folklore, like most things too soft to survive swords.

But sometimes, in quite household, mother still say to their daughters at twilight: "Don't ask about the garden. Don't ask about the queens. Some truths are to heavy to carry."

And when the Jasmine blooms early-they say Chandrika is walking again, barefoot, at dusk . Not as a Queen. As a woman who finally saw herself-and choose freedom over history.
"The garden is not dangerous, the old women whispered. "It's simply honest. And honesty has no mercy."

Some say she became a legend.
Some say she became the garden.
But those who truly understand whisper only this, "The rule was never meant to be broken. It was meant to be remembered by the one who did."

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Thank u so much everyone for reading and liking my story. Few typos are there. I wish I cud correct them... Waiting for results:-)

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Great story telling......I could visualize Chandrika walking the graden of truth????

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Very well written

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Very well crafted.

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