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“The Sound of the Last Matchstick”

Sharda Gupta
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Submitted to Contest #5 in response to the prompt: 'You overhear something you weren’t meant to. What happens next?'

(A story of silence, regret, and the music that rises from its ashes)

The room was dim, lit only by the flickering tail of a candle nearing its death. Shadows danced like memories on the cracked walls of Room 317 — a place Arin hadn’t visited in twenty years. Dust lay thick, like guilt, on every surface.

He had once burned this room — not with fire, but with truth withheld.

Twenty years ago, this room had a piano. And a girl.

Evelyn.

She had hands like music and eyes like open skies. She played for the rain, and sometimes, for him. Her laughter had once clung to the air like perfume. But laughter, he would later learn, is the first sound to leave a room that knows it’s dying.

Back then, he had a choice. One sentence. One truth. He could have said:
“I love you.”
But silence was safer. Silence, after all, never betrayed a man until much later.

Evelyn left the town two days after that unspoken night. No letters. No trace. Just a piano with a broken A-note and a room filled with silence — his silence.

Now, two decades later, Arin stood in the same room, holding a matchbox. His marriage had crumbled like stale bread. His music had vanished. Fame came and left like a drunk lover. But Evelyn — Evelyn had remained. In dreams. In regrets. In the background hum of consequences.

He sat at the broken bench, ran his fingers over the piano’s keys — now mute, dusty, dead. A metaphor, perhaps, for the heart he never opened.

He struck the last matchstick.

And suddenly, the room was gold — not with fire, but with the memory of her. In that one flicker, he remembered it all: the day he had lied to protect his pride, the moment he saw her tears and turned away, the phone call he never returned.

Consequences aren’t born in courtrooms or karma.
They live in every silence, every truth unsaid, every matchstick we refuse to light.

The match burned his fingers. He dropped it. And just before it died, he whispered to the shadows:

“I loved you.”

The candle died.

So did the moment.

But something shifted.

From somewhere in the dark, the A-note played itself.

The A-note.

It shouldn’t have been possible. The piano hadn’t worked in years. The wood was swollen with time, the keys pale with dust. And yet… there it was.

A single note.
Lonely. Hollow. True.

Arin froze. He didn’t believe in ghosts. He believed in guilt — in the way it sharpens over time, like a blade long forgotten in the drawer. But what if consequences could echo?

He turned toward the piano. Nothing. No one.

Just that note, still trembling in the air — like a question waiting for an answer.

Suddenly, the room began to breathe. Not literally, but rhythmically — the way a long-forgotten room begins to remember itself. The moth-eaten curtains stirred without wind. The wallpaper peeled like old skin. And in the far mirror, something shimmered.

He walked to it.

Not his reflection.

Hers.

Evelyn. Young. Dressed in blue. Playing a piano that no longer existed. And smiling… that smile — half forgiveness, half farewell.

“Did you… come back?” he whispered, voice cracking under the weight of two decades.

She didn’t answer. Just played. Her hands moved without sound. Only the A-note lingered.

And then… she looked up.

Not at him.

Through him.

As if to say — “You are not haunted by me. You are haunted by yourself.”

Arin sank to the ground.

Tears came — not the tears of fresh grief, but those old, rusted tears that finally fall when the dam of ego breaks. He wept for every word unsaid, for every cowardice cloaked as logic, for the life he could have lived had he simply chosen differently.

Consequences, he now knew, were never loud.
They didn’t come with storms.
They came quietly.
In mirrors.
In matchsticks.
In music that shouldn’t exist.

The mirror went dark.

Evelyn was gone.

But the silence that followed was different — not empty, but full. As if the room had finally exhaled.

Arin rose.

He didn’t light another match.

He didn’t try to chase the memory.

He simply walked out.

And for the first time in twenty years, the door closed without echo.

Arin walked out of Room 317 like a man climbing out of a grave — not resurrected, not redeemed, but aware.

Outside, the sky was neither dark nor dawn. It was that unspeakable grey, where time folds in on itself. As if even the heavens couldn’t decide whether to remember or forget.

He passed the corridor without looking back. But the A-note followed him — not in sound now, but in pulse. That ghostly vibration of what almost was.

Downstairs, the old caretaker looked up from his chair, eyes glinting with something between recognition and disbelief.

“You went back,” he said.

Arin didn’t nod. He didn’t need to.

The man leaned forward. “That room’s been locked since she left.”

“I know,” Arin replied.

“She used to play… even after you stopped coming.”
A pause.
“She waited, you know. For you to speak. For you to choose her.”

Arin didn’t respond. What could he say? Language breaks at the edge of regret.

The man lit a cigarette and watched the smoke curl. “You’re lucky. Some people never get to hear the last note.”

That struck him. The last note.
He had heard it. Felt it. Survived it.

Outside, the city roared as usual — indifferent, mechanical, full of lives rushing past one another in the chaos of unspoken things. He stood there for a moment, watching people. So many carrying matchsticks they would never light. So many pretending silence had no sound.

And in that moment, Arin made a decision.

Not to undo the past.

But to write music again.
Not for fame. Not for applause.
But for forgiveness.

He returned home. To the room no one entered.
Dusted off the piano he hadn’t touched in years.
Sat before it like a man before a tomb.

And then, without looking at the keys, he whispered:

“Let it not be too late for someone else.”

His fingers fell gently.
The melody began.
Slow. Raw. Human.

And in that melody, Evelyn lived again — not as a ghost, but as a consequence.
A holy one.

Sometimes, the greatest hauntings are not by ghosts, but by our own choices.
This story is a requiem — not for love lost, but for truths left unspoken.
For every silence that shaped a future, and every consequence that came wrapped in time.

Some silences burn louder than screams.
And some matchsticks — never lit — ignite entire lives.






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Hey Sharda, This was breathtaking — a story that feels like a whispered confession to the soul. The way silence, regret, music, and memory are woven together is nothing short of poetic — I have given full 50 points to your well deserved story! Would love your thoughts on my story too—Overheard at the Edge of Goodbye: https://notionpress.com/write_contest/details/6116/overheard-at-the-edge-of-goodbye

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