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Aiming for the Stars
Mohd Moin
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Submitted to Contest #1 in response to the prompt: 'Write a story about an underdog chasing an impossible dream. '

Rhea stood on the roof of her small house, gazing at the night sky. The stars twinkled like tiny diamonds spread across a dark blanket. In her quiet fishing village, most people went to bed early so they could rise before dawn to head out to the sea. But Rhea was wide awake, thinking about her impossible dream: she wanted to become an astronaut.

She lived in a humble home with her parents and younger brother. Her father was a fisherman, just like his father before him. Her mother sold fish in the local market. They worked hard to feed the family, and they expected Rhea to join them once she finished school. But Rhea had a fire in her heart that would not go out. Every time she read a book about space travel or watched a rocket launch on the small television in the neighbor’s shop, she felt more certain of her goal. Even if nobody believed in her dream, she did.

One evening, when she was ten years old, Rhea saw a television program about the first woman who traveled into space. She watched in awe as the astronaut floated in zero gravity, looking down at the Earth. It was the most beautiful thing Rhea had ever seen. From that moment on, she knew she had to reach those stars one day. That dream became her secret fuel, powering her through the hardships of life in the village.

Her parents had other plans for her. They needed her to help with fishing, cooking, and selling fish. They worried that her ideas were too big, too distant from their reality. Still, they let her go to school every day, hoping she would learn enough to find a better job in the city.

As Rhea grew older, she realized how hard it would be to become an astronaut. She read articles about famous space agencies. She learned that astronauts needed strong math and science skills, and they often studied in the best universities. Rhea’s school had limited resources. The library was small, and many textbooks were out of date. But Rhea never gave up.

Every day after school, she would climb onto her roof with a notebook and a small flashlight. She would write down questions about the stars and the solar system. Sometimes, she drew rough sketches of rockets and space capsules. She did not have fancy equipment, but her mind was full of curiosity. She believed that if she worked hard, somehow, she would find a way.

Her classmates teased her, calling her “Moon Girl.” They said, “You’ll never leave this village. You’re just a fisherman’s daughter.” Their words hurt, but she refused to let them crush her spirit. She kept studying, kept dreaming, and kept hoping.

One afternoon, a new science teacher, Mr. Das, joined her school. He noticed Rhea’s enthusiasm for space and invited her to stay after class to discuss science projects. At first, Rhea was shy, but she soon realized Mr. Das was kind and encouraging.

“Rhea,” he said one day, “why do you want to become an astronaut?”

She answered, “I want to see the Earth from above. I want to explore the universe and understand what’s out there. It feels like a calling.”

Mr. Das smiled. “That’s a wonderful dream. If you’re serious, you have to work hard in math and science. You also need physical training. It won’t be easy, but if you keep your determination, you can succeed.”

For the first time, Rhea felt someone truly believed in her dream. Mr. Das lent her books about astronomy and physics. He taught her how to solve advanced math problems. Sometimes, they stayed long after the last bell, discussing planets, stars, and the laws of motion.
However, as Rhea got more involved in her studies, she had less time to help her parents. This caused arguments at home. One evening, her mother confronted her.

“Rhea, your father and I work all day. We need you to help with chores. You can’t always be reading these books and doing experiments,” she said.

Rhea looked at her mother’s tired face and felt guilty. She knew her parents struggled to pay the bills. But her dream still shone brightly inside her.

“Maa,” Rhea replied gently, “I promise I will do my chores. I just need a little time for my studies. I want to do something that will make our lives better.”

Her mother sighed. She loved her daughter, but she feared Rhea was chasing a fantasy. In the end, she let Rhea continue, as long as she finished her responsibilities. It was not easy, but Rhea managed to balance her home duties with her studies.
One day, Mr. Das announced a statewide science fair in the city. Students could present projects, and the winners would receive scholarships. Rhea immediately thought, “This could be my chance.” She decided to create a model rocket and explain the basic principles of rocketry—how thrust, lift, and gravity work.

She spent weeks building a small rocket model using recycled materials. She researched day and night, making sure she understood every detail. When the day of the science fair arrived, Rhea traveled to the city with Mr. Das and two other classmates.

At the fair, she saw students from big schools with fancy models and expensive displays. She felt a little nervous, but she set up her modest project with care. Her poster boards were hand-drawn, and her rocket model was simple, but it was built with passion.

Judges walked around, asking questions. Some seemed surprised to see a girl from a small village talking about rocket science with such confidence. Rhea answered their questions calmly, explaining the concepts she had learned from books and from her discussions with Mr. Das.

When the results were announced, Rhea couldn’t believe her ears—she had won first place in her category! The judges praised her for her creativity and deep understanding of the subject. She was awarded a small scholarship and a chance to attend a special science camp over the summer.

Returning home with her trophy and certificate, Rhea’s parents were both proud and worried. They were happy she had succeeded, but they knew the path she was choosing would demand a lot of money and even more hard work.

Her father said, “Beta, I’m proud of you, but I don’t want you to be disappointed. Becoming an astronaut is not easy. Are you sure this is the path you want?”

Rhea nodded. “Yes, Papa. I know it’s hard, but I have to try.”

Her parents didn’t understand everything about space travel, but they saw the determination in her eyes. Slowly, they began to support her dream, helping with small expenses and giving her more time to study.

The science camp was in a large city. Rhea had never traveled so far on her own. The camp introduced her to scientists, engineers, and other students who loved science as much as she did. They shared stories of their dreams and experiments. She felt like she had finally found a place where she belonged.

Each day, she learned something new—robotics, coding, advanced math, and problem-solving. She felt overwhelmed at times, but she refused to quit. Every lesson brought her one step closer to the stars. She met mentors who encouraged her to apply for special programs in the future, like college scholarships focused on aerospace engineering.

By the end of the camp, Rhea felt more confident than ever. She understood that her journey would be long and filled with obstacles. She would have to study hard, get into a good university, and then fight for a spot in a competitive space program. Yet, every difficulty seemed smaller compared to her burning passion.

When she returned to her village, her parents greeted her with open arms. Even her little brother looked at her with admiration. He showed her a drawing he made of a rocket with her name on it, soaring high above the clouds.

Rhea smiled, tears of joy filling her eyes. She knew her dream was still “impossible” to many people. But in her heart, she believed that with hard work, determination, and the support of those who cared about her, she could turn the impossible into reality.
Standing on the roof again, Rhea looked up at the sky. It seemed friendlier now, as if it were calling her by name. She closed her eyes and imagined herself floating in space, looking down at the Earth—her home, her family, her village. She promised herself she would never give up.

Yes, she was an underdog. Yes, her dream was huge. But she had faith in her abilities, in the power of education, and in the support she had found. Someday, she would become the astronaut she always wanted to be.

For now, she whispered a quiet prayer to the stars and climbed down from the roof. There were books to read, equations to solve, and chores to do. The journey would be long, but her spirit was strong. With every step, she was reaching closer to the sky.

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Such a heart ❤️ touching story

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Bhaut khub mere bhai

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