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"The Power of a Yes"

Arpana.chhavi
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Submitted to Contest #5 in response to the prompt: 'A simple “yes” leads to something you never saw coming'



Prathibha was the kind of girl who always said no.
Not because she wasn’t capable, but because the world made her believe she wasn’t.
“No, I’m not ready.”
“No, someone else will do it better.”
“No, I’ll just watch from the back.”

So when her English teacher stood in front of the class and said,

> “We need someone to represent our school in the state-level storytelling competition,”
Prathibha opened her mouth to say no, like always—but something in her shifted.



And this time, she whispered:
“Yes.”

The class paused.
Some laughed lightly, some looked surprised.
Even the teacher blinked, as if to say, You sure?
Prathibha nodded. Even though her heartbeat was loud enough to drown every thought.


---

That night, she poured her soul into words.
She wrote about a girl who was quiet, ignored, soft-spoken—
Until the world finally heard her.

One week later, Prathibha stood under the stage lights.
Her hands trembled, but her voice didn’t break.
She spoke with heart.

When she finished, silence filled the auditorium.

Then... thunderous applause.
And then—her name. First place.


---

But it didn’t stop there.

One of the judges approached her after the event.
“You write with honesty,” he said.
“I run a national storytelling fellowship. Would you like to join?”

She wanted to say no.

But this time, she smiled and said:
“Yes.”



---

The offer sounded too big for someone who had once struggled to even raise her hand in class.

But Prathibha didn’t let that scare her this time.

She joined the fellowship.

At first, she sat quietly in every session. Dozens of confident teenagers surrounded her, tossing ideas like fireworks, while she clutched her notebook like a shield.

But then came the first group project.

Their task: write a story based on a real-life injustice.

Nobody in her team could agree. The louder voices clashed. Ideas scattered.

And then, Prathibha spoke.

Just one sentence.

> “Why don’t we write about the pressure on girls to always be perfect — quiet, pretty, respectful — even when they’re breaking inside?”



The room fell silent.

Then someone nodded.

Then another.

By the end of the week, their team’s story was selected to be published in the fellowship’s national journal.

Her name, printed next to the story's title, felt surreal.

But what surprised her more wasn’t the recognition.

It was that the loudest voices now waited for her to speak first.

She wasn’t invisible anymore.

And it all went back to that single, ordinary moment when she said yes.
The months that followed were quiet on the outside, but loud within Prathibha.

People clapped when she spoke now. Teachers introduced her as "our rising writer." Some classmates smiled with admiration — or maybe envy — she couldn't always tell. But deep inside, Prathibha still felt like the same girl who sat silently in the back row.

The girl who once feared being noticed… now feared being expected.

At the fellowship’s mid-year seminar, each student was assigned a mentor. Prathibha’s was a woman named Arpita Roy, a critically acclaimed author who was known for her powerful storytelling and even more powerful silences.

Their first conversation was polite.

Their second, deeper.

On the third call, Arpita asked softly,

> “Prathibha, why do your stories always sound like someone is whispering through tears?”



She paused.

No one had ever asked her that.

She stared at the screen for a long time before answering.

> “Because I never learned how to scream. Not in real life.”



There was silence on the other end.

And then, Arpita nodded, as if she had been waiting for that answer.

> “Then start now. Not by screaming, but by writing like you finally can.”




---

So Prathibha did.

She stopped writing the way she thought others wanted her to.

She stopped using words that sounded pretty but meant nothing.

And she began writing what scared her.
The time she cried silently in the washroom after being mocked for her worn-out shoes.
The time a relative said, "Girls who talk too much don’t get respect."
The time she wanted to ask for help… and didn’t.

It was hard.

Sometimes she would stare at the screen for hours, unsure if she was being brave or stupid.

Sometimes her hands would shake while pressing "submit."

But every time she did, something changed. Her voice became sharper. Her stories began to echo in people’s minds. Judges quoted her lines. Readers messaged her paragraphs of how they cried while reading.

She was still quiet in real life, but her writing no longer was.


---

One day, an unexpected email arrived.

> Subject: TEDxYouth – Official Speaker Invite
Body: "We’ve followed your writing journey through the fellowship. We believe your voice can inspire many more. Would you consider sharing your story on our platform?"



She read it five times.

Then closed it.

Then reopened it again.

She wasn’t sure if she was ready.

That night, she lay in bed, replaying every reason to say no.

What if I forget my lines? What if my voice shakes? What if I disappoint everyone who believes in me now?

But then, she remembered a girl. A girl sitting quietly in a classroom.
A girl who once whispered yes without knowing why — and unknowingly set her life on fire.

She clicked reply.

> “Yes. I will do it.”




---

Preparation wasn’t easy. She wrote and rewrote her script a dozen times.
She practiced in front of the mirror, to her reflection that never judged her.
She practiced in front of Arpita, who told her to stop being perfect and start being honest.

And finally, the day came.

The stage wasn’t huge, but it felt like a mountain.

She stepped up.

The lights were warm.

The mic was cold.

Her hands trembled just slightly, but her eyes were steady.

And when she began, she didn’t try to sound wise. Or bold. Or poetic.

She simply told her story.

About a simple girl, in a simple classroom, saying a simple word that changed everything.

She paused in the middle, when her voice cracked.

She wiped a tear she didn’t expect.

She even laughed once, when the audience did.

And by the end, when she looked up — she saw tears.

Not just in one pair of eyes, but many.

Even the girl in the third row, with glasses just like hers, was silently mouthing, “Thank you.”


---

After the event, she stood alone for a while near the exit.

People came, thanked her, praised her, some even hugged her.
But it was that one girl who made her breath catch.

She came up, notebook in hand, and said:

> “I was scared to apply for this event. I felt invisible. But then I heard you… and I thought—maybe someone like me could be seen too.”



Prathibha smiled.

She didn’t say much. Just hugged her, and whispered:

> “Say yes. Even if your hands shake.”




---

Weeks later, the TEDx video went live.
It crossed a hundred views. Then a thousand. Then ten thousand.
She received a message from her old English teacher:

> “Still remember the day you surprised the whole class. Look at you now.”



She smiled.

Because even now, deep down, she was still that quiet girl.
Still unsure. Still overthinking. Still soft.

But no longer silent.

Her “yes” had led her here — not because she knew what was coming, but because she was willing to find out.

And that’s how quiet revolutions begin.




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