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The flight of Amir

Indu Kaur
WAR STORY
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Submitted to Contest #1 in response to the prompt: 'Write a story about an underdog chasing an impossible dream. '



Chapter 1: A Dream Too Big

The first time Amir saw a plane, he was five years old.

It was a dusty afternoon in his small Afghan village, where the mountains stood tall like silent guardians. He had been chasing a wayward goat across the fields when he heard a deep, distant rumble in the sky. When he looked up, his breath caught in his throat.

A military helicopter soared overhead, slicing through the clouds like a great iron bird. The roar of its engines shook the earth beneath his feet, sending the goats scattering. But Amir didn’t move. His heart raced with something unfamiliar—an ache, a yearning.

“One day, I will fly,” he whispered to himself.

His father, Rahim, had laughed when he told him. “You are a shepherd’s son, Amir. The sky is not for boys like you. Now, go fetch the goats.”

But the sky had already claimed him.

Every night, he lay under the open heavens, watching the stars blink like tiny lanterns. He imagined himself soaring among them, feeling the wind against his face, weightless and free.

Yet, dreams in his village were like birds with broken wings—doomed before they could ever take flight.

Chapter 2: Wooden Wings and Broken Bones

Amir was eight when he built his first set of wings.

They were crude, made from cloth stretched over bamboo sticks. He had watched how birds spread their wings to catch the wind, how they adjusted their angles to glide. So, he climbed onto the roof of his father’s barn, spread his arms, and jumped.

For a glorious second, he felt it—air rushing against his skin, the earth falling away.

And then, he crashed.

His mother screamed when she found him, his arm twisted at an unnatural angle. His father was furious. “You are a fool, Amir!” he scolded. “No son of mine will waste his time chasing the sky!”

But the pain in his arm was nothing compared to the fire in his heart.

So, he tried again. And again.

The villagers shook their heads. “That boy is mad,” they whispered. “He thinks he can fly.”

Even the children mocked him. “Bird-boy! When will you learn? The sky is not for you!”

But Amir didn’t listen.

Chapter 3: The War That Took Everything

When Amir was ten, war came to his village.

It arrived in the form of tanks rolling through the dusty streets, soldiers shouting orders, and the deafening sound of gunfire. Planes roared overhead, dropping bombs that turned homes into rubble.

One night, the sky burned red with fire.

His father’s farm was destroyed. His mother wept as they fled into the mountains. Amir watched as their village crumbled behind them, as the land he had known his entire life turned into nothing but ashes and memories.

For months, they lived as refugees in a neighboring town. Food was scarce, work even scarcer. Amir’s father, once a proud shepherd, was reduced to begging for work.

But war had left something behind.

Abandoned airplanes, old military equipment, torn parachutes, rusted parts. To others, they were remnants of destruction. To Amir, they were pieces of a dream.

Chapter 4: The Man Who Saw Him

It was in that town that Amir met Baba Jan.

Baba Jan had once been an airplane mechanic before the war took everything from him. He was an old man with oil-stained hands and tired eyes, spending his days fixing motorcycles for scraps of bread.

One afternoon, Amir found him working on an old engine in the marketplace. He watched in fascination as the man adjusted gears and twisted wires, bringing the lifeless machine back to life.

“Do you want to learn?” Baba Jan asked, catching Amir staring.

And just like that, Amir had found a mentor.

Day after day, he sat by Baba Jan’s side, listening to his stories of airplanes, engines, and the science of flight. He learned about aerodynamics, lift, drag, and thrust. Baba Jan even let him read from his old aviation books, their pages worn but filled with knowledge.

“You have the heart of a pilot, my boy,” Baba Jan told him one evening. “But dreams are not enough. You must fight for them.”

Chapter 5: The Test of Faith

Years passed. Amir grew into a young man, his dream burning brighter than ever.

One day, he heard about a flight academy in the city. They were offering a scholarship for pilot training. It was impossible—he had no money, no connections. But Baba Jan pushed him.

“You must try, Amir. What do you have to lose?”

So, at seventeen, Amir took the little money he had saved, packed a small bag, and set off on foot.

For two days, he walked across the unforgiving terrain, enduring scorching heat by day and freezing winds by night. When he finally reached the city, he was exhausted, starving, and covered in dust.

The academy was grand—tall buildings, shining planes, young men in crisp uniforms. Amir felt out of place in his worn clothes and calloused hands.

But he stepped inside anyway.

When he told them he wanted to be a pilot, the officers laughed.

“You are a shepherd’s son. What do you know about flying?”

Amir swallowed his fear. “Ask me anything about flight,” he challenged.

They did. And he answered. Not from textbooks, but from years of watching birds, from hours of studying with Baba Jan, from his own experiments with wind and motion.

One instructor, an older man with sharp eyes, listened carefully. Then, he smiled.

“This boy is different,” he said. “Let him try.”

Chapter 6: The Sky Is Ours

Amir trained harder than anyone else. He studied every night until his eyes burned, practiced flight simulations until his fingers ached, pushed his body to the limit.

The academy was brutal. The other cadets came from wealthy families, educated backgrounds. They mocked him, tried to break him.

But Amir had already survived worse.

He didn’t break.

The day he took his first solo flight, he finally understood what it meant to belong to the sky.

As the plane lifted off the ground, his heart soared. The earth shrank beneath him, and the mountains—those mighty giants that once trapped him—now lay below his wings.

For the first time in his life, Amir was free.

Epilogue: The Shepherd Who Flew

Years later, Amir returned to his village—not as a shepherd, but as a pilot.

The same villagers who once mocked him now gathered in awe as his plane descended onto the dusty field. Children ran to see, their eyes wide with wonder.

His father, now old and frail, stood watching, tears glistening in his eyes.

“You did it,” he whispered.

Amir smiled. “I was always meant to.”

And as he looked up at the sky—the same sky that once felt so far away—he knew the truth.

Impossible dreams were only impossible to those who never dared to chase them.

And Amir?

He was born to fly.

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