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Gokulram
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Submitted to Contest #5 in response to the prompt: 'You send a message to the wrong person. What happens next?'


Chapter 1: The Mistaken Message:

Maya’s thumb hovered above the SEND button, her pulse tapping a faint rhythm against her skin. The apartment was silent-too silent-interrupted only by the city’s distant echoes. She had been trying to hire a cook. Her friends, eager to help, tossed around phone numbers, promising delicious home-cooked meals and reliable service.

No one picked up the first call. Try again. Nothing. Impatience rising, Maya typed, “Hi, I’d like to hire you. Please contact me ASAP.” She hit send, then spotted the typo in the number. A cold bead of sweat formed, then evaporated. What could go wrong?

Maya slipped her phone under her pillow and closed her eyes, unaware of the storm about to spiral through her world.

Chapter 2: Tracing Signals

Five kilometers away, in a windowless government facility, silence fractured into alarms. The number Maya had messaged-a dormant ghost-flared on watchlists. A rush of activity: agency analysts scrambled, tracing the text to Maya’s modest apartment. The recipient was no ordinary person, but a target: the elusive Specter, an assassin so dangerous every accidental contact was a potential catastrophe.

In a darkened room, Specter checked a secure device-and blinked. Only two people, now both presumed dead, should ever message him. The text glared: “I’d like to hire you.” His hand hovered over a pistol.

The government’s strike protocol activated. Tactical teams mobilized. Orders roared through wires.

Chapter 3: The Screaming Sirens

A dreamless Maya startled awake to pounding on her door. Sirens cut the darkness. Shadows flickered-helmets, rifles, armored vests. Before she could scream, the door exploded inward.

She froze in the living room, hands raised. The room flooded with light and chaos-a dozen agents barking, demanding she stay put. Her phone vibrated. A message: YOU SHOULDN’T HAVE.

Her brain hardly processed it. Guns swept the room; lasers dotted her chest. Voices outside. Sudden, utter silence. A single, thunderous crack.

Maya never saw the bullet.

In a distant room, a calm voice issued: “Loose end tied up, boss.”

Chapter 4: The Aftermath

Darkness lingered along Maya’s street, thick with the churn of government vehicles and buzzing drones. News broke quietly: a young woman, deceased-an “incident,” the authorities whispered.

Inside, investigators swarmed. Maya’s personal things-books, faded photographs, receipts for groceries-were barcoded as evidence. Her friends, bewildered, were questioned for hours. Every digital trace was sucked into secured servers.

An investigator, Inspector Yadav, lingered over Maya’s phone. The text’s banality haunted him. Was this the whole story? Protocol dictated silence, erasure, and a heavy shroud of secrecy.

But a hint of Maya’s innocence crept through: she had simply wanted a cook.

Chapter 5: The Assassin’s Perspective

Elsewhere, Specter prowled a hotel rooftop, restless and haunted. The accidental message gnawed at him. He replayed footage-Maya, frightened, uncomprehending, not the threat expected. Not the person he had always killed.

Specter remembered training in shadows, missions where mistakes were death sentences. The rules were written in cold blood. Yet guilt crept beneath his armor.

At a midnight cafe, nervously paging through false identities, Specter considered his options. Maya’s face wouldn’t fade. For the first time, the assassin doubted the system that shaped him.

Inspector Yadav dug deeper, following breadcrumbs in agency records. Each clue whispered sabotage.

Chapter 6: Tension Builds

Maya’s parents arrived, hearts cratered. No explanations were offered; only threats. The government moved swiftly: scrubbing security camera footage, intercepting calls, warning friends to stay silent.

One friend vanished from her college campus. Police claimed it was a misunderstanding.

Yadav watched shadows pool in every interrogation room. He uncovered details about a secret number, a phone line tied to covert operations and global intelligence. He pressed officers for answers. No one spoke.

Outside, rain battered Delhi’s windows. Fear was everywhere.

Chapter 7: The Sniper's Doubt

From a cramped safe house, Specter scrolled through old messages-empty, cryptic things. He watched Maya’s accidental text a hundred times, guilt burning his resolve. Why was she targeted so mercilessly? Had his one mistake ended an innocent life?

As he contacted a trusted mole within the agency, he learned the order was never questioned. Just protocol. The mole, terrified, swapped out internal files, leaving false trails about the “public enemy” nobody knew.

Specter’s conscience buckled. He whispered, “Never again.”

Chapter 8: Closing In

Yadav, relentless and sleep-starved, found a like-minded analyst. Together, they traced the chain from Maya’s call log to the secret bunker where the kill order originated.

A new threat emerged: the sister of a high-profile politician received an anonymous message, warning her to stand down or face consequences. The stakes expanded-this conspiracy stretched into the highest offices.

Together, Yadav and the analyst mapped Maya’s path, knotting together the evidence in hidden files, encrypted and ready for the right moment.

Chapter 9: Final Confrontation

Specter reached out to Yadav, voice disguised and urgent. “I killed the wrong target,” he confessed. “There’s a cover-up.”

They arranged a midnight meeting atop an abandoned high-rise. Rain fell in sheets. Armed agents circled below, sirens wailing, red and blue light strobing against glass.

Yadav brought the evidence. Specter offered testimony: every protocol, every kill order, every unsanctioned execution, all documented in chilling detail. Agents burst through doors, a firefight erupting through fog and neon.

Specter shielded Yadav. “Go!” he ordered. Bullets danced through darkness. The rooftop bled rain and secrets. Someone screamed. Then silence.

Chapter 10: The Twist

When dawn came, the rooftop was empty. Specter had vanished into the city’s veins, washed away by the monsoon.

The government labeled Maya’s death a tragic accident. Files were sealed. Whistleblowers disappeared. Yet evidence-Yadav’s encrypted dossier-waited in a hidden vault, a fuse for a reckoning delayed.

Alone, Yadav revisited the file. Among the documents, a faded photograph slipped out: Maya as a little girl, holding hands with an older brother whose face was now gaunt and haunted-the same face glimpsed beneath the sniper’s mask.

For now, truth slept in the shadows. But someday-a message would awaken it. Hope the message gets sent to tha right number.

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