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The Last Yes

Anmol Mehta
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Submitted to Contest #5 in response to the prompt: 'A simple “yes” leads to something you never saw coming'

Psychological Thriller



PART 1: THE WEIGHT OF A WORD

Mira Sokolov’s apartment reeked of the 911 dispatch center—burnt coffee, lithium batteries, and the metallic tang of panic trapped in headsets. Four hundred and seventeen nights without sleep had carved shadows beneath her eyes, deep as the grooves she’d once clawed into her childhood staircase.

At six, she had learned to hold her breath on those creaking steps, where whispers slithered from the walls like smoke. Her mother called it imagination. Her father, nerves. But one night, his silhouette had lingered by the banister, head tilted, eyes gleaming with something not his own.
“You hear them too, don’t you?” he’d whispered. His voice had been low. Afraid.
Mira had stayed silent.
Saying yes felt like inviting the dark inside.

Now, the bedside clock blinked 3:03 a.m. The witching hour. The hour Sarah Rifkin died.

Mira had been eating lemon drops that night, the sour powder still on her tongue when the call came.
“He’s in the house—” Sarah’s whisper, frayed and trembling. “Please, he has a—”

Then the wet crunch of cartilage. A gurgle.
Silence.

Mira’s fingers had flown across the keyboard: “Priority 1, possible homicide in progress.”
Her voice had been calm, trained, automatic.
“Yes. Help is coming.”
But she already knew. That silence had weight—like a body slumping against the wall. Like blood pooling beneath a landline’s coiled cord, thick and black in the moonlight.

They’d found Sarah curled around her phone, clutching it like a teddy bear. Crime scene photos haunted Mira’s locker. Her fingernails had gouged “NOT HIM” into the hardwood floor—a last, desperate plea.
The report said suicide. But the thumbprint bruises on her throat—yellowing like old parchment—screamed murder.

Mira pulled Sarah’s file: Art teacher. Thirty-two. Known for murals brightening the community center. Hands always flecked with blues, reds—colors of a life cut short.

One note stood out.
A man had watched her class. Stirring his coffee. Tapping a spoon.
Tap. Tap-tap. Tap.
Morse code for “RUN.”

Later, Officer Delgado cornered Mira in the hallway, gripping his radio like a rosary.
“Stay away from Holloway,” he muttered. “Found a kid’s drawing in Sarah’s house—stairs, hands. Like the others.”
His eyes flicked to the shadowy corner of the dispatch room.
“They’re watching us.”

Jake, the night-shift vet, tossed her a protein bar.
“You look like hell, Sokolov,” he grinned. His headset dangled like a noose.
He’d always scoffed at her “weird call” stories.
Until last week. When he’d frozen mid-dispatch. Coffee mug trembling. Eyes locked on that same corner.
Tap. Tap-tap. Tap.
The sound lingered.



PART 2: THE COMMUNITY CENTER

The community center sat at the town’s edge, windows dark, Sarah’s murals hidden beneath layers of dusk and dust.

Mira’s flashlight swept the hallway—catching slivers of color.
Spiraling staircases. Hands reaching through banisters. Painted not with joy—but desperation.

One mural bore a child’s scrawl:
“Lena, age 7,” scratched into the paint. The red letters looked freshly carved.

Her breath hitched.
The napkin from the diner—the sketch of the hand, the stairs.
A warning.

A janitor pushed a broom nearby.
“Sarah painted those before she… changed,” he whispered.
“Said voices in the walls told her to say something. Said they wanted her to speak.”
He eyed the mural uneasily.
“You see the hands? Sometimes… they move.”

Mira stepped closer.
The painted hands seemed to twitch. Reaching farther.
She blinked. They stilled.
Just paint.
Just shadow.
But the air was heavy again—like that staircase from her childhood, whispering secrets no one else could hear.



PART 3: THE DINER’S TRAP

The diner’s vinyl booths clung to Mira’s legs—sticky with old grease and graveyard desperation.
She counted the cracks in her coffee mug.
Eleven.
Like a prisoner counting days.

Doris, the waitress, refilled her cup with shaky hands.
“You okay, hon?”
Mira nodded, distracted.

Then the girl appeared—like she’d always been there.
Gaunt. Pale. A thumbprint-shaped bruise blooming beneath one eye like a pressed flower.

She slid into the booth. Her voice was barely a breath.
“Pretend you’re my aunt. Five minutes. That guy’s watching me.”

Mira glanced at the man in the corner booth.
Ordinary.
Except for his spoon’s rhythm.
Tap. Tap-tap. Tap.

Morse code. Again.
“RUN.”

“Sure, kid,” Mira said. Her dispatcher’s calm snapped into place.

The girl’s grip closed around her wrist—cold as a morgue drawer.
“Say it like you mean it.”

Mira’s heart raced.
The diner lights flickered. The bruise beneath the girl’s eye darkened in the pulse of shadow.
“Yes,” Mira said, voice shaking.

The girl smiled. Too wide. Too slow.
She left a folded napkin behind.

Mira opened it.

“THEY NEVER CHECK THE STAIRCASE.”
Below it: a child’s hand, sketched in trembling ink, reaching through banisters.

Doris leaned over.
“Seen her before,” she muttered.
“Never eats. Never pays. Just leaves those napkins.”



PART 4: HOLLOWAY’S SECRETS

The entrance to Holloway Psychiatric Hospital gaped like a mouth full of rotting teeth.
A breeze carried the scent of decayed lavender—meant to mask something older, deeper.

Graffiti near the door:
“They don’t cure you here.
They harvest you.”

Mira’s flashlight carved a tunnel through dust and mildew.

She found:
• Third Floor West Wing: Patient records scattered like confetti. Every name matched a failed 911 call: Clara Hensley, 1962. Maritza Vega, 1987. Sarah Rifkin.
• Nurse’s Station: A binder labeled Trial 2917. Sarah’s entry.
“Subject terminated upon breach of silence protocol. Extraction: Viable.”
A yellowed memo:
“Project Lullaby (Est. 1953): Vocal resonance in subjects trained to say ‘yes.’ Dispatchers ideal.
Speech = sacrifice.”
• Polaroid Wall: Photos of women. All silenced.
Duct tape over mouths.
Except Sarah.
Her lips were sealed shut with black surgical wire. Her eyes stared, frozen.

In the basement, she found the Silence Chamber.
Metal tables. Mouths wired shut. Wires feeding machines pulsing like heartbeats.
A note above the door:
“Trial 2917.”

One corpse’s lips twitched.
It whispered “Yes” in Mira’s voice.

She dropped the flashlight.

The red emergency phone rang.
Sounded like bones in a tin can.

Mira answered.

“Unit 46, officer down—”
Her voice. Distorted. Drugged.

Then a child’s voice:
“Ashes, ashes… we all fall down.”

More voices followed. From old calls.

“The wires are moving under the floor!” (1998)
“She says don’t talk but I have to—” (2014)
“The walls are humming—alive!” (2003)

All ended in silence.

Mira had said “yes” to them all.

And each one had died.



PART 5: LENA’S TRUTH

Lena stepped from the morgue’s swinging doors—calm now. Rehearsed.
A syringe gleamed in her hand.
Scar lines like stitchwork laddered up her wrists.

“You’re not the first dispatcher we’ve recycled,” she said.

“I was twenty-three. Like you. My ‘yes’ opened the first door. They stitched me shut, but I lived. Now I keep the choir in tune.”

Mira backed into the autopsy table.
“What do you want from me?”

Lena pressed a stethoscope to her chest.
Her heartbeat fractured into screams:
• “The wires under my skin are singing!” (Caller #1103)
• “Mommy won’t wake up and the bad man is—” (Caller #4582)
• “Lena says we have to play the quiet game.” (Caller #2917)

“They’re not harvesting voices,” Lena said.
“They’re building a choir. And every dispatcher’s ‘yes’ is a note in the song.”

“I won’t be your puppet,” Mira growled.

Lena smiled. Hollow.
“You already are.”

The syringe plunged into her neck.
Cold fire surged through her veins.



PART 6: THE STAIRCASE TRAP

Darkness.

Mira was six again.
Crouched on the old staircase.
The banisters cold against her cheek.
The air too still.

And there it was.

The thing wearing her father’s skin.

It smiled.
“You’re good at hiding,” it crooned. “But everyone says yes… eventually.”

A phone rang.

Mira reached through the banister—like in the napkin sketch—and picked up.

“Help is—” (her adult voice)
“—coming?” (Lena’s voice, spliced in)

Then:
Dial tone.
Endless.
Devouring.



PART 7: THE LAST YES

Mira woke on a gurney.

Wires ran from her arms, her neck, her throat.
Machines hummed in time with her breath.

Behind a glass panel, children watched.

One folded a napkin.
Another tapped a spoon.
Tap. Tap-tap. Tap.

The intercom crackled:

“Trial 2917 complete. Prepare the next subject.”

The wires pulsed.
And Mira’s own voice sang back to her:
“Yes.
Yes.
Yes.”



EPILOGUE: THE NEXT YES

They found Mira alone in Holloway’s records room.

Whispering.
“Help is—”
Again and again.

Her mouth moved like a wind-up doll.

Her fingers twitched—
As if reaching through invisible banisters.

Somewhere, a phone rang.

A new dispatcher, Emily, sat at Mira’s old desk.

“911, what’s your emergency?”

A child’s voice:
“He’s under the stairs.”

Emily hesitated.

Tap. Tap-tap. Tap.
The sound came from her coffee mug.

She typed:
Units dispatched.
Her voice trembled.
“Yes.”

The next night, the call came again.
“He’s still there,” the child whispered.

A napkin lay on Emily’s desk.
Unfolded:
“THEY NEVER CHECK THE STAIRCASE.”

Her hand shook as she reached for it.
The shadows pulsed with rhythm.
A rhythm she suddenly couldn’t unhear.

Across town, a girl folded another napkin.
She’d been seven for decades.
Her voice a beacon for the thing in the walls.

“They’ll say yes soon,” she whispered to the banisters.

And the shadows nodded back.

Hungry.

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