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Discrete Revenge

Dr Nandkumar Ukadgaonkar
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Submitted to Contest #1 in response to the prompt: ' A long-standing rivalry takes an unexpected turn when circumstances force two opponents to work together.'


The city skyline stretched before him, a testament to Julian Carter’s relentless ambition. From his penthouse, he could see it all—skyscrapers housing companies he had outsmarted, headquarters of competitors he had crushed, and tech hubs dominated by innovations bearing his name. Carter Innovations was more than a company; it was an empire, and Julian Carter was its undisputed ruler.

But empires are not built without leaving scars, and Julian’s rise was paved with shattered alliances, betrayed partners, and questionable ethics.

Julian wasn’t born into wealth. He grew up in a modest suburban neighborhood in Chicago, the only child of a schoolteacher mother and an accountant father. His family was comfortable but far from affluent. From an early age, Julian displayed an insatiable curiosity and a ruthless competitive streak. While his peers were content playing games, Julian was designing them—teaching himself coding by the age of 10.

By high school, Julian had launched his first website, offering to build and host digital portfolios for local businesses. It wasn’t a groundbreaking idea, but it gave him a taste of entrepreneurs. The small profits he earned only fueled his ambitions.

At Stanford University, Julian’s brilliance truly emerged. Majoring in computer science and artificial intelligence, he dazzled professors with his groundbreaking ideas, earning accolades and the attention of venture capitalists before he even graduated. But it was his cutthroat demeanor that set him apart—Julian didn’t just want to win; he wanted others to lose.

At the age of 22, he founded Carter Innovations, a startup specializing in AI-driven predictive algorithms. The company’s first breakthrough came with Visionary, a software capable of predicting consumer trends with stunning accuracy. By the time Julian turned 25, Visionary was being used by Fortune 500 companies, and Carter Innovations was valued at over $1 billion.

Julian’s empire grew rapidly, expanding into multiple industries. He wasn’t content with being a leader in artificial intelligence; he wanted dominance in every field he entered. Amongst them prominent were Cybersecurity and Finantial Technology.
In cybersecurity Carter Innovations developed cutting-edge AI tools capable of identifying and neutralizing cyber threats in real time. The technology was so effective that governments and corporations around the world relied on it. In Financial Technology Julian disrupted traditional banking with algorithms that could predict stock market fluctuations and optimize investment portfolios. Critics accused him of creating an unfair playing field, but the profits were undeniable.

By 35, Julian was hailed as a tech visionary. Forbes declared him "The Architect of the Future," and Time magazine named him one of the 100 most influential people in the world. But while the public celebrated his genius, those closest to him knew a different Julian: ruthless, paranoid, and willing to sacrifice anything—or anyone—for his empire.

Julian’s rise wasn’t without casualties. For every deal he struck, someone was left in ruins.Amongst them the prominent victims
were Victor Steele- his business partner, Vanessa Carter- the scorned ex-Wife, Mia Ferguson- his disillusioned chief manager as well as his workers and activists.


Victor Steele had been Julian’s partner during Carter Innovations’ early days. Together, they created 'Visionary', the software that launched the company’s success. But when investors demanded a more aggressive business strategy, Julian found a way to push Victor out. The betrayal left Victor humiliated and broke, and their friendship was destroyed. Victor went on to found NexusTech, a rival company, but he never fully recovered from Julian’s betrayal. “Julian Carter doesn’t build partnerships,” Victor once said in an interview. “He builds battlegrounds.”
Julian’s marriage to Vanessa, a brilliant journalist, began as a partnership of equals. She admired his ambition and intellect, and he valued her sharp mind and ability to challenge him. But as Carter Innovations grew, so did Julian’s ego.
Vanessa accused Julian of treating her as a public relations tool—a trophy wife for public appearances. Their bitter divorce made headlines, with Vanessa walking away with a substantial settlement but none of Julian’s company shares. She later founded a nonprofit exposing unethical corporate practices, often using Carter Innovations as her prime example.

Mia Ferguson was a rising star at Carter Innovations, a senior manager who uncovered financial discrepancies suggesting insider trading. When she tried to expose the issue, Julian retaliated by discrediting her and ensuring she was blacklisted in the industry.
Mia became a vocal critic of Julian, joining advocacy groups that condemned his methods.

Julian’s relentless push for automation displaced thousands of workers, earning him the ire of labor unions. Environmentalists accused Carter Innovations of exploiting resources irresponsibly, labeling Julian as “corporate greed incarnate.”

Julian’s empire made him a billionaire and a global icon, but it also made him a target. His success bred resentment, and his enemies were legion:
Victor Steele wanted revenge for the betrayal that destroyed his career.
Vanessa Carter sought to expose him as a fraud.
Mia Ferguson wanted justice for the career he ruined.
Labor unions and activists saw him as the face of corporate exploitation.
Even his children, Alex and Chloe, resented him for being an absent father.
But Julian remained untouchable—or so he thought.



Two months earlier, Julian Carter stood at the head of a grand conference room in the Carter Innovations headquarters. The room, sleek and modern, was filled with executives, board members, and a few carefully selected journalists. Julian was in the midst of delivering a fiery, impassioned plea for a bold corporate takeover—a move that would solidify his position as a dominant force in the tech industry.

“This is not just an acquisition,” Julian declared, pacing the length of the room. “It’s a leap into the future. With this, Carter Innovations won’t just lead the market—we’ll define it!”

The energy in the room was electric, his charisma holding everyone captive. But beneath his commanding exterior, Julian was struggling. He felt an ache in his chest, sharp and persistent. He ignored it, determined to finish his presentation.

As Julian flipped to the final slide of his presentation, the ache turned into searing pain. His vision blurred, and his breath came in shallow gasps. For the first time in years, Julian faltered.

“Are you all right, Mr. Carter?” one of the executives asked, concern etched on their face.

Julian tried to wave them off, but before he could respond, his legs buckled. He collapsed onto the polished floor, clutching his chest. The room erupted in chaos.

“Call an ambulance!” someone shouted.

Julian’s assistant knelt beside him, frantically loosening his tie. “Stay with us, Julian. Help is on the way.”

Julian was rushed to St. Mary’s Hospital, where a team of doctors worked quickly to stabilize him. Hours later, he awoke in a stark hospital room, his vision still hazy. The steady beep of a heart monitor was the first sound he registered.

Dr. Nathaniel Ford, the hospital’s leading cardiologist, stood at his bedside, clipboard in hand.

“Mr. Carter,” Dr. Ford began gently, “you’ve suffered an acute myocardial infarction—a heart attack. Additionally, we’ve identified another condition called complete heart block. Your heart’s electrical system isn’t functioning properly, which means your heartbeats are irregular and dangerously slow.”

Julian’s mouth was dry, but his voice carried a hint of his usual arrogance. “Fix it. I don’t have time for this.”

Dr. Ford exchanged a glance with the nurse, then continued. “This isn’t something we can simply fix overnight. You’ll need a pacemaker to regulate your heartbeat. It’s a minor surgical procedure, but it’s essential. Without it, the risk of another cardiac event—one that could be fatal—is extremely high.”

For a man used to being in control, the news was a bitter pill to swallow. Julian had always seen his body as an extension of his will, a machine that would never fail him. The thought of relying on a device to keep him alive filled him with dread.

“How long will this take?” Julian demanded.

“The surgery itself is straightforward,” Dr. Ford explained. “You’ll be under local anesthesia, and the pacemaker will be implanted just below your collarbone. Recovery is relatively quick, but you’ll need to make some lifestyle changes afterward.”

“Lifestyle changes?” Julian scoffed. “I’m running a global empire, Doctor. I don’t have time to slow down.”

Dr. Price’s tone hardened. “If you want to keep running that empire, you’ll let us do this. This isn’t negotiable.”

Julian stared at the ceiling, the weight of his own mortality pressing down on him. Finally, he gave a small nod. “Do it.”

The following morning, Julian was prepped for surgery. The procedure was performed in a sterile operating room, with a team of specialists led by Dr. Ford.

The surgery involved threading a thin wire, called a lead, through a vein in Julian’s upper chest into his heart. This lead would carry electrical impulses from the pacemaker to ensure his heart beat steadily. The pacemaker itself, a small, titanium-encased device, was implanted beneath the skin just below Julian’s collarbone.

The procedure was completed in less than an hour.

When Julian woke up in recovery, Dr. Ford was there to check on him.

“The surgery went smoothly,” Dr. Ford said, his voice reassuring. “Your heart is now being regulated by the pacemaker. You might feel a bit sore for a few days, but the device will keep your heartbeat stable.”

Julian glanced at the faint bulge under his skin where the pacemaker had been implanted. It felt foreign, like an invasion of his autonomy.

“How does this thing work?” Julian asked.

“It monitors your heart rate and delivers electrical impulses if your heart slows down or stops,” Dr. Price explained. “It’s also equipped with remote monitoring. I’ll receive updates on your condition through a secure network.”

Julian smirked faintly, the businessman in him briefly resurfacing. “Even my heart’s in the cloud now, huh?”

Dr. Price chuckled. “You could say that.”


Despite Dr. Ford’s warnings to take it easy, Julian was back at work within a week, boasting to his team about being “better, faster, and unkillable.” The pacemaker became a footnote in his life—a device he didn’t think about until it was too late.

Two months after recovering from his near-fatal heart attack and the subsequent implantation of the pacemaker, Julian Carter was back to his usual self—domineering, ambitious, and focused on expanding his empire. But this time, his ambition was personal.

In the grand boardroom of Carter Innovations, Julian stood before a group of high-powered executives, all gathered for a late-night meeting that doubled as a celebratory party. The occasion was yet another acquisition announcement, but this one was more strategic—and more personal—than any he’d made before.

A waiter moved silently around the room, pouring champagne as Julian tapped his glass for attention.

“Ladies and gentlemen,” he began, his voice resonant and commanding, “tonight, I’m thrilled to share the next chapter in the Carter Innovations story.”

The room quieted, every eye on him. Julian basked in the attention for a moment before continuing.

“We’ve dominated cybersecurity, reshaped fintech, and disrupted industries that no one thought could be changed. But now, we’re entering a sector where innovation isn’t just about profit—it’s about life itself.”

Julian paused, letting the weight of his words sink in.

“Carter Innovations is officially launching a bid to acquire Chronolife Corporation, the makers of the cardiac pacemakers. This acquisition will not only cement our place as leaders in medical technology but also give us control over a product that’s revolutionizing healthcare.”

The announcement carried a personal significance that Julian didn’t share with the room. After his own brush with death, the Chronolife pacemaker had become a critical part of his survival. But where others saw a lifesaving device, Julian saw an untapped potential.

“The pacemaker is just the beginning,” Julian declared to the board. “Chronolife’s technology can be integrated with AI, giving us the ability to predict health crises before they occur. Imagine a future where doctors aren’t just reacting to problems but preventing them entirely.”

The room erupted in applause, the executives captivated by Julian’s vision. But Julian wasn’t done.

“This isn’t just about innovation,” he continued. “It’s about domination. Chronolife is a critical piece of the puzzle, and we will do whatever it takes to bring them under our umbrella.”

As the meeting adjourned, the mood was electric. But beneath the surface, not everyone shared Julian’s enthusiasm.

Chronolife’s CEO, Julie Parker, had heard the rumors about Julian’s plans long before the official announcement. When Carter Innovations made their move, offering an aggressive bid to buy the company, Julie pushed back hard.

“Chronolife isn’t for sale,” she told his board members during a tense meeting. “And we’re not going to let Carter Innovations bully us into submission.”

But Julian wasn’t the kind of man to take no for an answer. He doubled down, using every tool in his arsenal to pressure Chronolife into compliance. Corporate espionage, media leaks, and subtle threats became the weapons of his campaign.

“You can’t outsmart me, Julie,” Julian said during a heated phone call. “It’s not a matter of if—it’s a matter of when.”

The night Julian announced his takeover plans to the world, he hosted a grand party at his penthouse. The atmosphere was one of triumph and celebration. The city’s elite mingled over champagne and caviar, toasting to Carter Innovations’ latest conquest.

Dressed in a sharp tailored suit, Julian moved through the crowd like a king among his court. His charm was in full effect, but his eyes betrayed a calculating intensity.

“Chronlife is just the beginning,” Julian confided to a small group of investors. “Their pacemaker technology is brilliant, but they lack the vision to take it to the next level. Once we acquire them, we’ll turn their product into something the world has never seen.”

By the end of the night, Julian stood on the balcony, overlooking the glittering city below. With a glass of scotch in hand, he reflected on his imminent victory. He had outmaneuvered competitors, silenced critics, and even defied death itself.

The very next morning, Julian was found slumped over in his leather chair, lifeless. His housekeeper discovered him during her routine cleaning. A glass of scotch sat on the table beside him, and his phone lay on the carpet. When paramedics arrived, they confirmed he had been dead for hours.

Dr. Ford, Julian’s cardiologist, was asked to certify the death. However, Ford refused without further investigations. “He had a pacemaker fitted,” he explained. “Cardiac arrest doesn’t make sense unless there was catastrophic failure. I want a post-mortem done.”

The post-mortem revealed little. The only significant finding was scarring from an old myocardial infarction—the event that had led to Julian being fitted with the Chronolife's pacemaker. There was no indication of a fresh heart attack, no signs of trauma, and no other physiological explanation for his death.

Detective Grace Mallory received the report and immediately consulted Dr. Ford to make sense of the findings.

Grace met Dr. Ford in his office, the post-mortem report spread out on the desk between them.

“What do you make of this?” she asked.

Ford leaned back in his chair, his expression troubled. “It doesn’t add up. With a pacemaker like Julian’s, even if his heart stopped due to some underlying condition, the device should have restarted it. That’s the entire point of having a pacemaker. The only explanation is device failure.”

“Could it have malfunctioned?” Grace pressed.

“It’s rare,” Price admitted, “but not impossible. These devices are incredibly sophisticated. For it to fail completely… we’d need to investigate further.”

“ What is the next step ?”

Ford hesitated before replying,” We need to access the pacemaker’s logs.The device records every heartbeat, every adjustment, every intervention it makes. If there is a clue about what happened, it will be in those logs.”


With Price’s help, Grace secured the necessary permissions to access the pacemaker’s data. The logs, downloaded directly from Chronolife’s servers, were a detailed record of Julian’s heart activity and the device’s performance.

As Grace and Ford pored over the logs, they found an anamoly that sent a chill down Grace’s spine: a remote command had been issued to deactivate the pacemaker mere minutes before Julian’s death.

“This wasn’t a malfunction,” Grace said quietly. “Someone has shut it down.”

With foul play confirmed, Grace began her investigations by questioning those closest to Julian.

Victor Steele, his betrayed partner, had a long-standing grudge but was in New York at the time of death.
Vanessa Carter, his scorned ex-wife, despised Julian but had been hosting a gala attended by dozens of witnesses.
Alex Carter, his troubled son, had financial struggles but lacked the technical expertise for such a crime.
Mia Ferguson, the former employee, was bitter but was working late that night, as confirmed by her employer.

This left Julie Parker CEO of Chronolife, as the prime suspect. Julie had the motive—protecting her company from scandal—and preventing technical knowledge about pacemaker’s backdoor vulnerability.


Grace confronted Julie Parker, but she denied any involvement, insisting the company’s systems were secure.

“Our devices are built with multiple layers of security,” Julie said. “There’s no way anyone could have tampered with it from the outside.”

Her polished demeanor didn’t convince Grace, but without concrete evidence, she couldn’t prove Julie’s involvement.

Frustrated, Grace turned to SPY, a professional hacker. SPY traced the kill command to Chronolife’s servers but discovered it had been routed through a cloned phone in Mexico to misdirect investigators.

“This was no amateur job,” SPY explained. “The original command came from a device inside Chronolife's headquarters. specifically, from the office of Julie Parker.”

Grace returned to Julie with the new evidence, including digital footprints tying the command to her office. Under pressure, Julie finally broke down.

“You won’t understand,” she said. “Julian was blackmailing us. He found a vulnerability in our system—a backdoor meant for emergencies. If he exposed it, it would have destroyed the company. He also wanted to annex our company to his corporate empire at a throwaway price.”

“So you killed him,” Grace said coldly.

“I didn’t kill him,” Juie insisted. “I hired someone to… neutralize the threat to our company.”

Grace was not convinced about Julie's explanation. She continued digging further into the case.

And lo! She found something that changed everything.

Julie Parker was engaged to Victor Steele-Julian's enstranged business partner!

Victor and Julie had orchestrated the perfect murder.

Julie provided access to ChronoLife’s software and its logs..

Victor funded the operation and arranged for making it untraceable.


He had contacted a hacker infamous for pulling off high-profile cybercrimes. He devised a plan to deactivate Julian’s pacemaker and make the death appear natural.

Victor had transferred fifty thousand dollars in the hacker's account. A copy of the hacker's bank account confirmed this.

The hacker’s precautions included:
a) a cloned phone- relaying the command through a cloned device in Mexico to throw off investigators.
b) layered IPs- routing the command through multiple servers across different countries, erasing logs after the command.
c) fake logs- injecting false entries into the pacemaker’s system to suggest a malfunction rather than deliberate tampering.

Despite these precautions, SPY’s expertise unraveled the scheme, exposing Julie's and hacker’s involvement which later implicated Victor Steele.

Julie Parker, Victor Steele and the hacker were arrested and charged for murder. Chronolife's vulnerability was made public, triggering recalls and lawsuits that destroyed the company. Carter Innovations, already reeling from Julian’s death, faced scrutiny over his unethical dealings.

As Grace closed the case file, her mind turned to the duality of the technology at the heart of the crime. The pacemaker, a marvel of modern medicine, symbolized the best and worst of human innovation. Grace remembered a conversation with Dr. Ford early in the investigation.

“Technology is a double-edged sword,” he had said, leaning back in his chair. “On one side, it saves lives. Think about Julian—without that pacemaker, he would’ve died months ago. But on the other side, that same technology was exploited to end his life.”



Dr. Ford further said “Pacemakers, insulin pumps, even cars—anything connected to a network can be hacked. The better the technology, the more dangerous it is when misused. It’s like giving someone the tools to save a life and a weapon to end one, all in the same package.”

Grace had seen the benefits of innovation firsthand. She thought about the countless lives saved by pacemakers like Julian’s, the families given more time with their loved ones, the global connectivity that allowed experts to collaborate in real time, sharing breakthroughs that advanced society i.e. efficiency, safety, and progress—all driven by technology.


But she had also seen the darker side. Over-reliance on machines made people vulnerable. A single flaw, like Chronolife’s backdoor, could become a weapon. Hackers, motivated by greed or malice, exploited these vulnerabilities, turning tools of healing into instruments of destruction.

“It’s not the technology that’s the problem,” Grace murmured as she stood by her office window, watching the city lights. “It’s the people who wield it.”

Julian Carter’s death, once seen as a tragedy, became a symbol of how unchecked ambition and moral compromise could corrupt even the greatest innovations. As Grace switched off her phone, the green glow of her smartwatch dimmed, reminding her of the fine line between progress and peril.

“Sometimes,” she whispered, “the future isn’t destroyed by our enemies—it’s destroyed by our choices.”

*******

Dr. N.G. Ukadgaonkar,
M.D., D.M.
Neurologist

ngukadgaonkar@gmail.com

9422702030

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