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Sun and Shadow

Safeer Ray
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Submitted to Contest #1 in response to the prompt: ' A long-standing rivalry takes an unexpected turn when circumstances force two opponents to work together.'


Mornings in Banaras were slow awakenings. The ghats hummed with the murmurs of prayer, the splash of oars, the scent of marigold and incense curling through the air. The Ganges flowed like time itself—endless, untamed, witness to every secret carried by the city.
Among the many stories born in its labyrinthine alleys, one stood apart—the story of Rudrapriya and Kamini. Two women. Two rivals. Two flames burning in opposite hues.
Rudrapriya, raised in the quiet confines of the Mahadevi Ashram, had always been different. Though an orphan, she carried herself with a strange certainty, as if she had been chosen for something larger than life. Her voice commanded attention, her eyes burned with defiance, and her dance—her dance was a thing of haunting sorrow.
Kamini, daughter of Pandit Vishweshwaranath Shastri, was the embodiment of discipline. Raised in a house of rigid traditions, she had been sculpted into perfection. Her father, a man of unshakable pride, had made her an artist beyond reproach. Every note she sang, every step she took was immaculate. Flawless. Unquestionable.
To the world, they were sun and shadow—one blinding, the other mysterious. Their rivalry wasn’t just about music and dance. It was a battle of bloodlines and identities, of love and rejection, of belonging and being cast aside.
And like all great rivalries, theirs had begun long ago.
It started in childhood.
Whether it was the Ganga Aarti, the Sanskrit recitations in temple halls, or the annual dance competitions, their names were always pitted against each other. And each time, Kamini won—not because she was better, but because perfection was easier to reward than raw, untamed emotion.
But then came the year they turned fourteen.
The competition was grand—held at the historic ghats, where the steps kissed the river and the whole city gathered to watch. Kamini’s dance was faultless, every movement honed through years of rigorous training. And yet, when Rudrapriya danced, there was something else—something that stirred even the coldest hearts.
That night, Rudrapriya was declared the winner.
Kamini had barely begun to process it when her father’s voice cut through the air.
“This is a mistake.”
The judges hesitated. One by one, hands were forced to bend. Within minutes, the verdict was overturned. The trophy was placed in Kamini’s hands.
Rudrapriya had stood still, expressionless. But something in her had changed forever.
From that day, it wasn’t just about a stage. It was about proving she belonged.
Years passed. The stakes grew higher.
This year, the ‘Sharada Samman’ was being held at the Kashi Vishwanath Temple—a competition of legend, where the winner’s name would be etched into history.
Kamini performed first. Every move was precise, every transition seamless. The audience was enraptured, hanging on to each second of her flawless execution.
Then, Rudrapriya took the stage.
She didn’t just perform. She bared her soul.
There was something unsettling in her eyes, something unspoken in the way her body moved. It wasn’t dance—it was grief, longing, defiance. The air around her seemed to shift, as if the gods themselves paused to listen.
When it ended, there was silence.
Then, the verdict—
“This year’s winner is... both of them.”
A murmur spread through the temple grounds. A tie? Kamini’s jaw tightened. She was not someone who shared her place with anyone.
But before the weight of the moment could sink in—
A scream shattered the night.
“Fire! The temple is on fire!”
Smoke curled from the back of the temple. Flames licked at the ancient wooden pillars. Panic spread like wildfire.
And then—
“My grandson is inside!” an old woman wailed.
The crowd hesitated, stepping back in fear. No one moved.
Except for Rudrapriya.
Without a second thought, she ran toward the flames.
Kamini stood frozen. Her pulse pounded. Then—without knowing why—her feet followed.
Inside, the heat was suffocating. Smoke clouded the air, thick and burning. The wooden ceiling groaned under the weight of the flames.
“There!” Rudrapriya pointed to a small figure, curled up near a shrine.
Kamini’s breath hitched. “We’ll be trapped here!”
“No,” Rudrapriya’s voice was steady. “We’ll get out. Together.”
She reached the child first, pulling him close. But as they turned—
A massive beam collapsed behind them, sealing off the exit.
There was no way out. Smoke curled around them, stealing air, stealing time.
Then, in the midst of the chaos, Rudrapriya did something strange.
She pulled a red thread from her wrist and held it out to Kamini.
“Do you know,” she said, her voice hoarse, “we are not just rivals?”
Kamini frowned. “What?”
“We are sisters.”
The words struck like thunder.
Kamini’s breath caught. “Lies.”
Rudrapriya met her eyes. “No. It’s the truth. The Mother Superior at the Ashram told me everything. Our father—your father—abandoned me. He never acknowledged my existence. Our mother gave birth to me... and then she died. He cast me aside.”
Kamini’s mind reeled.
Her father. The man she worshipped. He had done this?
Before she could respond, another piece of the ceiling cracked, sending sparks raining down.
“We have to get out!” Kamini forced the words out, her throat burning.
There was only one way. A high window, barely within reach.
Kamini squared her shoulders. “I’ll lift you up.”
Rudrapriya hesitated. For the first time, she looked at Kamini—not as a rival, but as a sister.
She climbed, pushing the child through first. Kamini braced herself, helping Rudrapriya up. The moment she reached the ledge—
A splintering sound. A falling beam.
Kamini felt the heat before she saw it.
And then—
Rudrapriya jumped back down.
The impact knocked Kamini aside. She barely had time to register it before she saw Rudrapriya—
Engulfed in flames.
Outside, the crowd screamed.
Morning came. The first light of dawn kissed the waters of the Ganges.
Kamini stood at the river’s edge, fingers curled around a red thread. The same one Rudrapriya had given her.
She stared at it, then at the rising sun.
“We spent our whole lives fighting,” she whispered. “But when I needed you the most, you stood by me.”
She loosened her grip.
The thread drifted, weightless, sinking into the river’s embrace.
From that day, the people of Banaras no longer called her just Kamini.
She was Kamini Rudrapriya.
Because now, sun and shadow had become one.


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I can’t stop thinking about Rudrapriya and Kamini. Their rivalry was so gripping, but the reveal about their past hit me like a ton of bricks. And that fire scene? I was holding my breath the entire time. Just… wow. What a story.

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\"This story made me cry in the best way possible. The tension between the characters was so intense, but the way the story unraveled was just chef’s kiss. The setting, the culture, the emotions—it was all so beautifully done.\"

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\"I started reading this expecting a good rivalry story, but what I got was something so much more. The emotions, the complexity of their bond, the depth of the writing—it’s all stunning. I could feel every moment like I was standing there beside them.\"

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\"I didn’t expect this story to hit me so hard, but here I am, still thinking about it. The way Rudrapriya and Kamini’s relationship evolves from competition to something deeper is so moving. And that ending? My heart shattered. Such a powerful read!\"

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