refrain recounts the author's travels in India as an inexperienced and sensitive young man. The narrative shows wit, intelligence and a facility with words. The style is experimental and literary; and the fascination of the stories told – short stories in verse presenting the anxieties and misfortunes typical of shoestring traveling, and the culture-shock deriving from visiting a very different culture from ones own – carries the careful reader along. A knack for reading this less-than-conventional fast-paced book, which is at once humorous and nightmarish, passionate and detached, is acquired quickly.
"A young man arrives in Delhi with a romanticized view of India, a pocketful of outdated maps, and a money belt begging to be stolen. ... Polley takes us along on a ride that feels cinematic, jammed with sensory explosions that rock the sensibilities.The reader is pulled into the text to experience the chaotic, disordered images of India. The stories work as a sprawling dramatic monologue, one that encompasses numerous states and territories. Polley paints on a large canvas and his brush strokes are fresh, memorable, and cutting edge."
— Kirby Wright, Honolulu, Hawai, Author of Punahou Blues and Moloka'i Nui Ahina
"Polley’s verse betrays the eyes of a true traveler for whom all experience seems new and full of wonder."
-- Review by Zachary Abram, in The Bull Calf, June 2012.